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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
The end must be an hallucination. Brutus is dead to me. How on earth did he find her. That's a spoiler, I know she found peace and deserves it. There's evil in the world. This one thrum** it. Organized gang raping of women in prisons for sports and money. At the beginning I found the novel filled with graphic and sordid scenes. But with time it became better as she was dealing with the sick mother****ers.
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Ok the story is not bad at all. It's not for the faint of heart though. The main character has to do what it takes to stay alive and get to where she is now. I was getting a little confused when she was in real time and flashbacks. But great job author.
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This is not a story for the faint-hearted. This is not a story about love and romance, so dreamy-eyed readers back off. You have been warned. If you like a story about real life - bloody, grim, ********, uncensored life. There’s just a few grammatical errors like usage on correct pronouns but does not affect the story. Read at your own risk.
There was a lot of grammar issues. Some parts were confusing as to what was going on. May want to have a line to differentiate past to present. Overall not too bad. I’m just a little irritated trying to get to the present story. There’s a lot of jumping back and forth from past to present. Although I understand why, I’m trying to get to the main story! Lol.
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It's an interesting start for a novel, although I'm concerned whether you want it past tense or present tense. So far reading into the 2nd chapter, I notice a lot of pauses that shouldn't be there. Your sentence structure should have a nice flow that runs together til the end. (I'm bad too so this is just an *******ish review, sorry!) Emotional description are a wee bit all over but it's an easy fix as you keep writing and playing around with it. Overrall, it's not a bad novel! An exciting starting chapter into the series but remember to keep writing and learning at the same time!
I know it is shameless to write yourself a Review and even With five Stars.. But nobody writes anything.. I wrote already the half and its of course Not all open :) I think the half is reached AT 27th of this month.. I hope you enjoy and give me also reviews 😁😁❤️
Hey! Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *）We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email.
$115,500 for the Best Adventure Novels +Get Hardcover Publish Hey Writers! Come to check out this adventure novel writing competition, both new and published stories can participate! This competition is mainly looking for four genres: Fantasy, Urban, Game, and Sci-fi. You can either submit your published works, rewrite some previous ideas, or create a new story if any given examples or tips inspired you! Web-fiction or Light Novel writing experience is desired, so you might be the winner! For more information, you may visit: https://bit.ly/2ObQnRy or contact Email haiweiweian1994@163.com
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
The end must be an hallucination. Brutus is dead to me. How on earth did he find her. That's a spoiler, I know she found peace and deserves it. There's evil in the world. This one thrum** it. Organized gang raping of women in prisons for sports and money. At the beginning I found the novel filled with graphic and sordid scenes. But with time it became better as she was dealing with the sick mother****ers.
Spoiler de révélation The story isn't bad but pls come complete it. 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😺😺😺😺🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
Ok the story is not bad at all. It's not for the faint of heart though. The main character has to do what it takes to stay alive and get to where she is now. I was getting a little confused when she was in real time and flashbacks. But great job author.
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Spoiler de révélation This is not a story for the faint-hearted. This is not a story about love and romance, so dreamy-eyed readers back off. You have been warned. If you like a story about real life - bloody, grim, ********, uncensored life. There’s just a few grammatical errors like usage on correct pronouns but does not affect the story. Read at your own risk.
There was a lot of grammar issues. Some parts were confusing as to what was going on. May want to have a line to differentiate past to present. Overall not too bad. I’m just a little irritated trying to get to the present story. There’s a lot of jumping back and forth from past to present. Although I understand why, I’m trying to get to the main story! Lol.
Just some random dude hais ill do everything for some SS ....i really hate thjs 140 wordssssss damm dak fack fsck dack faxk jajn jsjsjjs sjsksns ks s nsjs skkska
It's an interesting start for a novel, although I'm concerned whether you want it past tense or present tense. So far reading into the 2nd chapter, I notice a lot of pauses that shouldn't be there. Your sentence structure should have a nice flow that runs together til the end. (I'm bad too so this is just an *******ish review, sorry!) Emotional description are a wee bit all over but it's an easy fix as you keep writing and playing around with it. Overrall, it's not a bad novel! An exciting starting chapter into the series but remember to keep writing and learning at the same time!
I know it is shameless to write yourself a Review and even With five Stars.. But nobody writes anything.. I wrote already the half and its of course Not all open :) I think the half is reached AT 27th of this month.. I hope you enjoy and give me also reviews 😁😁❤️
Hey! Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *）We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email.