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I'd give this a five out of five up to chapter five (Only five chapters has been posted so far.) The grammar and writing is smooth and great. The characters have distinct characteristics. The story is intriguing and makes me anticipate what's going to happen next... Don't want to spoil anything here. Keep up the good work!!!
I am a dog I love spring rolls! I give you 5 stars! Keep it up! Write more and publish chapters everyday! Fried spring rolls is the best food! Fried spring rolls is best when dipped on sweet and spicy sauce!
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I like it! Quite an interesting angle to have two MCs from the onstart and I think it has good potential. The language is smooth and strong, and very descriptive to help the reader understand the setting of each scene. The origin story of greed and gluttony makes you want to know how it will pan out in the two characters' lives. Will you be providing a bit more background to the world? Eg in the auxiliary chapters? Keep going, it's great so far!
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- 1 Gods, Kings and Outcasts 6 years ago
- 2 Hunted 6 years ago
- 3 Dead and Alive 6 years ago
- 4 Greed and Gluttony (1) 6 years ago
- 5 Greed and Gluttony (2) 6 years ago
- 6 Reflection 6 years ago
- 7 A Walk In The Woods 6 years ago
- 8 Possessed By Demons 6 years ago
- 9 In Mothers Eyes 6 years ago
- 10 Books & Leeches 6 years ago
- 11 Do We Have A Deal? 6 years ago
- 12 The Book Of Greed 6 years ago
- 13 Dinner For Four 6 years ago
- 14 Welcome Home Kids 6 years ago
- 15 Silence 6 years ago
- 16 Chance 6 years ago
- 17 Another Plate 6 years ago
- 18 The Safety Of Rules 6 years ago
- 19 The Demon or The Smart? 6 years ago
- 20 Think of Them Like Favours 6 years ago
- 21 The World is a Circle 6 years ago
- 22 A Secret For A Secret 6 years ago
- 23 Wanna See Something Cool? 6 years ago
- 24 I Forgot To Say 6 years ago
- 25 Bad For My Health 6 years ago
- 26 A Holiday Sounds Nice 6 years ago
- 27 Too Easy 6 years ago
- 28 No! Wait! I’m coming! 6 years ago
Pretty good story so far, very well written with decent descriptions, etc. Probably one of the better ones, in terms of grammar and spelling, on this site. Keep writing, hope you win the contest.