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- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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Good story, but each chapter is little more than a single paragraph, by the time chapter 100 is reached there will be enough content for 5 chapters of reasonable length. Thanks for the story. Don't drop, but perhaps turn it into a novel?
Good story, but each chapter is little more than a single paragraph, by the time chapter 100 is reached there will be enough content for 5 chapters of reasonable length. Thanks for the story. Don't drop, but perhaps turn it into a novel?