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King Of Bliss
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Synopsis
I changed the title of (Mafia's Girl.)
A girl name Scarlett and she is an Assassin to kill evil. She always been the strongest and she believe in hope. Then she have been kidnapped by the biggest Gang in the world.
What will happened to her when the leader of the Mafia sees in her?
Michael King. Mafia Leader that wanted someone for a long time and her name is Scarlett. He knew her for a long time, and he knew her before she knows him. He become more Obsessed with her and she never knew.
What will happened when he takes her out of no where in a bar that she thought of anything?
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Please more chapters!!! And write it more please I’m still waiting for it to get more exciting. Did you get sick ? Did you have a writers block?
You rushed it you have to make it smooth. A little more detail and you have to develop the both and climax. Aside from that I like it. You doing good so far just need more work. You got this you can do it. I believe you have talent for it.
The story plot is amazing. Only if the ending will change it will look nice as the ending has no sense in it. the character background should be explained more and the romance scenes are quite less and boring. Except these rest all are nice and good .