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A good read but updates are not even weekly, have been following this in slicemachinebread. The story is about a man who was betrayed by his wife and somehow ended up in Isekai.
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It is good to see you upload your story here cuz i always using this to read many novel. The concept is good and the plot is good too. For me i like the non s*x scene chapter more because the one who make me enjoy this story is the plot. Anyway thanks.
Good move, Ruki! You prevent yourself from getting plagiarist. I really think Whizzer should do this from beginning before that thief steal his work. I love your fiction and I hope you can get more readers here.
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A good read but updates are not even weekly, have been following this in slicemachinebread. The story is about a man who was betrayed by his wife and somehow ended up in Isekai.
5* for now, i will change this after 10 chap or something. *** The title is really weird lol ... The title is really weird lol ... The title is really weird lol ... The title is really weird lol ... The title is really weird lol ... The title is really weird lol.
Spoiler de révélation It is good to see you upload your story here cuz i always using this to read many novel. The concept is good and the plot is good too. For me i like the non s*x scene chapter more because the one who make me enjoy this story is the plot. Anyway thanks.
Good move, Ruki! You prevent yourself from getting plagiarist. I really think Whizzer should do this from beginning before that thief steal his work. I love your fiction and I hope you can get more readers here.
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