5Critiques
- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
This story has a great potential I followed it from the start bit the release rate turned me off, but still I came back for it ... Shows how good it is, I just want to know if you dropped this before I recommend it to my group on Facebook coz we can blow up the views ,** if you can just be stable with the release rate... There are very few competitive sports novels that are good this has the potential for top 3/5
I enjoyed the start of this novel. I really likr this story for the ****** fact that it is grounded in reality while still managing to stay interesting which is a testament to the author's talent I think.
Interesting start to the story. I am more of a fan of a sports story with system but you are definitely talented. <><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><>
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
This story has a great potential I followed it from the start bit the release rate turned me off, but still I came back for it ... Shows how good it is, I just want to know if you dropped this before I recommend it to my group on Facebook coz we can blow up the views ,** if you can just be stable with the release rate... There are very few competitive sports novels that are good this has the potential for top 3/5
I enjoyed the start of this novel. I really likr this story for the ****** fact that it is grounded in reality while still managing to stay interesting which is a testament to the author's talent I think.
Interesting start to the story. I am more of a fan of a sports story with system but you are definitely talented. <><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><>
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.