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Vivian held her breath as seconds ticked by, her heart humming and thrumming as she stood under Leo's burning gaze. After entering back to his room, he had let go of her hand, the warmth dissipating from her palm of her hand letting the surface turn cold.
Seeing him look down at his hand, to remove the ring which he often wore on his index ring which was a family heirloom that she had seen Mr. and Mrs. Carmcihael wear; he took it off. The next second he picked up her hand and slipped the ring on to her ring finger.
Sorry for the delay, I had to rewrite a few things to make it better.
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