The Divine Wolf... or?

Well so far I am a chapter 53 by some miracle I won't lie I skipped quite the few paragraphs while reading didn't miss much on the essential understanding of the story if you're thinking it's going to be about the life of someone who becomes a wolf and all that sorry to disappoint it's a no the author didn't even do his research about wolves you can literally watch an hour video on YouTube about a wolfs act in the wild no understanding about a wolf's behavior and characteristics their instinct there census which are way better than human's the character personality and descriptions are contradicting each others in most of the chapters the guy is way too sentimental even f****** cries just because someone thanked him for saving their kid seriously 👎he puts himself in situations that might endanger him which 95% of them are unnecessary if not all still attached to his humanity (when he was human he didn't have much of a good interaction with people and I only had one friend which died he wasn't a social person and didn't like being around people because they bullied him...) Would you get us to the point about his personality the author adds random feelings and emotions however he wants there is no rhythm in terms of how someone's personality works and develop is Jeff the author writing however he wants it today even if it's contradicts itself he even go to the point of making a contract with people he doesn't know contract which binds him just because of some guy he met in the dungeon for a couple of days and somehow become his friends which is stupid all in all it's a disappointment after another (author read some of the good review novels try to compare them with yours if you look from a neutral point of view you will see your mistakes hopefully) sorry in case of mistakes in my writing I'm using a voice writing app it translate what I say to writing sometimes it makes mistakes .

If you're searching for a novel about a mc reincarnated as a wolf and living as one, then this isn't for you. Despite being bullied his whole human life, he instantly trusts the first human he meet. He then enters human society again... as a wolf. Start was great until he met humans and became their lapdog and pawn. All in all a very disappointing novel.

I realy just wanted to write you a private message but couldn't find how sorry its a somewhat bad review but i will explain as much as i can and hopefully it will help in some way. Please take it as a constructive critism. After getting that out of the way the next section: Writing Quality - pretty good no mispelled words or typos in general so thats a plus. The writing style on the other hand could be better - the way you describe the outside world and the character's inner world is either lacking or childish either way i suggest you reaserch and practice more on those - will be mentioned again on 'characters'. Stability of Updates - every day! which is way better than most so 5/5 on that. Story Develepment - Pretty bad realy, the story is more 'character driven' meaning MC going around doing what feels right with no concrete theme or plot. Example of a plot: "we need to destroy this evil ring in a distant and dangerous place" cliche i know but its a good classic plot. another point regarding plot - i would like to introduce a thing to you called 'Chekhov's gun' basically its a term based on a saying of a famous writer, he said thus: "If in the first act you have hung a pistol on the wall, then in the following one it should be fired. Otherwise don't put it there." (Please research this further it involves more princple and will help you!) What i'm saying is: you have randomness in the story, now surprises or "suddeness" for lack of better word, is not bad but randomness is, what i mean is if a hungry wolf showed and begged for leftovers near the fire he doesnt just bolt right away and never apears again he should be back some day and it will be relevant (if you did things well that is) but you barely gave it one paragraph we know so little about that wolf that even if he did come back it will not be cool or meaningful. we slowly make our way into - -World Background - because the same point is relevant there as well in some instances MC is walking around town talking to merchants, buying/selling or admiring merchandise. when in that town they stay at an in and you gave some attention to a Lily character that worked there. in all those situation and MORE there is no effing interactions!! ZERO!!! he doesnt talk to the barmaid at all, the cool merchant selling the most expensive enchnted wepons just nods once at the MC friend while polishing a sword. Even the cool hammer thing didn't have a symbol so they can later find the blacksmith of the thing and establish some connction. Basically you show zero planning ahead, more than that, you leave your world barren from the thing that give life to a world like local rumors/humor/sayings/etc and that leaves your world building in the gutter compared to what it COULD be. Character Design - In a first look it looks like they are a bit 2 dimensional, like their inner world isnt very well developed but i tend to belive you have a good grasp of the chrarcter you want them to have, but just CANT bring it out properly meaning you don't express them correctly or well enough which connects us to style which i discussed before. Thank you fo reading this far and sorry about the spelling which is probably not perfect. I hope i got my points across and hope you will notice such things and plan better as you go along. I would also like yo point out i don't hate the story and may continue to read it my personal enjoyment is 7/10 which is pretty good. There is more to say but this should be good for now.

Typical monster MC not wanting to hurt any humans because apparently he was a loser in his past life and he wants to gst some friends. Bullsh*t. I know there's two sides of a coin in this idea but I'm just f*cking tired of watching monster MC's be kind and risk their lives for some humans who they've just met and don't know their motives. Where is the supposed intelligrnce of this mc? I don't see it because he's just f*cking retarded.

I can't complain about the writing quality and the world development seems interesting enough, but the character development is terrible and the plot seems pretty forced. The story hooked me with the "reincarnation as another species" line, but instantly unhooked me the moment I found out that the entire plot seems to be focused on what would happen if a wolf acted and behaved like a human with sub-par intelligence, blind loyalty, and a habit to disregard any and all logical decisions when left with a pretty human face. At this rate, he might as well have reincarnated into a housecat or a poodle capable of doing card tricks with all the relevance that this plot point has.