Ageless as Time

How would you feel if you woke up in a body of a 14 year old girl with a pale utterly white & smooth skin like porcelain, a chest flatter than a washboard, all the hair in your body are white, in short a walking photocopy paper. The only distinctive future are the amber eyes with dark red pupils.
Our Anina Ziya Ulyana Love von Holstain y Malvar in short Azul a black haired with honey colored skin lady, a novelist at 30(Virgin) a half Vampire & Witch had witness a fight between werewolf, vampire, witch & hunter. Amazed & enlighten for her next book. Decided to collect writing materials by observing this action pack & tenacious fight. Our passerby Azul almost clap her hands in joy to the scene unfolding in front of her. Unsatisfied with her viewing area she move closer to have a greater view forgetting the word “caution “.
Our passerby human self was accidentally badly injure before she knows it her world turn dark.
After eon of years of sleep she was awaken, found herself looking at a 14 years old girl in the mirror. Her price black silky hair, lovely skin, black eyes & chest of c-cup are all gone. This androgynous appearance shock her….(⁰₀⁰)
Outside of her home shock her….(⁰₀⁰)
Her twin brother popularity shock her.. (⁰₀⁰)
Her father drastic changes shock her.. (⁰₀⁰)
Her unchanged mother shock her…(⁰₀⁰)
Her going to school shock her…(⁰₀⁰)
At a certain coffee shop
Hey… she face a blushing guy from head to foot
Yes…. Emotionless reply (-_-)
Can I call you A…..Azul?
Em too white to be called Azul
Ohhh… so can I call you White?
Azul (“_”)
Boy ???
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This is my very first novel, English is not my native tongue... I hope you guys can pin point the mistake in grammar.... thank you