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This is so good, I have to admit that it change my view on fanfic completely. This is way better than some of the published light novels I know of.
Just finished chapter 774. To be honest, I loved this story. I found myself elated at some parts, crying at some, and laughing at others. If you're thinking about reading this.. do it! It's a lovely read and a well crafted story!
Interesting, because it's interesting I give it five stars. But it would be more interesting if you stopped by my place and found the same thing too!
i don't know why people don't like this author but i really liked it. i mean I can't tell everything about this novel but i really enjoyed this stiory and if anyone wondering I read it on scribblehub.[img=recommend]
The MC has too many harems and leaving mashiro behind makes me really angry so I give it 0 stars. Bruh . Sjhsshshshshhsbsshhshsjsjsnsjsjdhsbsnsbsbsbsbsjs
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Can Someone Tell Me All Fictional Worlds Added to This Fanfiction ??(My Grammar Suck | Sorry)
it was great journey thank you, i really love it i thought it will have more then 800+ ch . . , . his fight with hanma was great too even it didn't take more chapters and drama, but i thught the system will give him task to go other high schools like COTE, or karegami(gambling anime), Beelzebub/ food wars (to save the world[img=recommend]), in eache year,but the ending is great too
one word, thanks two word thank you. Thank you for the book every update was awaited with excitement thank you for this it also taught me some things[img=exp]👍😭🥳😁🍾😀😃😄👍👍
I like character development world building is also good I like everything except after end there should be side story for every akikan 40 fanfic
Gran historia si quieres un personaje que siempre está mejorando, shishio no hace más que lo mejor de si mismo y lo ves cada que avanza la historia, es un gran fic para leer si te interesa el harem y la auto superación. Gracias por el gran trabajo akki, sigue así
well first I read about 300 chapters absolute masterpiece as always from the writer
Great story, personalities and reactions according to the canon, protagonist with a good personality. The negative would be: the system (it is very broken), too many girls seriously you went too far and your strange obsession to mention the adonis of your protagonist
nice keep it up I like the slow paced way you wrote the book you are a good writer
It was amazing journey reading this ff. Even though it has a huge harem, but there is atleast character development which justifies that.
Meskipun ending-nya sedikit kurang memuaskan, tapi secara garis besar ini adalah cerita yang bagus. Tapi, aku pikir akan lebih baik jika penulis menceritakan akhir dari karakter dengan lebih banyak. Mungkin hubungan apa yang terjadi di masa depan? Nah, itulah yang aku pikirkan sebelumnya
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احببت قصة ارفض ان اكون مخادعا في طوكيو اظن انك محترف في الرومنسية وخصوصا في القصص اليابانيه الصراحه لو تقدر تنزل قصة مشابهة وتصحح اخطائك اولا كان الحريم رائعا في البداية والرومانسية رائعه لكن بدات تترك العمل وتركت الكثير من الثغرات دخلت عالم القصة في اسلوبك مرات
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E leído esta historia varias veces por qué es muy interesante su inicio y su desarrollo me gustan pero su final lo aborrezco. Osea como su padre pudo tirarlo? No tiene piloto automático y valance? Nunca uso realmente su fortuna, la imnosis fue para nada, etc bueno tengo varias quejas pero fue una buena historia.
Kalau gak ada aksi dan fokus pada romansa, drama, dan kehidupan sehari hari dari setiap anime sekolah akan sempurna.........................................................................................(...........
Hi akikan!!!! This is probably the first/the best/the most perfect fanfic I had read in this app!!! Last year, I saw this but didn't have any expectations through it because I wasn't a fan of fanfics... But you change my mind! Ever since I read this and caught up, I would always wait for a new chapter.It was agonizing and satisfying at the same time! I probably spent most of my reading time in this novel. I also began to read your other fanfics and they were all good, but this one's my favorite. Sadly, we reach the end. But thank you for this masterpiece! It was worth it!!!!!!!!!!? I love youuuuu♥️♥️♥️♥️😌
I really love this work probably my top 1-2 fanfic specially the on how the author hate Sorata. I really recommend this novel I'm sure it's a worth time specially for those ran out of novel to read. It sad that it ends but thanks author for sharing this wonderful fanfic.
Great novel is always! The only problem is that he occasionally messes up he and she.
Excellent as always now i no he has a new story but i wonder if there will be another one running along with it now that this one i finished
Ahhhh it finally finched I really loved this story more then all the author other FF. It was an amazing FF and I really hope he write something similar to it in the future . Thanks Author for this wonderful work.
From this novel: Some persevered because of responsibility, some persevered because of hatred, some persevered because of excitement, and some persevered because of love… And Fang Yuan’s answer? He was still expressionless, he continued to move forward relentlessly. I had once screamed, gradually, I lost my voice. I had once cried, gradually, I lost my tears. I had once grieved, gradually, I became able to withstand everything. I had once rejoiced, gradually, I became unmoved by the world. And now! All I have left is an expressionless face, my gaze is as tough as a monolith, only perseverance remains in my heart. This is my own, an insignificant character, Fang Yuan’s — Perseverance!
This is so good, I have to admit that it change my view on fanfic completely. This is way better than some of the published light novels I know of.
Just finished chapter 774. To be honest, I loved this story. I found myself elated at some parts, crying at some, and laughing at others. If you're thinking about reading this.. do it! It's a lovely read and a well crafted story!
Interesting, because it's interesting I give it five stars. But it would be more interesting if you stopped by my place and found the same thing too!
i don't know why people don't like this author but i really liked it. i mean I can't tell everything about this novel but i really enjoyed this stiory and if anyone wondering I read it on scribblehub.[img=recommend]
The MC has too many harems and leaving mashiro behind makes me really angry so I give it 0 stars. Bruh . Sjhsshshshshhsbsshhshsjsjsnsjsjdhsbsnsbsbsbsbsjs
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Can Someone Tell Me All Fictional Worlds Added to This Fanfiction ??(My Grammar Suck | Sorry)
it was great journey thank you, i really love it i thought it will have more then 800+ ch . . , . his fight with hanma was great too even it didn't take more chapters and drama, but i thught the system will give him task to go other high schools like COTE, or karegami(gambling anime), Beelzebub/ food wars (to save the world[img=recommend]), in eache year,but the ending is great too
one word, thanks two word thank you. Thank you for the book every update was awaited with excitement thank you for this it also taught me some things[img=exp]👍😭🥳😁🍾😀😃😄👍👍
I like character development world building is also good I like everything except after end there should be side story for every akikan 40 fanfic
Gran historia si quieres un personaje que siempre está mejorando, shishio no hace más que lo mejor de si mismo y lo ves cada que avanza la historia, es un gran fic para leer si te interesa el harem y la auto superación. Gracias por el gran trabajo akki, sigue así
well first I read about 300 chapters absolute masterpiece as always from the writer
Great story, personalities and reactions according to the canon, protagonist with a good personality. The negative would be: the system (it is very broken), too many girls seriously you went too far and your strange obsession to mention the adonis of your protagonist
nice keep it up I like the slow paced way you wrote the book you are a good writer
It was amazing journey reading this ff. Even though it has a huge harem, but there is atleast character development which justifies that.
Meskipun ending-nya sedikit kurang memuaskan, tapi secara garis besar ini adalah cerita yang bagus. Tapi, aku pikir akan lebih baik jika penulis menceritakan akhir dari karakter dengan lebih banyak. Mungkin hubungan apa yang terjadi di masa depan? Nah, itulah yang aku pikirkan sebelumnya
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احببت قصة ارفض ان اكون مخادعا في طوكيو اظن انك محترف في الرومنسية وخصوصا في القصص اليابانيه الصراحه لو تقدر تنزل قصة مشابهة وتصحح اخطائك اولا كان الحريم رائعا في البداية والرومانسية رائعه لكن بدات تترك العمل وتركت الكثير من الثغرات دخلت عالم القصة في اسلوبك مرات
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E leído esta historia varias veces por qué es muy interesante su inicio y su desarrollo me gustan pero su final lo aborrezco. Osea como su padre pudo tirarlo? No tiene piloto automático y valance? Nunca uso realmente su fortuna, la imnosis fue para nada, etc bueno tengo varias quejas pero fue una buena historia.
Kalau gak ada aksi dan fokus pada romansa, drama, dan kehidupan sehari hari dari setiap anime sekolah akan sempurna.........................................................................................(...........
Hi akikan!!!! This is probably the first/the best/the most perfect fanfic I had read in this app!!! Last year, I saw this but didn't have any expectations through it because I wasn't a fan of fanfics... But you change my mind! Ever since I read this and caught up, I would always wait for a new chapter.It was agonizing and satisfying at the same time! I probably spent most of my reading time in this novel. I also began to read your other fanfics and they were all good, but this one's my favorite. Sadly, we reach the end. But thank you for this masterpiece! It was worth it!!!!!!!!!!? I love youuuuu♥️♥️♥️♥️😌
I really love this work probably my top 1-2 fanfic specially the on how the author hate Sorata. I really recommend this novel I'm sure it's a worth time specially for those ran out of novel to read. It sad that it ends but thanks author for sharing this wonderful fanfic.
Great novel is always! The only problem is that he occasionally messes up he and she.
Excellent as always now i no he has a new story but i wonder if there will be another one running along with it now that this one i finished
Ahhhh it finally finched I really loved this story more then all the author other FF. It was an amazing FF and I really hope he write something similar to it in the future . Thanks Author for this wonderful work.
From this novel: Some persevered because of responsibility, some persevered because of hatred, some persevered because of excitement, and some persevered because of love… And Fang Yuan’s answer? He was still expressionless, he continued to move forward relentlessly. I had once screamed, gradually, I lost my voice. I had once cried, gradually, I lost my tears. I had once grieved, gradually, I became able to withstand everything. I had once rejoiced, gradually, I became unmoved by the world. And now! All I have left is an expressionless face, my gaze is as tough as a monolith, only perseverance remains in my heart. This is my own, an insignificant character, Fang Yuan’s — Perseverance!