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I highly recommend this novel. Even though there's still not many chapters as the time I'm writing this review, I must say that it's very enjoyable to read. All in all, It's romance novel, with some really good comedy, I had a couple of laughs while reading. It has some mistery going on, but what really made me enjoy the novel were the characters. All of them has a lot of personality that really make them stick out from the rest of the crowd. BTW, IceGirl, you're a slacker 😏
Everything about this story is awesome! A good storyline plus good characters will equal success!! I can’t wait for more. I only marked down the world background just a little but it’s still early. GOOD WORK KIDDO!😄🎉
I recommend everyone to read this amazing story! You will relate with the mc and cry and laugh alongside her. The story development has a good rhythm, the characters are compelling and the world background is coming up nicely. It's really too early to speak about the stability of updates. But so far the author has uploaded four chapters in two days so if she manages to keep up its gonna be great. The only low point is the writing quality but it's understable in a beginner author that she is not a native English speaker. The story is perfectly readable and it is expected the author would be improving the writing quality as the novel advances. Overall, a very interesting novel with a lot of potential! Keep up the good work author! And you reader, what are you waiting for? Quickly go to read the story! I promise its not going to dissapoint you!
The story is still in its early stages so I can't really give a proper review about development etc. But so far the story is somewhat interesting, given that at the outset the MC knows when she's gonna die so we'll know too...the characters aren't so bad, the brothers are a good laugh with their arguments (for me, at least) It has potential, and I'd like to see how it goes from here.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact magnoliaringdom@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out！
I highly recommend this novel. Even though there's still not many chapters as the time I'm writing this review, I must say that it's very enjoyable to read. All in all, It's romance novel, with some really good comedy, I had a couple of laughs while reading. It has some mistery going on, but what really made me enjoy the novel were the characters. All of them has a lot of personality that really make them stick out from the rest of the crowd. BTW, IceGirl, you're a slacker 😏
Everything about this story is awesome! A good storyline plus good characters will equal success!! I can’t wait for more. I only marked down the world background just a little but it’s still early. GOOD WORK KIDDO!😄🎉
I recommend everyone to read this amazing story! You will relate with the mc and cry and laugh alongside her. The story development has a good rhythm, the characters are compelling and the world background is coming up nicely. It's really too early to speak about the stability of updates. But so far the author has uploaded four chapters in two days so if she manages to keep up its gonna be great. The only low point is the writing quality but it's understable in a beginner author that she is not a native English speaker. The story is perfectly readable and it is expected the author would be improving the writing quality as the novel advances. Overall, a very interesting novel with a lot of potential! Keep up the good work author! And you reader, what are you waiting for? Quickly go to read the story! I promise its not going to dissapoint you!
The story is still in its early stages so I can't really give a proper review about development etc. But so far the story is somewhat interesting, given that at the outset the MC knows when she's gonna die so we'll know too...the characters aren't so bad, the brothers are a good laugh with their arguments (for me, at least) It has potential, and I'd like to see how it goes from here.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact magnoliaringdom@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out！