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one of the funniest system novel, need more chapters //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
Hello, guys, Arthur sama is here It is the first time I writing a novel so plz o easy on me chapter update may be slow so I sorry in advance and enjoy it
love this novel please don't drop it and more chapter, please make hero a little evil 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140
plz update more chapters I like the funny talk between the system and user so plz update more and more plz plz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
well a system novel with evil mc I m in go go go go go go I m waiting for more chaps writer update soon more chaps more chaps more chaps more chaps more and more
the update is slow but the story got potential so don't drop it in middle and 140 characters 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140
the story is good and the background is well defined and mc is a little poor soul but that system got some potential so write more chapters dude.
writing Quality is ok Story development is also nice Character design is great World background is also well explained but y is update is slow
need more chapters update is slow the story is interesting and the background is good and mc is an army cadet. I like the army and again more chapters
So the first three chapters were a type of prolonged. well It's looking interesting and System is little funny but our mc is really pity full when it came to relatives and now he betrayed by his friend. Make our Mc evil hahaha
Story design is different than other i think its gonna be fun to read . I think hero is gonna be cool . And for a advice to all internet users dont mess up with ur internet cable xD Need more chapters update soon
Unique story from Synopsis description and only read first chap is good and have potential please update soon waiting for more chap chap chap sigh 140 words
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
one of the funniest system novel, need more chapters //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
Hello, guys, Arthur sama is here It is the first time I writing a novel so plz o easy on me chapter update may be slow so I sorry in advance and enjoy it
love this novel please don't drop it and more chapter, please make hero a little evil 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140
plz update more chapters I like the funny talk between the system and user so plz update more and more plz plz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
well a system novel with evil mc I m in go go go go go go I m waiting for more chaps writer update soon more chaps more chaps more chaps more chaps more and more
the update is slow but the story got potential so don't drop it in middle and 140 characters 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140
the story is good and the background is well defined and mc is a little poor soul but that system got some potential so write more chapters dude.
writing Quality is ok Story development is also nice Character design is great World background is also well explained but y is update is slow
need more chapters update is slow the story is interesting and the background is good and mc is an army cadet. I like the army and again more chapters
So the first three chapters were a type of prolonged. well It's looking interesting and System is little funny but our mc is really pity full when it came to relatives and now he betrayed by his friend. Make our Mc evil hahaha
Story design is different than other i think its gonna be fun to read . I think hero is gonna be cool . And for a advice to all internet users dont mess up with ur internet cable xD Need more chapters update soon
Unique story from Synopsis description and only read first chap is good and have potential please update soon waiting for more chap chap chap sigh 140 words
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.