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..............................................................................................................................I JUST WANTED TO RUIN THE PEFECT NUMBER OF REVIEWS {18}
Thank....................................................................................................................................you
why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why do not continue writing???????????????????????????????????????????????
Beautiful keep up the great work Dhdievfor fod dir id rifdhxifkdodndbdificucuchcucuc chcchfjfbdbrickcufufufhdhdhdhdhdhfichfifbfobfifbfifbdidbidid
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i fell in love with that armor,*I WANT IT********************************************************************Darn the 140 characters, so annoying!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The grammar is a mess, you rated your own novel with 10 accounts, cover art is probaly not copyright free but not even yours, srsly at this point i cant help but think youre a child, probaly. I can see you atleast tried, but ....
Just ignore this review for the following reason: I saw that there are only 9 reviews at the moment, that's why I write this review to make it 10.
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DANG YOUR NOVEL COVER LOOK SUPER COOOOL!!!!!!! You better make him have a armor like that. HE HE............ Dang it i have it when it say 140 characters
DANG YOUR NOVEL COVER LOOK SUPER COOOOL!!!!!!! You better make him have a armor like that. HE HE............ Dang it i have it when it say 140 characters View More
Spoiler de révélation
Great 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
I just like the novel so i'll rate it 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😈
I think that this novel is probably going to be one of the best that I have read as long as you keep working on it and update more chapters ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- V
Got nothing to write......................I like it..l like it.....................................'................................................................................................🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉
DANG YOUR NOVEL COVER LOOK SUPER COOOOL!!!!!!! You better make him have a armor like that. HE HE............ Dang it i have it when it say 140 characters
Just want to rate I dont have anything to say 😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌
Just a review nothing suspicious and nothing bad happening, and yeah I just want to review cuz the reviews are 19 so after this it will be 20.
..............................................................................................................................I JUST WANTED TO RUIN THE PEFECT NUMBER OF REVIEWS {18}
Thank....................................................................................................................................you
why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why do not continue writing???????????????????????????????????????????????
Beautiful keep up the great work Dhdievfor fod dir id rifdhxifkdodndbdificucuchcucuc chcchfjfbdbrickcufufufhdhdhdhdhdhfichfifbfobfifbfifbdidbidid
⭐💯💯💯⭐ 💯⭐💯💯⭐ ⭐⭐💯💯⭐ ⭐⭐💯💯⭐ ⭐⭐💯💯⭐ ⭐⭐💯💯⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐💯💯💯⭐ 💯💯⭐💯💯 💯💯⭐💯💯 💯💯⭐💯💯 💯💯⭐💯💯 ⭐💯💯💯⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐💯💯💯⭐ 💯💯⭐💯💯 💯💯⭐💯💯 💯💯⭐💯💯 💯💯⭐💯💯 ⭐💯💯💯⭐
Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém
i fell in love with that armor,*I WANT IT********************************************************************Darn the 140 characters, so annoying!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The grammar is a mess, you rated your own novel with 10 accounts, cover art is probaly not copyright free but not even yours, srsly at this point i cant help but think youre a child, probaly. I can see you atleast tried, but ....
Just ignore this review for the following reason: I saw that there are only 9 reviews at the moment, that's why I write this review to make it 10.
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DANG YOUR NOVEL COVER LOOK SUPER COOOOL!!!!!!! You better make him have a armor like that. HE HE............ Dang it i have it when it say 140 characters
DANG YOUR NOVEL COVER LOOK SUPER COOOOL!!!!!!! You better make him have a armor like that. HE HE............ Dang it i have it when it say 140 characters View More
Spoiler de révélation Great 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
I just like the novel so i'll rate it 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😈
I think that this novel is probably going to be one of the best that I have read as long as you keep working on it and update more chapters ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- V
Got nothing to write......................I like it..l like it.....................................'................................................................................................🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉
DANG YOUR NOVEL COVER LOOK SUPER COOOOL!!!!!!! You better make him have a armor like that. HE HE............ Dang it i have it when it say 140 characters
Just want to rate I dont have anything to say 😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌
Just a review nothing suspicious and nothing bad happening, and yeah I just want to review cuz the reviews are 19 so after this it will be 20.