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Would love if you made another bloodborne or just a soulsborne fanfiction ...................................................................
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Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.
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Sooooo amazing!!!! 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀This story is just so awesome the more I read. 😁😁😁😁 It's amazing how the MC tries hard to correct his mistakes and learns from it too. 😉 Each time he starts from beginging and tries to use new tricks and methods 😮 Though he gets annoyed but for me it intrills me to read how he reaches were he stopped 😉 I really hope for more chapters. PLEASE AUTHOR!!!
Nothing else to say but thIs is a great read and you quickly get absorbed in this book and the characters. 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻❤️❤️
One of the best novels made on one of the best games i know.. what's not to like ??.. The story progression is similar to the game but also different due to extra characters and insights we never had before.. The back stories are modeled good and the way the people interact with each other is pretty realistic.. 10/10 would recommend... Also i can't get enough of it so more plz 😂😂
Amazing story and I love that the Author stayed very true to the source materials. Did a great job at setting the Gothic atmosphere of Yharnam. I love the main character as he is just like any other noobs playing the game for the first time. Unknowing, first death is the tutorial, and learn every time that he(we as well) die in the game to not make the same mistakes as before. I also love that the main character is as confused of the world of Bloodborne as most people that plays but learn more as we and he talk to various people and obtain information. (Or watching a Vatti video about the lore.)
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It s bad. The character are all bad. Can't get behind them. And story is mostly a rehash of the gameplay so not much new here either. A very bad fan fic novel.
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I cane here after reading rise of the undead legion. Is this story dropped or on hiatus? Just looking for details. I see the good reviews but I don’t want to get entrenched in the story to find out it is discontinued.
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God there’s no easy way to explain this but I am in love with this, thank you so much for writing this beautiful story. And also **** amygdalas... Ps: fear the old blood
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I was pleasany surprised when I found this. I have some knowledge of the game and the lore but it's very limited. I was worried that this would be too game like (a character progressing through a linear storyline like in the game). But I'm happy to be wrong! I think I find this so interesting is due to the fact I don't actually know much of the lore. Also, the beginning sets up the story very well and gives the needed background so you are not confused later on. Reccomend!
I am not good at summing up, but before saying my personal opinion, I will direct my score point by point. About the writing, it's good, you could almost say that it looks like a writing from a professional and, I can say it's improving a little every day. Although I'm not very experienced to analyze this kind of thing. Upgrade? You could say it's almost a daily update. Except for some improper events (like any person), but it is kept up to date. To the point that it is an almost insane rhythm. Characters? Bearing in mind that it is based on the game of bloodborne and, it has 3 fixed characters developing (the others of the beginning do not count them, but they had their part). They are not at all flat characters or devoid of carizma. In others it could directly describe that a character is "charismatic" and then in the development does not show it at all. here? It will not give Spoilers. But they are continually developing, the characters have their personal "evolution" in several aspects and, it goes deeper into them chapter by chapter. He has no illogical moments to his "character", they have that "spark", which one would say could say that he "feels" like real people and not just a "character". Really satisfactory. World Background? Well, it's bloodborn XD. I do not know how to say it, but it keeps well the original, thetrical, helpless, desquisiante, bloody, intriguing and with a hint of madness. For other aspects, everything is simply excellently detailed, including "zones" that are not found in the original game. There were only 2 parts that were somewhat confusing, but only that from chapter 1 to chapter 177. It is not something that one would have to fix a lot. ---- I already said that I was not good at summarizing ... Personal opinion. It is a good story, it contains moments of action, reflections, recapitulation of past events, necessary transit chapters and, at the right time, some literary resources are used to make the matter as fluent as possible. It takes a while to get to the part where the author can take greater liberties to develop more than what the "game" is. He also put his own adaptation of the original mechanics and, I can say that it is a nice result. Taking into account that it is based on a "world" already created, I would say that it is an excellent job. Also, how the original game is very "ambiguous" in many ways. The author takes liberties based on his own theories, "filling" possible gaps in which he can work. But without losing the ecence of history.
Its OK but need more of d insight as per the suspense should be charged up. For now just one head but wen it has more heads coming to make one it would get more trilled.
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The story is awesome and i like the plot very much. Thanks to the writer for such an interesting story. Keep it up. And love the story. The beginning of the story is like i am living it, i haven't read many chapters but the ones that i have read...they are just mind blowing.
The story is turning out to be awesome and interesting.The only problem I have now is about the updates.One chapter per day makes the story slow.Hope the author will improve and atleast give us more chapters on weekends.All in all,thanks for the chapters.
This novel is very interesting. It is a fan fiction that respects the original story and expands it in such a way that you want to know what will happen. This novel has awakened my interest in playing the game.
The chapters have stopped flowing as they used to.Still waiting for the update,but I can't complain how the story is developing.So far,it seems we have three plots,Surgit,Karla and Francis'...hope as the story goes these three characters will meet again.
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It' a great fan fic, with a good way to tell a story we already know, in ways we won't expect........................................................
Greatly structrued, a good read, worth the time.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And now I feel an overwhelming need to play some bloodbourne. Dang video games distracting me from my books. I very much approve this book, even if I do have to read it chapter by chapter.
Wow not bad I so recommend this story to all come one and all to READ this novel this is a good read😜 fun, exciting, scary HORROR!! 😖😖😖😝
As the story goes,..to much suspense and one needs to fully concentrate when reading.The MC keeps on running in circles and never truly advancing like his other friends.He has forgotten why he went to Yharman.
I am completely engrossed in your novel! It's a literary masterpiece that deserves far more consideration than it does at the moment. The writing is just outstanding, the plot is deftly constructed, and the characters are masterfully drawn. It's absurd that more people haven't had the opportunity to thoroughly enjoy your work yet. I'm excited to work with you to create a plan to make it more visible and get the recognition it so richly merits. Together, let's design a strategy that will present your art to the world
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Would love if you made another bloodborne or just a soulsborne fanfiction ...................................................................
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Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.
Spoiler de révélation Sooooo amazing!!!! 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀This story is just so awesome the more I read. 😁😁😁😁 It's amazing how the MC tries hard to correct his mistakes and learns from it too. 😉 Each time he starts from beginging and tries to use new tricks and methods 😮 Though he gets annoyed but for me it intrills me to read how he reaches were he stopped 😉 I really hope for more chapters. PLEASE AUTHOR!!!
Nothing else to say but thIs is a great read and you quickly get absorbed in this book and the characters. 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻❤️❤️
One of the best novels made on one of the best games i know.. what's not to like ??.. The story progression is similar to the game but also different due to extra characters and insights we never had before.. The back stories are modeled good and the way the people interact with each other is pretty realistic.. 10/10 would recommend... Also i can't get enough of it so more plz 😂😂
Amazing story and I love that the Author stayed very true to the source materials. Did a great job at setting the Gothic atmosphere of Yharnam. I love the main character as he is just like any other noobs playing the game for the first time. Unknowing, first death is the tutorial, and learn every time that he(we as well) die in the game to not make the same mistakes as before. I also love that the main character is as confused of the world of Bloodborne as most people that plays but learn more as we and he talk to various people and obtain information. (Or watching a Vatti video about the lore.)
Spoiler de révélation It s bad. The character are all bad. Can't get behind them. And story is mostly a rehash of the gameplay so not much new here either. A very bad fan fic novel.
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I cane here after reading rise of the undead legion. Is this story dropped or on hiatus? Just looking for details. I see the good reviews but I don’t want to get entrenched in the story to find out it is discontinued.
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God there’s no easy way to explain this but I am in love with this, thank you so much for writing this beautiful story. And also **** amygdalas... Ps: fear the old blood
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I was pleasany surprised when I found this. I have some knowledge of the game and the lore but it's very limited. I was worried that this would be too game like (a character progressing through a linear storyline like in the game). But I'm happy to be wrong! I think I find this so interesting is due to the fact I don't actually know much of the lore. Also, the beginning sets up the story very well and gives the needed background so you are not confused later on. Reccomend!
I am not good at summing up, but before saying my personal opinion, I will direct my score point by point. About the writing, it's good, you could almost say that it looks like a writing from a professional and, I can say it's improving a little every day. Although I'm not very experienced to analyze this kind of thing. Upgrade? You could say it's almost a daily update. Except for some improper events (like any person), but it is kept up to date. To the point that it is an almost insane rhythm. Characters? Bearing in mind that it is based on the game of bloodborne and, it has 3 fixed characters developing (the others of the beginning do not count them, but they had their part). They are not at all flat characters or devoid of carizma. In others it could directly describe that a character is "charismatic" and then in the development does not show it at all. here? It will not give Spoilers. But they are continually developing, the characters have their personal "evolution" in several aspects and, it goes deeper into them chapter by chapter. He has no illogical moments to his "character", they have that "spark", which one would say could say that he "feels" like real people and not just a "character". Really satisfactory. World Background? Well, it's bloodborn XD. I do not know how to say it, but it keeps well the original, thetrical, helpless, desquisiante, bloody, intriguing and with a hint of madness. For other aspects, everything is simply excellently detailed, including "zones" that are not found in the original game. There were only 2 parts that were somewhat confusing, but only that from chapter 1 to chapter 177. It is not something that one would have to fix a lot. ---- I already said that I was not good at summarizing ... Personal opinion. It is a good story, it contains moments of action, reflections, recapitulation of past events, necessary transit chapters and, at the right time, some literary resources are used to make the matter as fluent as possible. It takes a while to get to the part where the author can take greater liberties to develop more than what the "game" is. He also put his own adaptation of the original mechanics and, I can say that it is a nice result. Taking into account that it is based on a "world" already created, I would say that it is an excellent job. Also, how the original game is very "ambiguous" in many ways. The author takes liberties based on his own theories, "filling" possible gaps in which he can work. But without losing the ecence of history.
Its OK but need more of d insight as per the suspense should be charged up. For now just one head but wen it has more heads coming to make one it would get more trilled.
Spoiler de révélation The story is awesome and i like the plot very much. Thanks to the writer for such an interesting story. Keep it up. And love the story. The beginning of the story is like i am living it, i haven't read many chapters but the ones that i have read...they are just mind blowing.
The story is turning out to be awesome and interesting.The only problem I have now is about the updates.One chapter per day makes the story slow.Hope the author will improve and atleast give us more chapters on weekends.All in all,thanks for the chapters.
This novel is very interesting. It is a fan fiction that respects the original story and expands it in such a way that you want to know what will happen. This novel has awakened my interest in playing the game.
The chapters have stopped flowing as they used to.Still waiting for the update,but I can't complain how the story is developing.So far,it seems we have three plots,Surgit,Karla and Francis'...hope as the story goes these three characters will meet again.
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It' a great fan fic, with a good way to tell a story we already know, in ways we won't expect........................................................
Greatly structrued, a good read, worth the time.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And now I feel an overwhelming need to play some bloodbourne. Dang video games distracting me from my books. I very much approve this book, even if I do have to read it chapter by chapter.
Wow not bad I so recommend this story to all come one and all to READ this novel this is a good read😜 fun, exciting, scary HORROR!! 😖😖😖😝
As the story goes,..to much suspense and one needs to fully concentrate when reading.The MC keeps on running in circles and never truly advancing like his other friends.He has forgotten why he went to Yharman.
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