The Last Embrace

LV 11

TheBlips

Let me just say I am rooting for Adam and Jess. But I feel sorry for Zain. The theme of the story is brilliant, a little cliche, but all in all its very good. I really like Adam's character development. The story is really easy to read. I just hope that you my dear author won't break Adam and Jessy apart! OR ELSE!!! hehe.. Kidding! :) Goodluck Author! More updates please!

LV 13

Anya_Nesh

This is my second review for this work. And I post it not to rate the writing quality or stability of updates, but to say a big 'thank you' to the Author! Lizabelle, I like your novel very much! Please, continue writing your story. It's wonderful! I know that writing is hard work but you do well. Always looking forward to the new chapters! Keep it up!

LV 13

Shukel

A novel that makes me cry from the time I found out Adam will die. I really love this story. I hardly read vampire novels. But this one got me going nonstop. I've fallen for this story. Keep it up author. Thanks

LV 5

JunkieOverThe_Moon

Welp!! This is a fantastic novel, if I say so, author. Leaving, the minor mistakes it's all good to go. Just wondering why u made avolune for each chapter tho. I can see the usefulness of it, as I'm a writer myself but it's weird. Other than that, it feels very much like a Hollywood movie about vampires. Good job and best of luck!!

LV 5

littlehera

A few grammar issues here and there. There are a few issues with verb tense switching, but the characters are vividly written. Overall, it's an enjoyable read. :)

LV 11

31Desember19

Just leave the mension Adam.I want to see how you could survive in your second life. It seems that you still have your power as a vampire. But how strong your power is...of course it depends on how the writer plots your in the next chapter. I really like the novel. It's not only entertaining but also emusing.. please give me a longer and cooler chapter

LV 4

90751052

Pretty good love story aimed towards women. Possessive vampire husband x half-human girly. It's quite fluffy when developing the love between the main duo, but needs a bit of editing when it comes to grammar. Overall, a nice story to read while drinking something warm and bittersweet. >3</

LV 13

MishaK

After I watched the Twilight series, I fell in love with the vampire fiction! Gosh! This one is damn cute! Just keep writing and don't let readers wait.

LV 5

Pgimz

Over this novel is going in a good direction. There are sentence structure issues, some sentences are also incomplete, wrong use of 'her'...From reading, it looks to be written in the present tense. However, there are also some errors with the use of the past tense. I like the plot and the general idea of this novel. With some editing, this would be an even greater novel. Good going author. Not your typical vampire stories...give this one a read.

LV 12

Vorie

It's a cute story. I like it. I like the vampire vaccine it's not something I've personally read of before when reading vampire stories. I think it's very unique! I thought it was pretty crafty of him when he was checking her out in chapter 7 and when she asked him he was like, "I'm just looking at your pretty roses." LOL!!! I think there are a few grammar errors here and there but overall it's good. With more work and practice I'm sure it'll turn into a really good story.

LV 4

tara_

Love the cute interactions between the characters! Keep on writing and never stop please ^^ There are a few grammar mistakes here and there (I suffer from those myself) but other than that, it is really nice.

LV 10

WriterWen

You've got a nice start, dear author! Keep up the good work! 😊😊 Jessy's and Adam's interactions are really cute! Continue writing this, alright?!

LV 3

Kittyfeliciana

I love the story. The Writing Quality is good, The story was developed nicely, it had a very unique characters, and everything flows nicely.

LV 2

mary_grace_siacor

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very interesting story.........I like it so much ....I love the main character of . this story..........

LV 2

Amber_Toney

Great book so far. Cant wait to tead more. i am in live with the characters And tye has lot. I cant put it diwn. What will happen next?

LV 5

orym

Liz has been persistent and completed the book No matter no comment or review She is awesome. Good translation Three cheers for liz Hip hip hooray Hip Hip hooray Hip Hip hooray