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Ancient God and Alchemist
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A boy is born without any Dantain meaning he couldn't store any of the Qi. His clan regarded him as trash but little did they know he had a secret that would affect not only his clan or his world but the entire universe.
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Great development so far. Hope there isn't too shifting of point of view. Otherwise, it looks like it will be a great story. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.