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Hi , This is Tynan, I am an editor from another platform that focuses on adventurous Genre Fictions. After reading your “Lord of the Magical Beasts”, I decided to contact you and if possible, to extend you an invitation on distributing your works. However, there are so little I can talk about it here. If you were interested, please contact me via tynan@ringdomstory.com , then I should take opportunity to discuss it with you in detail. It was a great pleasure to meet your story. Sincerely Tynan
⚠️ WARNING randomly DROPPED ⚠️ I love this story, but it showed as completed or I would not have started it. I get to the final chapter and it is painfully obvious that Webnovel dropped it mid novel. It says to be continued now, with a note saying the author will add more soon, but it’s been two months since the last chapter was posted. I am getting really fed up with the bullshit way Webnovel scams us out of money and the incomplete stories really are making me fucking crazy. Like really it drives me clinically insane to have stories unfinished.
I absolutely love this novel. I’m totally addicted to finding out what Yang Ling will do next. There is endless potential for sequels to the story and I hope more are provided soon. I will say I’m both disappointed and upset that the novel showed as completed when I started reading it but now that I’ve read all 750 chapters it’s clear that it is not finished and it’s been 2 months since a new chapter was posted making it look like Webnovel has dropped yet another novel. I would not have started if I’d known it was incomplete as they randomly drop way to many novels after suckering thousands of coins out of us.
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every race was "the ruler of the world in ancient times until the war of god and demons" yeah right? cant be possible... story did have a good beginning but did a sharp turn into repeating the same **** ... the world or continent should only have a handfull of sage level experts but lo and beholt they are like a plague popping up everwehre.. the mc is not really smart but get praised for mundane tactics... he should have tamed the horned beequeen und had her evolve into a higher tier so he could have stronger offspring of them but he didnt think oof it but by the ants he serached for one and they are only a foodsource for his beast dropping this **** gets boring and on my nerves! super beginn of one story only to turn into wishfullfillment **** reapeted suit.
Spoiler de révélation
quélquin peut me dire se que veux dire Oh Yiblis? parseque il répéte plain de fois !! thanks
Boring.. Trash.. No excitement on this novel.. Very plain... Mc Forcing building its own territory.. The title must not LORD OF THE MAGICAL BEAST but LORD OF THE MAGICAL BUGS...
This novel is ****. This novel is ****. This novel is ****. This novel is ****. This novel is ****.
Honestly disappointed. This story wasted its potential. The story progression is slow and not very rewarding. There is an over-fixation on politics and Kingdom development. I mean, it is one thing to approach kingdom-building with the 'reincarnated as a slime' approach as that is more interesting and there isn't a heavy focus on the specifics. Here is the opposite. We do not need to know how he convinced merchants to come to the town, and it is counterproductive to write three chapters on two stupid merchant groups. MC does not focus on building a powerful army despite the fact that he constantly talks about taming higher level beasts. I have read 200 chapters and he is only now getting his second high level creature. 200 chapters. Ridiculous. It is called Lord of the Magical Beasts for fvck's sake not Lord of scheming which is what he spends his time doing. The MC is a boring, generic Chinese scheming MC, but without that extra shot of testosterone. Dude knows when to retreat and kiss ass when facing characters he can't afford to provoke. That being said the world development is rather good with techniques, people and the world history explained in relatively vivid detail and unravelling gracefully as you read along. If you love really specific Kingdom-building, everything from peace talks to diviving up resources to socio-economic plans then you'll love this. I just don't appreciate it because this is a fantasy novel, not an economics textbook.
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Story is ok and some times, the plot armor comes into action. Well I dont like his wasting time on kingdom building. Relationships work in normal phase. He has like 3 girls in 300 chaps. And yes ALL DUMB ANIMAL RIGHTS ACTIVIST SHOULD STAY AWAY FROM NOVELS!!!
My braincells is dying every time I finish a chapter, it is so lightweight that I easily stop reading it.....................................
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Love this book. Can't wait for the updates this book has been one of my top favorite to read so far on this app.i have told all my friends and family about it.
Overall the story is good but the author has a problem. 1 already why the hero pisses us off all the time with his "I want to come back to earth" when he complains all the time that his life there was banal that he was without the money and that he worked too hard for nothing in his university. 2 these what the problem of the author with the pointed breasts the ass perky each time you have at least a paragraph on that while this imbecile of MC is afraid to try something and these what its problem to be erect all the time seeing a suitable girl I find that these too abuse this bull****, you can put stuff pig that the MC assumes after but does not make a bull**** or the MC makes as if it was normal and the girls say nothing and do not react apart from the assassin woman who wants to slash him in pieces but considering how the author is twisted she will also succumb. 3 the last one who pissed me off the most was the MC tames the beasts and sometimes there are scenes of life or death or he has no choice, but after these became of the fucking policy or the MC thinks he's smart because the author tends to con other people and something that I don't get MC wants to make believe that he comes from a powerful family but these stupidity will not last because there will always be a madman who n will not be afraid of that but him instead of trying to tame high level beasts now that he is earth wizard he does nothing but continues the policy While the old grandpa of the dark something enemy of the church stop more than 10000 beast all by himself and the MC instead of trying to improve by trying to tame the monsters in the valley which leads to the underground village he is doing fucking politics honestly I can not anymore I wanted to see a MC fighting with monsters like in monster paradise but i guess i have three p ask for a novel so unknown i will continue reading and if in the 50 chapter after what i have already read if there is no other high level beast apart from the unicorn and the Nine tailed fox i give up rai the novel and I'll go get something else
I think I am already in love with the quality, language and grammatical structure of this novel. It's ring bell real loud to a good taste, I must say. The choice of words used are great even though some aren't placed at the right place but still it's super interesting.
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My second review for story on web novel, You should install the app for Reading this novel. For reader use browser forget for get the latest chapter.
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Late review, but only reason I voted for this was because cover reminds me of Dark Souls ~
When is the actual heram going to start, by this point in the story it doesn't look like he wants to travel at all unlike some other novels I've read.
Well here we go again on easy mode, first he cheats a man for a statue then assaults a woman on the bus with it. This is before he goes to another world where he can tame all beasts. And of course perve the local beauties who are charmed by him. From this world he came To a forest he exclaimed Now becomes a lord
I absolutely love this story and much like The Legend of Drizzit it could continue on into multiple books however unfortunately it has been dropped, obviously as its been continued 9+ months. What a sad wasteof a talented writer and imaginative storyline.
Hi , This is Tynan, I am an editor from another platform that focuses on adventurous Genre Fictions. After reading your “Lord of the Magical Beasts”, I decided to contact you and if possible, to extend you an invitation on distributing your works. However, there are so little I can talk about it here. If you were interested, please contact me via tynan@ringdomstory.com , then I should take opportunity to discuss it with you in detail. It was a great pleasure to meet your story. Sincerely Tynan
⚠️ WARNING randomly DROPPED ⚠️ I love this story, but it showed as completed or I would not have started it. I get to the final chapter and it is painfully obvious that Webnovel dropped it mid novel. It says to be continued now, with a note saying the author will add more soon, but it’s been two months since the last chapter was posted. I am getting really fed up with the bullshit way Webnovel scams us out of money and the incomplete stories really are making me fucking crazy. Like really it drives me clinically insane to have stories unfinished.
I absolutely love this novel. I’m totally addicted to finding out what Yang Ling will do next. There is endless potential for sequels to the story and I hope more are provided soon. I will say I’m both disappointed and upset that the novel showed as completed when I started reading it but now that I’ve read all 750 chapters it’s clear that it is not finished and it’s been 2 months since a new chapter was posted making it look like Webnovel has dropped yet another novel. I would not have started if I’d known it was incomplete as they randomly drop way to many novels after suckering thousands of coins out of us.
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every race was "the ruler of the world in ancient times until the war of god and demons" yeah right? cant be possible... story did have a good beginning but did a sharp turn into repeating the same **** ... the world or continent should only have a handfull of sage level experts but lo and beholt they are like a plague popping up everwehre.. the mc is not really smart but get praised for mundane tactics... he should have tamed the horned beequeen und had her evolve into a higher tier so he could have stronger offspring of them but he didnt think oof it but by the ants he serached for one and they are only a foodsource for his beast dropping this **** gets boring and on my nerves! super beginn of one story only to turn into wishfullfillment **** reapeted suit.
Spoiler de révélation quélquin peut me dire se que veux dire Oh Yiblis? parseque il répéte plain de fois !! thanks
Boring.. Trash.. No excitement on this novel.. Very plain... Mc Forcing building its own territory.. The title must not LORD OF THE MAGICAL BEAST but LORD OF THE MAGICAL BUGS...
This novel is ****. This novel is ****. This novel is ****. This novel is ****. This novel is ****.
Honestly disappointed. This story wasted its potential. The story progression is slow and not very rewarding. There is an over-fixation on politics and Kingdom development. I mean, it is one thing to approach kingdom-building with the 'reincarnated as a slime' approach as that is more interesting and there isn't a heavy focus on the specifics. Here is the opposite. We do not need to know how he convinced merchants to come to the town, and it is counterproductive to write three chapters on two stupid merchant groups. MC does not focus on building a powerful army despite the fact that he constantly talks about taming higher level beasts. I have read 200 chapters and he is only now getting his second high level creature. 200 chapters. Ridiculous. It is called Lord of the Magical Beasts for fvck's sake not Lord of scheming which is what he spends his time doing. The MC is a boring, generic Chinese scheming MC, but without that extra shot of testosterone. Dude knows when to retreat and kiss ass when facing characters he can't afford to provoke. That being said the world development is rather good with techniques, people and the world history explained in relatively vivid detail and unravelling gracefully as you read along. If you love really specific Kingdom-building, everything from peace talks to diviving up resources to socio-economic plans then you'll love this. I just don't appreciate it because this is a fantasy novel, not an economics textbook.
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Story is ok and some times, the plot armor comes into action. Well I dont like his wasting time on kingdom building. Relationships work in normal phase. He has like 3 girls in 300 chaps. And yes ALL DUMB ANIMAL RIGHTS ACTIVIST SHOULD STAY AWAY FROM NOVELS!!!
My braincells is dying every time I finish a chapter, it is so lightweight that I easily stop reading it.....................................
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Love lovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelove this book love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love
Love this book. Can't wait for the updates this book has been one of my top favorite to read so far on this app.i have told all my friends and family about it.
Overall the story is good but the author has a problem. 1 already why the hero pisses us off all the time with his "I want to come back to earth" when he complains all the time that his life there was banal that he was without the money and that he worked too hard for nothing in his university. 2 these what the problem of the author with the pointed breasts the ass perky each time you have at least a paragraph on that while this imbecile of MC is afraid to try something and these what its problem to be erect all the time seeing a suitable girl I find that these too abuse this bull****, you can put stuff pig that the MC assumes after but does not make a bull**** or the MC makes as if it was normal and the girls say nothing and do not react apart from the assassin woman who wants to slash him in pieces but considering how the author is twisted she will also succumb. 3 the last one who pissed me off the most was the MC tames the beasts and sometimes there are scenes of life or death or he has no choice, but after these became of the fucking policy or the MC thinks he's smart because the author tends to con other people and something that I don't get MC wants to make believe that he comes from a powerful family but these stupidity will not last because there will always be a madman who n will not be afraid of that but him instead of trying to tame high level beasts now that he is earth wizard he does nothing but continues the policy While the old grandpa of the dark something enemy of the church stop more than 10000 beast all by himself and the MC instead of trying to improve by trying to tame the monsters in the valley which leads to the underground village he is doing fucking politics honestly I can not anymore I wanted to see a MC fighting with monsters like in monster paradise but i guess i have three p ask for a novel so unknown i will continue reading and if in the 50 chapter after what i have already read if there is no other high level beast apart from the unicorn and the Nine tailed fox i give up rai the novel and I'll go get something else
I think I am already in love with the quality, language and grammatical structure of this novel. It's ring bell real loud to a good taste, I must say. The choice of words used are great even though some aren't placed at the right place but still it's super interesting.
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My second review for story on web novel, You should install the app for Reading this novel. For reader use browser forget for get the latest chapter.
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Late review, but only reason I voted for this was because cover reminds me of Dark Souls ~
When is the actual heram going to start, by this point in the story it doesn't look like he wants to travel at all unlike some other novels I've read.
Well here we go again on easy mode, first he cheats a man for a statue then assaults a woman on the bus with it. This is before he goes to another world where he can tame all beasts. And of course perve the local beauties who are charmed by him. From this world he came To a forest he exclaimed Now becomes a lord
I absolutely love this story and much like The Legend of Drizzit it could continue on into multiple books however unfortunately it has been dropped, obviously as its been continued 9+ months. What a sad wasteof a talented writer and imaginative storyline.