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Please more chapters I really like this story. Its a lot better than the other ones about the seven deadly sins 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀
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this is a very good novel please continue to post more chapters in the future. eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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NO HAREM PLEEEASE THE STORY WILL BE BETTER WITHOUT IT JUST ONE OR TWO GIRLS ENOUGH AND DON'T TAKE ANYONE'S GIRL TO GIVE IT TO HIM JUST GIVE HIM A GIRL THAT DOESN'T HAVE ANYONE LIKE JERICO MELASCULA
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After completing the entire arc of the 7 sins you could send him to another unmarried man like Marvel ... what do you think of that????????????????
Great story and oc, love the mystery behind ‘Jax’s’ new life. ......................l.......-cuz that’s all I have to say-..........
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well if you ask i think A is the best choice for that he will train himself and then his magic and become strong after he come back make him shock them by his new power and strong unique magic
Pffft?! Sin of love? 5 star for me!!! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem!
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With the way the original nantsu no taizai story is, I personally want it to be A. I can see some curious interactions with option B, however, it would make more sense for them to spread out and fan away from each other. So I will go with option A.
Keep adding the good work😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
The awesome novel I like it very much because I am a big fan of NNT so continue and don't drop it or I THE LION SIN OF PRIDE SHALL MAKE YOU SUFFER
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The rest are rated low since there is not much to go on for now. Love is not a sin but one of the seven Virtues whose counterpart is lust one of the seven sins. Making the title quite misleading.
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The story so far has been entertaining to say the least! I would say it is worth checking out if you have the time. To me it was the could have slowed down a little.
Please more chapters I really like this story. Its a lot better than the other ones about the seven deadly sins 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀
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I love this novel/fanfic it is really good plez do more uploads 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😆😆😆😆😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀
this is a very good novel please continue to post more chapters in the future. eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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NO HAREM PLEEEASE THE STORY WILL BE BETTER WITHOUT IT JUST ONE OR TWO GIRLS ENOUGH AND DON'T TAKE ANYONE'S GIRL TO GIVE IT TO HIM JUST GIVE HIM A GIRL THAT DOESN'T HAVE ANYONE LIKE JERICO MELASCULA
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After completing the entire arc of the 7 sins you could send him to another unmarried man like Marvel ... what do you think of that????????????????
Great story and oc, love the mystery behind ‘Jax’s’ new life. ......................l.......-cuz that’s all I have to say-..........
Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém
well if you ask i think A is the best choice for that he will train himself and then his magic and become strong after he come back make him shock them by his new power and strong unique magic
Pffft?! Sin of love? 5 star for me!!! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem!
good one please don't drop it because we like it very much so again pleaaase don't ever think of dropping it pretty pleaaase 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
With the way the original nantsu no taizai story is, I personally want it to be A. I can see some curious interactions with option B, however, it would make more sense for them to spread out and fan away from each other. So I will go with option A.
Keep adding the good work😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
The awesome novel I like it very much because I am a big fan of NNT so continue and don't drop it or I THE LION SIN OF PRIDE SHALL MAKE YOU SUFFER
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Sin of love 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍more more more more updates more updates updates updates more more More more More more updates updates updates updates more updates more more updates mode selling updates updates updates updates more updates more updates more more more more more updates
The rest are rated low since there is not much to go on for now. Love is not a sin but one of the seven Virtues whose counterpart is lust one of the seven sins. Making the title quite misleading.
IS there going to be a harem Pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls Pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls Pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls Pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls Pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls Pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls Pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls
The story so far has been entertaining to say the least! I would say it is worth checking out if you have the time. To me it was the could have slowed down a little.