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meh, started good but like others side fell off after a couple hundred chapters. male characters always made out to be villains while the only other characters of interest around the mc are all women. but the main thing is that the release rate is too inconsistent that makes the progress of the book ridiculously slow. at this point it'll be another 10 years before you even get through an arc. i dropped it because it felt like the storyline was no longer planned out and random stuff kept happening. it was better in the beginning before all the magic stuff.
This Review is After 350+ Chapters. Novel is very Overrated. The plot is not consistent. Also it feels like the Author is kind of confused on how he wants to portray his MC. Cuz the MCs personality is constantly switching for no reason, either make him anti-hero or just normal. Secondly, Author keeps introducing new characters and every one of them have no personality or are annoying for no reason. Another thing is the Gender ratio is very skewered. In a apocalypse setting like this you would expect the the less physically weaker females to be less in number. But every character the author pulls 9/10 its a female. I am convinced the author is feminist.(not that its a bad thing) Also every interaction feels Very forceful. The world building is fine. But one thing is how does he keep pulling magical stuff out of nothing in a Zombie apocalypse based novel. Its almost as if he suddenly wanted magical stuff to happen. The Novels first hundred chapter are the only ones i enjoyed. Overall was very excited about this novel and its setting but the author could not keep things consistent and kept pulling plots filled with plot holes. For those of you who want pure zombie apocalypse vibes and that type of power setting, this novel is not it.
This is more a question than it is a comment. i've read up to chapter 13 and I've browsed some chapter around the 50s to see how's it going later on. I really enjoy the detail, world building and logical explanation behind everything. Before delving further in the story, I wanted to know, when does mark get his power, how slow-paced or fast paced is the story. I'm pondering if I'll read it now or later. I'm more into meaningful evolution that you can see some important changes, pets and game-like elements. Even if the story doesn't have them I'll probably read it later, I just don't want to start reading lots of chapter just to start something else and put this one aside for a few months/years because I might not come back after if I'm too far into it. Thank you !
I'm not really interested. this book has popped up frequently in my free to read. it just doesn't interest me. You might like it or might not. I just want it to stop taking up an opportunity for me to read something I'm actually interested in.
I didn't get past the first chapter. The writing was just too bad for me. Either the writer isn't good with English or the translation is extra sub par. Could be a good story but I'm not willing to read it as it is currently written.
I've read up to chapter 1104. I'm really hooked in on the story and have been enjoying following the mcs journey.
I don't like how mc gets NTR left and right, if don't like the story where mc gets NTR it's not for you.
The only reason why I am dropping it at chapter 70 is because it's tooooo cringe The chapter mia introduced it's started to become cringe and it's too much not little and as I progress it become more cringe And only girls get all the powers 😂 mc is surrounded by girls and all of them are cringe mc have very unique power but he is also cringe Writer is very good but sometimes he forgot that we have to use commonsense, mc is perfect from the start and Writer give power to only girls which I hate the most because they are the reason of cringeness It look like author is writing it for 12 ,13 year old boy's
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Come on man dnt do this to me please 😭😭😭 120 chapters in 1 year..author bro please write faster..book is gud. Idk what happened to u bt dnt listen to idiots. It was bumpy in the beginning, but it got good later on
overall speaking, very good. everything is fleshed out, plotholes are nonexistent most of the time, and the story sucks you in. i do hope that the mistakes regarding how the eye in charge of mark is referred to will be fixed.
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Nice story! Keep up the good work! Can you please recommend something to read like this one? I like apocalypse + kingdom building genre so please kind sir can you suggest any stories related to that?
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With the speed with which the author writes new chapters, perhaps my grandchildren will be able to read the novel in full... Potential plot branches are interesting to me, but the plot is stalling.
انا خائب الامل لما تشوه الاسلام ترتدى الحجاب بسبب التقاليد الحجاب فرض لكن نحن لا نجبرهن على ارتداءه فلن نحاسب مكانهن مع ان تقيمى عالى لاكن ما زلت حزينا
Great novel don't give up on it 👍 great novel don't give up on it 👍 Great novel don't give up on it 👍 great novel don't give up on it 👍
Dude, I have nothing to say. Just go read it A true masterpiece, perfect writing, perfect storyline and steady build-up.Also prolly my best MC😂 Yep, read it
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Okay, if anyone reads this that has read the novel, please clear up some stuff for me. 1.) I keep seeing mixed messaged but apparently the FL gets r*ped??2.) At first the novel wasn't a harem and now it is?3.) Is this worth reading?
Trash. The author has a disgusting f€ti$h where he likes it when the love interest gets r4₽€d by gangsters so much that she needs to be “cleaned up” by another character. Truly disgusting, author. I guess I can only hope that you do the world a favor by never trying to create something ever again.
This book is worth a read in my option except for the ultra slow character power development and MC even with a cheat code and not fully utilising itAnd author have u forgotten about the black dragon mutegene stone that Mark has ?? 😳
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To be honest beside the unbearable and listless muslim bashing which showcasts the small mindedness of the author, the story is medicore. But as soon as i saw every chapter the muslim woman was ashamed of her origins and was degrading some religious things as culture and mixing both i had the urge to just vomit. Pls dont forcefully insert your political or religious prejudices in ur work u are destroying them. I found the idea nice but sadly I cant read every chapter the same bs so yeah bye. For me this is the same as the usual Chinese propaganda thats found in every second chinese novel
Awesome book must read, I wish there were more zombie/ apocalypse books out there
The story is good but it starts to get boring and dull when Mark got teleported to fight The Great One, there's just too much repetitive nonsense and useless scenes.
@WEBNOVEL_OFFICIAL Dear author of this work, I really liked your book, but I have an important question, what happened to the ability of "Speed Bone Armor", this ability seems to have disappeared, the last time it was mentioned in the battle in the kingdom of Duende and a small hint of this ability when meeting with that doctor who could see the flows of the mutagen in the bodies. Where did this ability go and what happened to it?
Dear author of this work, I really liked your book, but I have an important question, what happened to the ability of "Speed Bone Armor", this ability seems to have disappeared, the last time it was mentioned in the battle in the kingdom of Duende and a small hint of this ability when meeting with that doctor who could see the flows of the mutagen in the bodies. Where did this ability go and what happened to it?
Dear author of this work, I really liked your book, but I have an important question, what happened to the ability of "Speed Bone Armor", this ability seems to have disappeared, the last time it was mentioned in the battle in the kingdom of Duende and a small hint of this ability when meeting with that doctor who could see the flows of the mutagen in the bodies. Where did this ability go and what happened to it?
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only made it to chapter two but had to stop. the constant mistakes of verb tense and weird sentence structure made me stop. supposedly it gets better but it's too annoying
This is my absolute favorite zombie story. I have read 1180 chapters, and it's amazingly unique. Zombies, magic, mutations, weapons and armors designs, crazy upgrades, robots, and more.
Spoiler de révélation meh, started good but like others side fell off after a couple hundred chapters. male characters always made out to be villains while the only other characters of interest around the mc are all women. but the main thing is that the release rate is too inconsistent that makes the progress of the book ridiculously slow. at this point it'll be another 10 years before you even get through an arc. i dropped it because it felt like the storyline was no longer planned out and random stuff kept happening. it was better in the beginning before all the magic stuff.
This Review is After 350+ Chapters. Novel is very Overrated. The plot is not consistent. Also it feels like the Author is kind of confused on how he wants to portray his MC. Cuz the MCs personality is constantly switching for no reason, either make him anti-hero or just normal. Secondly, Author keeps introducing new characters and every one of them have no personality or are annoying for no reason. Another thing is the Gender ratio is very skewered. In a apocalypse setting like this you would expect the the less physically weaker females to be less in number. But every character the author pulls 9/10 its a female. I am convinced the author is feminist.(not that its a bad thing) Also every interaction feels Very forceful. The world building is fine. But one thing is how does he keep pulling magical stuff out of nothing in a Zombie apocalypse based novel. Its almost as if he suddenly wanted magical stuff to happen. The Novels first hundred chapter are the only ones i enjoyed. Overall was very excited about this novel and its setting but the author could not keep things consistent and kept pulling plots filled with plot holes. For those of you who want pure zombie apocalypse vibes and that type of power setting, this novel is not it.
This is more a question than it is a comment. i've read up to chapter 13 and I've browsed some chapter around the 50s to see how's it going later on. I really enjoy the detail, world building and logical explanation behind everything. Before delving further in the story, I wanted to know, when does mark get his power, how slow-paced or fast paced is the story. I'm pondering if I'll read it now or later. I'm more into meaningful evolution that you can see some important changes, pets and game-like elements. Even if the story doesn't have them I'll probably read it later, I just don't want to start reading lots of chapter just to start something else and put this one aside for a few months/years because I might not come back after if I'm too far into it. Thank you !
I'm not really interested. this book has popped up frequently in my free to read. it just doesn't interest me. You might like it or might not. I just want it to stop taking up an opportunity for me to read something I'm actually interested in.
I didn't get past the first chapter. The writing was just too bad for me. Either the writer isn't good with English or the translation is extra sub par. Could be a good story but I'm not willing to read it as it is currently written.
I've read up to chapter 1104. I'm really hooked in on the story and have been enjoying following the mcs journey.
I don't like how mc gets NTR left and right, if don't like the story where mc gets NTR it's not for you.
The only reason why I am dropping it at chapter 70 is because it's tooooo cringe The chapter mia introduced it's started to become cringe and it's too much not little and as I progress it become more cringe And only girls get all the powers 😂 mc is surrounded by girls and all of them are cringe mc have very unique power but he is also cringe Writer is very good but sometimes he forgot that we have to use commonsense, mc is perfect from the start and Writer give power to only girls which I hate the most because they are the reason of cringeness It look like author is writing it for 12 ,13 year old boy's
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Come on man dnt do this to me please 😭😭😭 120 chapters in 1 year..author bro please write faster..book is gud. Idk what happened to u bt dnt listen to idiots. It was bumpy in the beginning, but it got good later on
overall speaking, very good. everything is fleshed out, plotholes are nonexistent most of the time, and the story sucks you in. i do hope that the mistakes regarding how the eye in charge of mark is referred to will be fixed.
Spoiler de révélation Nice story! Keep up the good work! Can you please recommend something to read like this one? I like apocalypse + kingdom building genre so please kind sir can you suggest any stories related to that?
Spoiler de révélation With the speed with which the author writes new chapters, perhaps my grandchildren will be able to read the novel in full... Potential plot branches are interesting to me, but the plot is stalling.
انا خائب الامل لما تشوه الاسلام ترتدى الحجاب بسبب التقاليد الحجاب فرض لكن نحن لا نجبرهن على ارتداءه فلن نحاسب مكانهن مع ان تقيمى عالى لاكن ما زلت حزينا
Great novel don't give up on it 👍 great novel don't give up on it 👍 Great novel don't give up on it 👍 great novel don't give up on it 👍
Dude, I have nothing to say. Just go read it A true masterpiece, perfect writing, perfect storyline and steady build-up.Also prolly my best MC😂 Yep, read it
here can advertise your novel, please tell me Multiprof | Apocalypse here can advertise your novel, please tell me Multiprof | Apocalypse
Okay, if anyone reads this that has read the novel, please clear up some stuff for me. 1.) I keep seeing mixed messaged but apparently the FL gets r*ped??2.) At first the novel wasn't a harem and now it is?3.) Is this worth reading?
Trash. The author has a disgusting f€ti$h where he likes it when the love interest gets r4₽€d by gangsters so much that she needs to be “cleaned up” by another character. Truly disgusting, author. I guess I can only hope that you do the world a favor by never trying to create something ever again.
This book is worth a read in my option except for the ultra slow character power development and MC even with a cheat code and not fully utilising itAnd author have u forgotten about the black dragon mutegene stone that Mark has ?? 😳
Spoiler de révélation To be honest beside the unbearable and listless muslim bashing which showcasts the small mindedness of the author, the story is medicore. But as soon as i saw every chapter the muslim woman was ashamed of her origins and was degrading some religious things as culture and mixing both i had the urge to just vomit. Pls dont forcefully insert your political or religious prejudices in ur work u are destroying them. I found the idea nice but sadly I cant read every chapter the same bs so yeah bye. For me this is the same as the usual Chinese propaganda thats found in every second chinese novel
Awesome book must read, I wish there were more zombie/ apocalypse books out there
The story is good but it starts to get boring and dull when Mark got teleported to fight The Great One, there's just too much repetitive nonsense and useless scenes.
@WEBNOVEL_OFFICIAL Dear author of this work, I really liked your book, but I have an important question, what happened to the ability of "Speed Bone Armor", this ability seems to have disappeared, the last time it was mentioned in the battle in the kingdom of Duende and a small hint of this ability when meeting with that doctor who could see the flows of the mutagen in the bodies. Where did this ability go and what happened to it?
Dear author of this work, I really liked your book, but I have an important question, what happened to the ability of "Speed Bone Armor", this ability seems to have disappeared, the last time it was mentioned in the battle in the kingdom of Duende and a small hint of this ability when meeting with that doctor who could see the flows of the mutagen in the bodies. Where did this ability go and what happened to it?
Dear author of this work, I really liked your book, but I have an important question, what happened to the ability of "Speed Bone Armor", this ability seems to have disappeared, the last time it was mentioned in the battle in the kingdom of Duende and a small hint of this ability when meeting with that doctor who could see the flows of the mutagen in the bodies. Where did this ability go and what happened to it?
Spoiler de révélation only made it to chapter two but had to stop. the constant mistakes of verb tense and weird sentence structure made me stop. supposedly it gets better but it's too annoying
This is my absolute favorite zombie story. I have read 1180 chapters, and it's amazingly unique. Zombies, magic, mutations, weapons and armors designs, crazy upgrades, robots, and more.
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