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The Immortal Kingdom [Total system control]
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The journey of an immortal boy, who had his personality erased by God. With an extremely OP system that Marcos has all control, the young man identifies with the memories of the past life and has resolute eyes and his heart is firm as a mountain.
"I WILL LIVE A COOL LIFE!"
-- Classement
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Really cool, cool idea please keep it up and do 20 a day or something like that. Thanks! ------------------------------------------------------------------------
hope that story will not be drop cause I pretty love everything MC Op but he doesn't abuse it more like he takes it as a quest but doesn't overdo it but sometimes take advantage of it its a good equilibrium of an op mc and not op.
Good story but you are deliberately supressing the Mc, he ahs an extremely op system with a total control over it but still i Have read more than 20 chapters and yet I am sure he can not easily beat someone at the 2nd stage of cultivation at all. Spoilers ahead: When he was fighting the village head or even the guards, he could have an easy way tp win but you made him almost die in that battle and yet he didn't really gain anything from it.
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Volume 0 : Auxiliary Volume
Volume 1 : A new beginning!
- 1 Congratulations! You are the 10kkk°th death! (edited 5 years ago
- 2 Transmigrated! 5 years ago
- 3 Eu Compro* 5 years ago
- 4 Eu nasci a dez mil anos atrás* 5 years ago
- 5 Tá Escrito* 5 years ago
- 6 Corpo Sensual* 5 years ago
- 7 RISE* 5 years ago
- 8 Chapter 8 5 years ago
- 9 chapter 9 5 years ago
- 10 Kavookavala!* 5 years ago
- 11 KING MODE 5 years ago
- 12 Robbed!? (edited) 5 years ago
- 13 A new path! 5 years ago
- 14 Blood and Thunder! 5 years ago
- 15 Blood and Thunder! (02) 5 years ago
- 16 ''I should have created a mission'' (edited) 5 years ago
- 17 Let the wind blow 5 years ago
- 18 Bitter truth! (Edited) 5 years ago
- 19 Carnaval! 5 years ago
- 20 A Mediator. 5 years ago
- 21 1 year! 5 years ago
- 22 Dungeon time 4 years ago
- 23 Pig point. 4 years ago
- 24 Hunt the hunter 3 years ago
- 25 Back home, but not for long. (edited with more content) 3 years ago
- 26 Whenever it rains, problems arise. 3 years ago
- 27 The clash. 3 years ago
love the story keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!