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it's looking really good but it is also looking like the author dropped it sooooo.. well it was a nice premise and i loved when he introduced Lilith so that was cool and i hope he is just taking a brake and will continue
Very good gramma, Can't really say anything for the world building. Characters so far are good 👍. So all in all pretty good story ......................... .. ..
Só falta lançar mais capítulos, porque a história é muito boa BRBRBRBRBBRBRBRBBRBRBRBRBBRBRBRBRBBRBRBRBRBRBRBVRVRVRVRVRVRVBRBRBRBRBRBRBBRBRBBRVRVRVRVRVRVBRBRBBRBRBRBRBRBBRBRBBRBRBR
More chapters please 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Shameless Walrus shall vote 5 stars! Seriously though, this is going to be my main novel at the moment, though I may release snippets of other works that are currently in the midst throughout this great Walrus mind! I don't have a release schedule for the time being, but I am thinking of around one-chapter-a-day-ish, for the time being anyway. If anyone wants to give suggestions for new 'places' for old Oyaji to visit, please comment and review! Though Shameless Walrus already has the first two worlds planned out! MUHAHAHAHA!!!!!
Só pela sinopse me deu curiosidade de ler! -------------------------------------------------------------- BRBRBRBRBRBRBBRBRBRBRBBRBRBRBRBBRBRBRBR
It is good but I don't know if there will be updates, but it would be really sad if it was dropped..........................................
it's looking really good but it is also looking like the author dropped it sooooo.. well it was a nice premise and i loved when he introduced Lilith so that was cool and i hope he is just taking a brake and will continue
Very good gramma, Can't really say anything for the world building. Characters so far are good 👍. So all in all pretty good story ......................... .. ..
Só falta lançar mais capítulos, porque a história é muito boa BRBRBRBRBBRBRBRBBRBRBRBRBBRBRBRBRBBRBRBRBRBRBRBVRVRVRVRVRVRVBRBRBRBRBRBRBBRBRBBRVRVRVRVRVRVBRBRBBRBRBRBRBRBBRBRBBRBRBR
More chapters please 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Shameless Walrus shall vote 5 stars! Seriously though, this is going to be my main novel at the moment, though I may release snippets of other works that are currently in the midst throughout this great Walrus mind! I don't have a release schedule for the time being, but I am thinking of around one-chapter-a-day-ish, for the time being anyway. If anyone wants to give suggestions for new 'places' for old Oyaji to visit, please comment and review! Though Shameless Walrus already has the first two worlds planned out! MUHAHAHAHA!!!!!
Só pela sinopse me deu curiosidade de ler! -------------------------------------------------------------- BRBRBRBRBRBRBBRBRBRBRBBRBRBRBRBBRBRBRBR
It is good but I don't know if there will be updates, but it would be really sad if it was dropped..........................................