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I absolutely love this And i'm excited to see where the story goes from here! I cant wait for another chapter to be added and I hope its soon!
Great story! Love it Everything is good. Sadly, slow updates Hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
This novel has very good character, plot and world development. It draws you in makes you crave more. The only downside to this novel is the infrequent updates.
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Love it. It has a good story line so far and the mc isn't overly arrogant or weak. But my personal favorite is still the demon xD I just live him
This is such an immersive world. The story is written so well. There's a lot of twists and turns. The initial idea is very interesting as well that you learn more about as you read on.
It's still early to tell so I cant yet leave a review of world background or story development. However I find the character and demon duo a unique dynamic that I dont believe I've seen so far, that and for being an original novel the grammar isnt as broken as some translated novels can be. However author himself has said that his updates are a little on the slow side but as long as it's not dropped I dont mind it.
This is really good right now, little to no grammer errors that I see, the story is getting pretty good, and I'm looking forward to where it's going. The story development is really good, not too fast, not too slow. I have a feeling this is gonna get really interesting once the actual plot starts developing. You already have me hooked even though this is just the world building at the moment. Add a few more chapters.
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I absolutely love this And i'm excited to see where the story goes from here! I cant wait for another chapter to be added and I hope its soon!
Great story! Love it Everything is good. Sadly, slow updates Hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
This novel has very good character, plot and world development. It draws you in makes you crave more. The only downside to this novel is the infrequent updates.
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Love it. It has a good story line so far and the mc isn't overly arrogant or weak. But my personal favorite is still the demon xD I just live him
This is such an immersive world. The story is written so well. There's a lot of twists and turns. The initial idea is very interesting as well that you learn more about as you read on.
It's still early to tell so I cant yet leave a review of world background or story development. However I find the character and demon duo a unique dynamic that I dont believe I've seen so far, that and for being an original novel the grammar isnt as broken as some translated novels can be. However author himself has said that his updates are a little on the slow side but as long as it's not dropped I dont mind it.
This is really good right now, little to no grammer errors that I see, the story is getting pretty good, and I'm looking forward to where it's going. The story development is really good, not too fast, not too slow. I have a feeling this is gonna get really interesting once the actual plot starts developing. You already have me hooked even though this is just the world building at the moment. Add a few more chapters.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to check whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.