Synopsis
She gets a boyfriend and goes through her life. Not knowing she is loved, but loved. She can only look forward and not the past waiting for someone with a history like hers.
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Hey if you are looking for a good starter story then this is it. I would recommend this but it does need work. So I will talk to the writer today later. But she is a nice and friendly girl.
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It is good so far but you have a couple of mistakes. I can't wait. I hope that you can see the mistakes I saw and fix them. If not then I can help you just ask me and I will but if you peeps out there are looking for a good book then this would be your book.
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This was nice to read, and I could noot stop reading it. Too bad thre's not another chapter... I hope for you to update more iin the future, as I like seeing your writing skills progress. Great job!