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- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
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Greate story, i realy like the characters, nice humor mixd in and combat parts are decent so far. Its a bit early into the story with slow and unstable chapters atleast thats how i feel it, but the story is defenetly worth the wait. You can olso get a notefication on the atuors discord whenever eny of there atm 4 novels have a update, 2 of em i read within 24 hours of a new release over MONTHS to show how good it is, ather 2 are good 2 with one being realy new. If it wasent for slow release and the fact i cant give 5 stars development to a novel without 20-30ish chapters at lowest it could have been a 5 star rating.
Great writing and very intuitive storytelling. Just don't stop mid-way and this could really turn out well. Also, quicker releases,.,.,,,.....
Ehh... Slow updates. Write faster. .........................................................................................................
The story is really interesting although I gave the stability of updates 3 stars. I hope you'll update it more since the story intrigues me. Keep up the good work! I can't wait to read the next chapters~ Please update soon! 😁
I’ll just write my useless review and do not care that no one will read it. Normal author. Continue in the same vein. ...................................
Love me. Plz.................................... ill love you back.............. single how gods looking for lov3............. Dont be shy subscribe... Top special. Top of the line fresh off the press amuteur hour !
Greate story, i realy like the characters, nice humor mixd in and combat parts are decent so far. Its a bit early into the story with slow and unstable chapters atleast thats how i feel it, but the story is defenetly worth the wait. You can olso get a notefication on the atuors discord whenever eny of there atm 4 novels have a update, 2 of em i read within 24 hours of a new release over MONTHS to show how good it is, ather 2 are good 2 with one being realy new. If it wasent for slow release and the fact i cant give 5 stars development to a novel without 20-30ish chapters at lowest it could have been a 5 star rating.
Great writing and very intuitive storytelling. Just don't stop mid-way and this could really turn out well. Also, quicker releases,.,.,,,.....
Ehh... Slow updates. Write faster. .........................................................................................................
The story is really interesting although I gave the stability of updates 3 stars. I hope you'll update it more since the story intrigues me. Keep up the good work! I can't wait to read the next chapters~ Please update soon! 😁
I’ll just write my useless review and do not care that no one will read it. Normal author. Continue in the same vein. ...................................