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Spectacular novel... the plot twist is mind juggling. The set up is unique as well.. it’s a fascinating novel. Will urge all to have a peek after the first chapter you would get hooked.
Honestly, this is one of the best books that I've read in the last year. It has the potential to go for the distance and change the outlook on the average Eastern Fantasy novels on this App. It's written well and thought out very well, with the right amount of pace and not too much info that it confuse the reader. It gives them just the right amount of info and excitement that it leaves the reader wanting more Chapters to Read.
It's has hooked me from the first chapter hope the author eill continue to wrote this story but i think its abandoned :( ….................
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Great writing , good prose, could work a bit on the translation but the story is fine. With which stage there is a certain development in the MC
Translation quality is over the top. Plot is astonishingly Godlike. Only failure: Inconsistent updates. Hence the 4🌟s from me. Great job none the less.
Quite excellent, 4 stars for some minor spelling/grammatical errors, 2 stars for update since it seems no longer to be updating, but otherwise intensely engaging. I’m very interested in further chapters, so I hope the author picks it up again. Not sure what happened but it seems like it hasn’t had an update in months? I will keep my eyes out for new posts though, this type of novel is almost right up my alley.
A pretty good novel, Enjoyed it though, it seems that it is not being done anymore, has been a while since the last post. You might want to skip this, until it returns because it might be abondaned.l None the less a damn good read.
Dropped ? !hhtdfjnjcxutcfggggvgggvggvggffggfvvvffcvfvvhhhvgv vgggvbbvgghhhbjjjjhhuyyhyyyyyttyujujyhyygthhhhhghhhtdfjnjcxutcfggggvgggvggvggffggfvvvffcvfvvhhhvgv vgggvbbvgghhhbjjjjhhuyyhyyyyyttyujujyhyygthhhhhghhhtdfjnjcxutcfggggvgggvggvggffggfvvvffcvfvvhhhvgv vgggvbbvgghhhbjjjjhhuyyhyyyyyttyujujyhyygthhhhhghhhtdfjnjcxutcfggggvgggvggvggffggfvvvffcvfvvhhhvgv vgggvbbvgghhhbjjjjhhuyyhyyyyyttyujujyhyygthhhhhghhhtdfjnjcxutcfggggvgggvggvggffggfvvvffcvfvvhhhvgv vgggvbbvgghhhbjjjjhhuyyhyyyyyttyujujyhyygthhhhhgh
Really good rewriting op mc good story good writing smart mc fast pace and not boring continue just need more chapter to attract more people
Good story is worth it of your time and the pace of story is good too! I think the problem here the story development, base of the current story development more likely the incoming plot of story only revolves on girls. I'm hoping that I'm wrong!
The author has clearly put forth a lot of effort into producing the best novel he could for his readers. Personally, I have seen the author reach out for advice on how to get better on the forums. This shows a dedication that deserves a good review regardless of how you feel about the novel itself.
I've only read the prologue but I have to leave a comment on this One of the best prologues on this entire site. It actually does the job of hooking you in, I felt like one of the demons listening to the middle age mans story. Gave me goosebumps
A very well written story with great pace and an engaging storyline. The added bonus is that the MC isn't a mess of your typical clichés. Overall very impressed and will be following avidly.
Good story..........."..................................................................... Writing quality great stability of story good everything is good so far
Good story........................................................................................................................................................................
Great I really love it I hope you update soon!!!! I don't want to spoil anything for anyone so... Idk I need more to read like now!!!I love it so far and I'm dying for the next chapter!!!!!
As the author of course I'm going to rate it five stars, do you not know I'm proficient in the Dao of shamelessness? But seriously hope you enjoyed the novel.
Writing Quality is great, there are little to no errors, smooth sentences. Stability of Updates is good, I guess. Since it currently only have 3 Chapters, I can't really say. Story Development is really unique, there are some words I couldn't recognize, and the pace is good. Character Design is also good, a bit unique. Their description is also good. World Background is great so no complaints there.
Give the MC a gold medal!!! This guy is one of the few "reincarnated former power cultivator" who actually has the bearing and wit of someone with millennia of experience and won't suddenly devolve into bouts of teenage protagonist angstyness
Spectacular novel... the plot twist is mind juggling. The set up is unique as well.. it’s a fascinating novel. Will urge all to have a peek after the first chapter you would get hooked.
Honestly, this is one of the best books that I've read in the last year. It has the potential to go for the distance and change the outlook on the average Eastern Fantasy novels on this App. It's written well and thought out very well, with the right amount of pace and not too much info that it confuse the reader. It gives them just the right amount of info and excitement that it leaves the reader wanting more Chapters to Read.
It's has hooked me from the first chapter hope the author eill continue to wrote this story but i think its abandoned :( ….................
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Great writing , good prose, could work a bit on the translation but the story is fine. With which stage there is a certain development in the MC
Translation quality is over the top. Plot is astonishingly Godlike. Only failure: Inconsistent updates. Hence the 4🌟s from me. Great job none the less.
Quite excellent, 4 stars for some minor spelling/grammatical errors, 2 stars for update since it seems no longer to be updating, but otherwise intensely engaging. I’m very interested in further chapters, so I hope the author picks it up again. Not sure what happened but it seems like it hasn’t had an update in months? I will keep my eyes out for new posts though, this type of novel is almost right up my alley.
A pretty good novel, Enjoyed it though, it seems that it is not being done anymore, has been a while since the last post. You might want to skip this, until it returns because it might be abondaned.l None the less a damn good read.
Dropped ? !hhtdfjnjcxutcfggggvgggvggvggffggfvvvffcvfvvhhhvgv vgggvbbvgghhhbjjjjhhuyyhyyyyyttyujujyhyygthhhhhghhhtdfjnjcxutcfggggvgggvggvggffggfvvvffcvfvvhhhvgv vgggvbbvgghhhbjjjjhhuyyhyyyyyttyujujyhyygthhhhhghhhtdfjnjcxutcfggggvgggvggvggffggfvvvffcvfvvhhhvgv vgggvbbvgghhhbjjjjhhuyyhyyyyyttyujujyhyygthhhhhghhhtdfjnjcxutcfggggvgggvggvggffggfvvvffcvfvvhhhvgv vgggvbbvgghhhbjjjjhhuyyhyyyyyttyujujyhyygthhhhhghhhtdfjnjcxutcfggggvgggvggvggffggfvvvffcvfvvhhhvgv vgggvbbvgghhhbjjjjhhuyyhyyyyyttyujujyhyygthhhhhgh
Really good rewriting op mc good story good writing smart mc fast pace and not boring continue just need more chapter to attract more people
Good story is worth it of your time and the pace of story is good too! I think the problem here the story development, base of the current story development more likely the incoming plot of story only revolves on girls. I'm hoping that I'm wrong!
The author has clearly put forth a lot of effort into producing the best novel he could for his readers. Personally, I have seen the author reach out for advice on how to get better on the forums. This shows a dedication that deserves a good review regardless of how you feel about the novel itself.
I've only read the prologue but I have to leave a comment on this One of the best prologues on this entire site. It actually does the job of hooking you in, I felt like one of the demons listening to the middle age mans story. Gave me goosebumps
A very well written story with great pace and an engaging storyline. The added bonus is that the MC isn't a mess of your typical clichés. Overall very impressed and will be following avidly.
Good story..........."..................................................................... Writing quality great stability of story good everything is good so far
Good story........................................................................................................................................................................
Great I really love it I hope you update soon!!!! I don't want to spoil anything for anyone so... Idk I need more to read like now!!!I love it so far and I'm dying for the next chapter!!!!!
As the author of course I'm going to rate it five stars, do you not know I'm proficient in the Dao of shamelessness? But seriously hope you enjoyed the novel.
Writing Quality is great, there are little to no errors, smooth sentences. Stability of Updates is good, I guess. Since it currently only have 3 Chapters, I can't really say. Story Development is really unique, there are some words I couldn't recognize, and the pace is good. Character Design is also good, a bit unique. Their description is also good. World Background is great so no complaints there.
Give the MC a gold medal!!! This guy is one of the few "reincarnated former power cultivator" who actually has the bearing and wit of someone with millennia of experience and won't suddenly devolve into bouts of teenage protagonist angstyness