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A good story with a inovative background💓💓💓 Interesting plot.Futhermore habe great quality and long chapter service😄😄 PLEASED DON'T DROP THIS STORY🙏🙏🙏
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Goooooooooooooooood its good novel one of the best douluo dalu novel I've ever read in my live its just that leaving it which made it pitiful alright I hope you will be back and continue from where you left yeah the wishes are good not OverPowered and also not misused Hope you success
Less chapter updates so i like request update more chapters. Story also good until now so i hope develop the story better and fast.also don't make mc op in starting then there will be no fun
Good story does not focus on secondary characters. Needs to be continued. Love the story so far. More more more more more more is what we want
More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
Cool cool cool ....... .......... ............. ........... ....... .......... ........... ............. Please continue it soon Soon soon soon
I think AUTHOR should let him born in an entirely new doulou world of his own imagination with same world background but a entirely new story line In a entirely new continent of author's imagination and creativity But let ideology of humanity vs demons stay Cause it is good and new and because I don't like humans scheming at each other
It's a shame that the update was delay. I will love to reading some more of the update well I guess I will have to wait until the author has a new chapter to be updated to
Pls update soon!! Cant wait to read next chapter... .................................................................................................
I love how you thought of the demons and intertwined it in the story in a working way. I hope I can read more from you because it's a really interesting concept and it would be awesome to see how the main character gets his abilities!
I hope more chapter from you dude please mass release if you can hahahahahah im really the fans of DDL 2 if you want to know it 🤣😂🤗😂☺😊🤗😊🤗😍
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HAIXT. 12 CHAPTERS JUST TO EXPLAIN THIS SHITTY WORLD... 😐😐😐😐............................................. IVE WAITED SO LONG JUST TO START THE TIMELINE... AND UPDATES OF CHAPTERS IS SLOW TOO.. WHEN HE UPDATE THE CHAPTERS ARE JUST FULL OF SHITTY EXPLAINATIONS... MAYBE AUTHOR JUST WANT TO EXPLAIN THIS THINGS. -.- UGH READ THIS YOURSELF!!!! AUTHOR KEEP IT UP HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. EXPLAIN MORE.
HAIXT. 12 CHAPTERS JUST TO EXPLAIN THIS SHITTY WORLD... 😐😐😐😐............................................. IVE WAITED SO LONG JUST TO START THE TIMELINE... AND UPDATES OF CHAPTERS IS SLOW TOO.. WHEN HE UPDATE THE CHAPTERS ARE JUST FULL OF SHITTY EXPLAINATIONS... MAYBE AUTHOR JUST WANT TO EXPLAIN THIS THINGS. -.- UGH READ THIS YOURSELF!!!! AUTHOR KEEP IT UP HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. EXPLAIN MORE.
I will shamelessly give myself five stars because I know what story I have in my mind and the story will be worth to read to please read this novel Thank you readers !!!
New setting and new background POV of MC, make this novel interesting. Cannot wait for next chap and progress. Goodluck for author. Thank you for your hardwork writing this novel.
Cool Story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!
Good...good...('_') GOOD!!!well... i like it... So keep GOING..!!! ehemm,,soryy bout that...(///) Eeehrrrr....(why the heck ..i need to writes 140 words...) (--__--)'''. Jeezxz......troublesome....haiiiizzzz.... Well this story got POTENTIAL.... That what i think...
Very good the novel recommend to everyone to follow, will not regret. Very good the novel recommend to everyone to follow, will not regret.Muito 😎😎
Its a good story ... I like it.... This have your own way of plot ... unlike the original... IT'S GOD D*** GOOD.......... (COUGH...EHEM..).... KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.. (^__^) ♡♡♡
i love that you made a Douluo Dalu II and u even made a version with demons this is fking cool ....................................................................................................................
Great start can't wait for more chapters, I like that the Main characters clan is powerful. The main character already has a goal set for the future can't wait to read more
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I liked your novel. The best was world background because I always thought that how can a cultivation world have so low vitality. So keep up the good work.
Story seems interesting so I will read it, but there are quite a lot of writing mistakes, thought there are a lot of fanfics that have worse grammar on this site. But because there are so many writing mistakes I will only write what bothers me. Don't go beyond 9 lines in a singe paragraph since it gets too long. Words like grandmother, grandfather and other family titles does not start with big letters, it is only when you use the name of the grandmother, Qian Yue that you start with big letters, or aunt Xiao. Basically you use too many big letters when it shouldn't be used. Oh and on the character sheet you forgot to write that Bing Xiao is the aunt. So good luck with the story, i'm looking forward to read more.
It looks really good. I really what you've done and how you started the novel. The only thing I can ask you is that you space out your paragraphs a little for those who read on phones. But everything else is pretty good and I hope you continue the novel for the foreseeable future.
It is a very good story, the background is interesting and I can feel that the character development will be great! Overall, this story is great! It's good to have it in my collection. Maybe the Author should make the father(xiao guang) have somekind of special bloodline exept that silver blue god's bloodline or something like that(i forgot the name😭). Should be something related to water or ice. Or maybe pass down tecnique? of course with deep relation to a dragon. maybe some plot twist about the 2 rings can be used with both spirit of Bing Feng.
A good story with a inovative background💓💓💓 Interesting plot.Futhermore habe great quality and long chapter service😄😄 PLEASED DON'T DROP THIS STORY🙏🙏🙏
good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
Goooooooooooooooood its good novel one of the best douluo dalu novel I've ever read in my live its just that leaving it which made it pitiful alright I hope you will be back and continue from where you left yeah the wishes are good not OverPowered and also not misused Hope you success
Less chapter updates so i like request update more chapters. Story also good until now so i hope develop the story better and fast.also don't make mc op in starting then there will be no fun
Good story does not focus on secondary characters. Needs to be continued. Love the story so far. More more more more more more is what we want
More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
Cool cool cool ....... .......... ............. ........... ....... .......... ........... ............. Please continue it soon Soon soon soon
I think AUTHOR should let him born in an entirely new doulou world of his own imagination with same world background but a entirely new story line In a entirely new continent of author's imagination and creativity But let ideology of humanity vs demons stay Cause it is good and new and because I don't like humans scheming at each other
It's a shame that the update was delay. I will love to reading some more of the update well I guess I will have to wait until the author has a new chapter to be updated to
Pls update soon!! Cant wait to read next chapter... .................................................................................................
I love how you thought of the demons and intertwined it in the story in a working way. I hope I can read more from you because it's a really interesting concept and it would be awesome to see how the main character gets his abilities!
I hope more chapter from you dude please mass release if you can hahahahahah im really the fans of DDL 2 if you want to know it 🤣😂🤗😂☺😊🤗😊🤗😍
Spoiler de révélation HAIXT. 12 CHAPTERS JUST TO EXPLAIN THIS SHITTY WORLD... 😐😐😐😐............................................. IVE WAITED SO LONG JUST TO START THE TIMELINE... AND UPDATES OF CHAPTERS IS SLOW TOO.. WHEN HE UPDATE THE CHAPTERS ARE JUST FULL OF SHITTY EXPLAINATIONS... MAYBE AUTHOR JUST WANT TO EXPLAIN THIS THINGS. -.- UGH READ THIS YOURSELF!!!! AUTHOR KEEP IT UP HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. EXPLAIN MORE.
HAIXT. 12 CHAPTERS JUST TO EXPLAIN THIS SHITTY WORLD... 😐😐😐😐............................................. IVE WAITED SO LONG JUST TO START THE TIMELINE... AND UPDATES OF CHAPTERS IS SLOW TOO.. WHEN HE UPDATE THE CHAPTERS ARE JUST FULL OF SHITTY EXPLAINATIONS... MAYBE AUTHOR JUST WANT TO EXPLAIN THIS THINGS. -.- UGH READ THIS YOURSELF!!!! AUTHOR KEEP IT UP HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. EXPLAIN MORE.
I will shamelessly give myself five stars because I know what story I have in my mind and the story will be worth to read to please read this novel Thank you readers !!!
New setting and new background POV of MC, make this novel interesting. Cannot wait for next chap and progress. Goodluck for author. Thank you for your hardwork writing this novel.
Cool Story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!
Good...good...('_') GOOD!!!well... i like it... So keep GOING..!!! ehemm,,soryy bout that...(///) Eeehrrrr....(why the heck ..i need to writes 140 words...) (--__--)'''. Jeezxz......troublesome....haiiiizzzz.... Well this story got POTENTIAL.... That what i think...
Very good the novel recommend to everyone to follow, will not regret. Very good the novel recommend to everyone to follow, will not regret.Muito 😎😎
Its a good story ... I like it.... This have your own way of plot ... unlike the original... IT'S GOD D*** GOOD.......... (COUGH...EHEM..).... KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.. (^__^) ♡♡♡
i love that you made a Douluo Dalu II and u even made a version with demons this is fking cool ....................................................................................................................
Great start can't wait for more chapters, I like that the Main characters clan is powerful. The main character already has a goal set for the future can't wait to read more
Spoiler de révélation I liked your novel. The best was world background because I always thought that how can a cultivation world have so low vitality. So keep up the good work.
Story seems interesting so I will read it, but there are quite a lot of writing mistakes, thought there are a lot of fanfics that have worse grammar on this site. But because there are so many writing mistakes I will only write what bothers me. Don't go beyond 9 lines in a singe paragraph since it gets too long. Words like grandmother, grandfather and other family titles does not start with big letters, it is only when you use the name of the grandmother, Qian Yue that you start with big letters, or aunt Xiao. Basically you use too many big letters when it shouldn't be used. Oh and on the character sheet you forgot to write that Bing Xiao is the aunt. So good luck with the story, i'm looking forward to read more.
It looks really good. I really what you've done and how you started the novel. The only thing I can ask you is that you space out your paragraphs a little for those who read on phones. But everything else is pretty good and I hope you continue the novel for the foreseeable future.
It is a very good story, the background is interesting and I can feel that the character development will be great! Overall, this story is great! It's good to have it in my collection. Maybe the Author should make the father(xiao guang) have somekind of special bloodline exept that silver blue god's bloodline or something like that(i forgot the name😭). Should be something related to water or ice. Or maybe pass down tecnique? of course with deep relation to a dragon. maybe some plot twist about the 2 rings can be used with both spirit of Bing Feng.