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Ok so I’m wondering what happened to Lucien having a fiancé from Vampires that was Dante’s younger sister? And the formation of the Empire was originally Lucien’s idea. Overall I liked the original version of this much more since it made more sense, flowed better, and explained things more in depth.
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some stuff makes no sense.at all...random info drops and name drops....chapter 9 is full of names like they're supposed to mean something .... even if someone just watched the anime they would never remember so many nobodies. Poster probably deletes reviews since this amount of plot holes would exasperate alot of ppl
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nice. good job, wish you good luck I'm loving how unique this is so far. just wondering who his love interest is gonna be and if he will get his own personal butler. Like the one eye Twins could be good and I'm sure you can come up with a way to increase their life force.
Hey, I must say the story is good but there are so many mistakes. You had another novel which is written in very good English skill but this one only is 3 stars due to grammar mistakes.
I love the amazing start to the first chapter and I am now up to chapter 17 and my excitement hasn't faded still have very high expectations and I hope It lives up to my all-time high
Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you
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I really really enjoyed this novel when it first came out, when you introduced going to other worlds as apart of some Devourer Empire you really took the wind out of my sails. I'm really really happy that your restarting this novel from the beginning and doing it right. Thank You.
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well... i don't know what to say i don't have the determination to read it again. if you just left it like it was and wright new novel tokyo ghoul that will be fun.
I'm loving how unique this is so far. just wondering who his love interest is gonna be and if he will get his own personal butler. Like the one eye Twins could be good and I'm sure you can come up with a way to increase their life force.
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I m going to read this, and I have high hope for it[img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
Ok so I’m wondering what happened to Lucien having a fiancé from Vampires that was Dante’s younger sister? And the formation of the Empire was originally Lucien’s idea. Overall I liked the original version of this much more since it made more sense, flowed better, and explained things more in depth.
Spoiler de révélation some stuff makes no sense.at all...random info drops and name drops....chapter 9 is full of names like they're supposed to mean something .... even if someone just watched the anime they would never remember so many nobodies. Poster probably deletes reviews since this amount of plot holes would exasperate alot of ppl
Keep it up!! Keep it up!! Keep it up!! Keep it up!! Keep it up!! Keep it up!! Keep it up!! Keep it up!! Keep it up!! Keep it up!! Keep it up!! Keep it up!! Keep it up!! Keep it up!! Keep it up!!
nice. good job, wish you good luck I'm loving how unique this is so far. just wondering who his love interest is gonna be and if he will get his own personal butler. Like the one eye Twins could be good and I'm sure you can come up with a way to increase their life force.
Hey, I must say the story is good but there are so many mistakes. You had another novel which is written in very good English skill but this one only is 3 stars due to grammar mistakes.
I love the amazing start to the first chapter and I am now up to chapter 17 and my excitement hasn't faded still have very high expectations and I hope It lives up to my all-time high
Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you
Spoiler de révélation I really really enjoyed this novel when it first came out, when you introduced going to other worlds as apart of some Devourer Empire you really took the wind out of my sails. I'm really really happy that your restarting this novel from the beginning and doing it right. Thank You.
Spoiler de révélation well... i don't know what to say i don't have the determination to read it again. if you just left it like it was and wright new novel tokyo ghoul that will be fun.
I'm loving how unique this is so far. just wondering who his love interest is gonna be and if he will get his own personal butler. Like the one eye Twins could be good and I'm sure you can come up with a way to increase their life force.
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