Adventures in My Hero Academia

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WORKSHEET256

Why have flames that can burn you? why run around helping people evolve their powers?

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JStyles

One of thw worst novels i have read. Dont read it. Its just a waste of time. He has a special fire that can burn and freeze but he burns himself whenever he uses!! Wtf is that

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womb_raider

The story was just terrible the mc was super weak he have a quirk that burn himself and he goes around helping other people get stronger but he stay weak as ****

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Javeron

Whole this story is good, but I am somewhat less comfortable with the dialogue in your story because less specific who's talking, the MC or another character. And i have a message for you author, don't carelessly drop this novel

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omnigamergt

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Melshan

Harém? 😍😍 Very good the novel recommend to everyone to follow, will not regret. Very good the novel recommend to everyone to follow, will not regret. 😎😎

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katorishi

be warned this is to help author with story not actually review everyone gets a upgrade all for one not only gets increased strength speed and durability you can inherit past members experiences and brainpower like a Wikipedia if you make it yours and with all these power make it impossible to heal or get rid of injury entirely and allmight is just getting old or do what they did in the start allmight busy not there until the end todoroki can use both fire and ice at ounce and they are hotter and colder more dense and neet ability;s like refinement and ice small time frame to freeze anything like time space quirks bakugos explosions have more control and he can do it outside of his body and instead of sweat it gel that comes out of pores he can control it to make it do what he want from a distance to small throw ability for long range booms even turn gel to air state for undetectable boom minata can produce balls wherever but hair is stronger balls can stick and reject and minata can shot like projectiles out of body this works well for trick shots to grab enemy from unexpected angles even move it to a certain extant out side of body and can camand the balls to be more or less sticky or reject more or less making the one weakness of the quirk insible girl can turn object invible not only that she undetactible blending in nature object do not need to toch her for themto stay invisble and even intangible to even convunsing inanamate object that she's making her invisble like lets say a bomb is about to explode she can make the exploding thing think the rection agent is not thereor make cameres forget her or computer not to do certain task and anything that invisble she can project a image that somewhere else tape guy can do glue and web from shoulder to wrist to even knees and shoulder blades he can pop in those slots for him to shoot anywhere in his body can control to a fine degree sound girl has sound manipulation to a great dagre her punches to kickes carry it she can fly with sound dog wisle and make sound that affect body like poop pee burst ear drums faint see thing feel emotion gravity girl can manipulate gravity have enough imagination for this su(frog) greater strength certain places make her stronger paralyses touch sticky saliva better strength speed the whole shebang and mare animal instincts like danger strength of opponent to greater senses girl that makes stuff she can make a bus and not faint from hunger she can manipulate her cells anyway she wants makeing her stronger she can make all sorts of tech on the fly like nanobots sonic cannon fire even chemical rections poison gas arms guy can make any apandage anywhere in his body and manipulate cells to make him stronger and of course stronger faster bla bla bla bla electick guy not turn to idiot just tired and not just disperse also control his strength also rakage and turn himself unto lighting lazer guy faster stronger bla bla bla can actually control endure shooting for long periods of time and shoot anywhere in his body can control whether it burns or just couses it too do physical types of damage acid bla bla stronger faster normal stuff can make and control without the need for knowledge can make sticky acid slippery even stronger she mastered slippery style and can make rough gel and stronger projectile you get the picture make upgrades to every person in there and make sure you write it down like im doing tail do stonger faster bla make him have some of the eanergy i talked about earlier tanya can make rocket all over body making rocket punch and flyeven better stronger hardening guy same thing as tail dude with side of bla bla maybe harden others and objects mind controll can do what Asuka Kudō from problem children (her ability is Gift "Authority", use her authority to command others with her words. It also has the ability to control other gifts and strengthen an object's power as long as the power of the object is weaker than the power of her gift) watch it does not need to strengthen just first 2 also watch anime side of bla animal control guy ripping right from previece anime ("Genome Tree - Non Priorum", was a pendant given to her by her father. It bestows her the ability to speak to animals and use the abilities of any animal she is able to befriend.) braething under water flight ( need organs thet used for such things ) even take charecteristics of animal but only 5 min shadow dude can control shadows (like naruto) and fully cantrol his shadow dude side of bla even travel through shadow suger dude gains more from suger but limits to how much suger his body can handle makes him smarter faster stonger increase his reflexes hand girl like naruto and increase density side of bla and i dont need to do all of them and do duku yourself sorry if seems rushed it is literarly 12 in morning when i wrote this so don't feel ufended that did not write names

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katorishi

if you're going to make this ultra difficult one make it very apparent how weak the protagonist is from the very beginning two make good reason why so many geniuses are born in this era like some cosmic force or something like one for all and all might were part of the (some war name ) and this war sent huge waves of energy so that baby's born in this era have huge power and quirks were more rare than in the past (all for one era) and this is why poeple are getting stronger , two you're going to need more power than quirks like magic and phisical stuff i think drugs that there are drugs out there that help break the limit and inner force or chi and united world but these things are new and expensive to do unless you are rich and omni genies that have talent for all 3 ( qi/ki ,magic and quirk ) are rare not only that do not forget sceince and resaerch and draw insperation from hunter x hunter ther will be plenty of people with weird quirks a power that knows your history a power that seein the past all tipes of powers and make quirkless racism a thing like one organisation that kills quirkless and another that is a dangerous anti radical belief that quirks are evil , and do not only do those 3 energy's like soul power divine power star power cosmic power even weird metals and like i said earlier technology inter-dimensional you can even haki genie's like dragon ball bloodlines devil fruit zanpakuto aura(rwby) Djinn and make ther different schools of magic like magi magic marvel magic dc magic don't limit your writing to just quirks and there are plenty of jobs you can get insperation from like and not limited to warlocks blacksmith summoner wizard reaper ranger tank cook alchemist , you should also steal like and not limited to danny phantom one peice naruto marvel dc rwby bleach Magi: The Labyrinth of Magic Ps. don;t try to mix Chinese and Japanese work in fanfic this does not work well take it from a lurker american and Japanese can mix but never Chinese and Japanese bad guy's organization hydara 2 i mentioned earlier and those two could be used lot far all forms ,of power evil magic gods evil magic organization Al-Thamen hallows and one last piece of advice destroy the original plot because the best fanfic use the source material and make their own story from that this is katorishi **. 5 stars for support