Recarnation in Animeverse

LV 11

Rizen

Abort mission I repeat Abort mission Run for your lives, save what's left out of it and do not read this ------------------------------------ it was pain in my brain, I was reading and felt so inconsistent after ch2 I continued while not really knowing who is the mc... is it Aditia (an indian name in japanese anime) or Isehee( Issei by how the author like to call him) you wont understand anything and your brain would be polluted with something that looks like english but without meaning.

LV 5

Kishura

It's so freaking confusing, no proper spacing, some chapters are just copied from other fanfic here in this site, honestly it's a trash unless you do something about your 2 chapters? That's been copy&paste from different fanfic

LV 5

the_swordsman

dont read it if u want good plot line . its just random piece of trash .... which will fry ur brain instead of entertaining............................................

LV 10

Simping_4_Akali

OK I am confused on how you right the story, Did you just copy stuff in other fanfiction? I don't really care if you copy them at least write them on a much more easy to understand than skipping some stuff because I don't really get it.

LV 4

UrizenVergil

Total confusing hell I bet you just copied it and not even know about the errors in the novel You just created confusion from chapter 3 by confusing mc as adiitya and isse at the same time

LV 4

leafy

I usually don't criticize but I had expectations for this novel. Now I'm feeling so confused..............I kept going thinking it will get better mostly because I am a dxd fan.....................................I was wrong, so disappointed...........I think my brain broke. 1 star for effort I guess.

LV 6

msk46

Very confusing it who is talking to whom no clear explanation is given of the scenes the author has clearly not planed out his story and he has not even read HSdxd

LV 6

Siegfrized

DONT READ THIS if u want some nice proper plot and story Read few chap,, now gonna drop this,, not worth tomread imo,, 1 chap copy from i think akikansomething author novel, 2nd chap it wierd,, systen, dathum, and cultivation? Just poping out of nowhere(ch 1 only ask 5 wish saiyan, sword, good look, dimension travel and gravity seal) after few line skip to ch 3 and barery read many grammar n error its like copy edit and insert few naw alot of random thing

LV 6

MiM3K

copied from other FF, not knowing who is MC why even is this published others hard work is copied and "author" don't even think how much time they sacrificed for write it and he blatantly copied it you realle don't have scruples if you are doing it

LV 5

Shen_byakko

everything is very confusing who is the mc? this is a waste of time...........................................................................

LV 5

Xellion

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