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Hi! This is Ada, an editor of the international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I. I see great potential in your book, but your book is so underrated here. Thus, I invited you to join the contest a week ago. Please reply to me. Let’s discuss in detail.
FREE ENTRY CONTEST! Contend for a total of $30,000！！！ Hi! Many authors have won big cash prizes in our SWA II. Now Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I is hot in progress. It is your turn to win with your suspense stories and thrillers this time. We have a financial support program for every entry, not to mention the access to the grand prizes and publishing your books in hardcover. Just imagine your book on the shelf with a best-seller golden label! Both posted stories and new stories can join us. Don't miss this chance, as your writing deserves much more. Join us now! Please email adaren06*@*gmail.com (delete *). for more details.
I love your novel! It is a great story! I’m a representative editor from Stary.ltd. If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *).
I love your novel! It is a great story! I’m a representative editor from Stary.ltd. If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact adaringdom*@*gmail.com(delete *).
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to check whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Just start to read...Furthermore its comes under one of my fav plot " weak to Strong through hardships".This kind of story magnetiz my intrest.
The story is very good. The characters are well developed. Chapters are a bit short.....................................................................................................................
Very good novel, just slow release unfortunately, but let's cut the author some slack. It's an original so welp. ...............................................................................................
I dont read the chapter yet.. But seeing 2 month just only 16 chapter.. I decide to read it later.. Wait till the release stabilized.. . .............
Hey guys, author here. Since there have been claims that my reviews are fake, let me defend myself a bit. Most reviews here are from family and friends. I asked them to read and give me their honest thoughts, and so they did. Some didn't even give a full 5.0 stars. :)
En mi opinion, hay muchas cosas muy bien que este historia. Primero, los caracteres son muy bueno y me gusta mucho. Tambien, el authro escribe mucho que el personalidad de ellos. Si tu piensas que este historia es no bueno, deberias mortir
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This is such a good book. I've fallen in love with the world and characters in a mere 5 chapters. I really hope the author will continue to write and update constantly. I'd totally support him on patreon but I have no money.
This book is quite good. For a Webnovel original, you can’t expect much better. I found this little book quite surprising, since most Qidian originals are really bad anime fanfictions, but this is as good as most xuanhuan or fantasy light novels.
This novel is everything you want it to be. It's hilarious but realistic. It's exciting yet logical. The author leaves you wanting more the more you read. Too bad it's only a new novel.
I cannot believe that this type of book has not been written in the past, even though human beings have lived for so long, because it is so good, and i really like this book, and the author is excellent, and the writing is superb, and the characters are fantastic, and the world background is fascinating and it is very good.
Very good. Tremendous writing. Commendable. "Bobnana" is gonna make writing great again. All aspects: good. Fun to read. Quite enjoyable. Spectacular. Congratulations. Good.
I'm a ****** man. I see an Asian guy complaining about white people food, I upvote. This story is hilarious but realist compared to normal light novels. No dumb MC with 50 girls of 50 races falling for him for now at least. HOpefully stys dat way
I mean it's a pretty decent read, but not the mish-mash genre out there. If you have some time to kill, then sure go ahead and read it, but if not, then don't bother.
What can I say? This novel doesn't deserve anything other than 5 stars. The update stability is once a day which is decent. The development so far has been funny and interesting. Arkologia seems like a nice mish-mash of Chinese novels and Japanese novels.
Hi guys, I'm the author! I'm really looking forward to this journey with you all, and I hope you can support me! It's gonna be a really fun ride! I'll try to update once a day, and maybe even the occasional bonus chapter.
Really interesting plot. I wish their were more chapters, but 1 chapter a day is already really good for Qidian Originals I guess. The World is interesting, nothing like I've seen before, tho I've read many wuxia and xianxia novels.
As other reviewers have been saying, this is honestly such an interesting read. I don't think this type of genre has ever been tried before. The main character Wu Fa isn't your typical annoying sexy wuxia MC nor the dumb anime harem lead. Bringing guns into a fantasy/xianxia setting is so genius that I'm surprised few others have done this before. Looking forward to more chapters!
The plot of this novel is amazing. So far, the writing is unconventional but hilariously entertaining. The main character isn't stupid or a big jerk. He is quite relatable. I am really looking forward to how this novel will progress! If you are a fan of wuxia, scifi, or fantasy, you should definitely read this!
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Although many individuals may view this story as a childish fantasy, it was quite apparent to my eyes that this author is truly one of the greatest intellectuals of our time. The story features exceptional writing skills, and it is apparent that he/she is well versed in modern conventions. The structure of the story so far is well thought out and very promising. Another thing that this author excels at is the world design. While reading, I felt myself transported to this fictional world, and I pored over the lore and backstory in the novel. In my opinion, the greatest aspect of this future bestseller is the characters. Each character was created equally, and it shows in the beautiful dialogues and interactions between characters. For example, the main character, Wu Fa, serves as a juxtaposition to the odd and other worldy creatures, but also as a metaphor, revealing a deeper meaning. Wu Fa is serves to show the deep corruption of government officials in the current world. This is only one example, but almost every character has a similar role and hidden story. Overall, I found this to be one of the greatest pieces of literature i have ever read, even though it is ongoing. I sincerely apologize to all others who do not recognize the beauty and nuances of this author's writing.
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The book takes a unique approach to a storyline that at first would seem to be bland. The author does a fantastic job of keeping you interested and I couldn't put this book down. I can't wait to see more work from this guy.
This book has a very interesting premise! An Asian guy in a Middle-Age magical genre setting? I'm very much looking forward to future chapters.
Hi! I’m still waiting for your reply. If your are interested in our international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I, Please email adaren06*@*gmail.com (delete *) for more details.
Hi! This is Ada, an editor of the international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I. I see great potential in your book, but your book is so underrated here. Thus, I invited you to join the contest a week ago. Please reply to me. Let’s discuss in detail.
FREE ENTRY CONTEST! Contend for a total of $30,000！！！ Hi! Many authors have won big cash prizes in our SWA II. Now Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I is hot in progress. It is your turn to win with your suspense stories and thrillers this time. We have a financial support program for every entry, not to mention the access to the grand prizes and publishing your books in hardcover. Just imagine your book on the shelf with a best-seller golden label! Both posted stories and new stories can join us. Don't miss this chance, as your writing deserves much more. Join us now! Please email adaren06*@*gmail.com (delete *). for more details.
I love your novel! It is a great story! I’m a representative editor from Stary.ltd. If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *).
I love your novel! It is a great story! I’m a representative editor from Stary.ltd. If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact adaringdom*@*gmail.com(delete *).
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to check whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Just start to read...Furthermore its comes under one of my fav plot " weak to Strong through hardships".This kind of story magnetiz my intrest.
The story is very good. The characters are well developed. Chapters are a bit short.....................................................................................................................
Very good novel, just slow release unfortunately, but let's cut the author some slack. It's an original so welp. ...............................................................................................
I dont read the chapter yet.. But seeing 2 month just only 16 chapter.. I decide to read it later.. Wait till the release stabilized.. . .............
Hey guys, author here. Since there have been claims that my reviews are fake, let me defend myself a bit. Most reviews here are from family and friends. I asked them to read and give me their honest thoughts, and so they did. Some didn't even give a full 5.0 stars. :)
En mi opinion, hay muchas cosas muy bien que este historia. Primero, los caracteres son muy bueno y me gusta mucho. Tambien, el authro escribe mucho que el personalidad de ellos. Si tu piensas que este historia es no bueno, deberias mortir
Amazing story !!! Sgoisvsjvajwvwjvwkabakaguava ajaiaguavajbas s sjvsjsvsjsvsjbsbsnsjsbsns jbsjs shsbhs shsbhs hshhss hshsbsj sjbsjsbsjbs sjsbsjsbjsvsjs!skhdlhxbxjxnxhxlhzkhzkhzkgzlhzlhzlhxhxhdmhd
This is such a good book. I've fallen in love with the world and characters in a mere 5 chapters. I really hope the author will continue to write and update constantly. I'd totally support him on patreon but I have no money.
This book is quite good. For a Webnovel original, you can’t expect much better. I found this little book quite surprising, since most Qidian originals are really bad anime fanfictions, but this is as good as most xuanhuan or fantasy light novels.
This novel is everything you want it to be. It's hilarious but realistic. It's exciting yet logical. The author leaves you wanting more the more you read. Too bad it's only a new novel.
I cannot believe that this type of book has not been written in the past, even though human beings have lived for so long, because it is so good, and i really like this book, and the author is excellent, and the writing is superb, and the characters are fantastic, and the world background is fascinating and it is very good.
Very good. Tremendous writing. Commendable. "Bobnana" is gonna make writing great again. All aspects: good. Fun to read. Quite enjoyable. Spectacular. Congratulations. Good.
I'm a ****** man. I see an Asian guy complaining about white people food, I upvote. This story is hilarious but realist compared to normal light novels. No dumb MC with 50 girls of 50 races falling for him for now at least. HOpefully stys dat way
I mean it's a pretty decent read, but not the mish-mash genre out there. If you have some time to kill, then sure go ahead and read it, but if not, then don't bother.
What can I say? This novel doesn't deserve anything other than 5 stars. The update stability is once a day which is decent. The development so far has been funny and interesting. Arkologia seems like a nice mish-mash of Chinese novels and Japanese novels.
Hi guys, I'm the author! I'm really looking forward to this journey with you all, and I hope you can support me! It's gonna be a really fun ride! I'll try to update once a day, and maybe even the occasional bonus chapter.
Really interesting plot. I wish their were more chapters, but 1 chapter a day is already really good for Qidian Originals I guess. The World is interesting, nothing like I've seen before, tho I've read many wuxia and xianxia novels.
As other reviewers have been saying, this is honestly such an interesting read. I don't think this type of genre has ever been tried before. The main character Wu Fa isn't your typical annoying sexy wuxia MC nor the dumb anime harem lead. Bringing guns into a fantasy/xianxia setting is so genius that I'm surprised few others have done this before. Looking forward to more chapters!
The plot of this novel is amazing. So far, the writing is unconventional but hilariously entertaining. The main character isn't stupid or a big jerk. He is quite relatable. I am really looking forward to how this novel will progress! If you are a fan of wuxia, scifi, or fantasy, you should definitely read this!
Spoiler de révélation Although many individuals may view this story as a childish fantasy, it was quite apparent to my eyes that this author is truly one of the greatest intellectuals of our time. The story features exceptional writing skills, and it is apparent that he/she is well versed in modern conventions. The structure of the story so far is well thought out and very promising. Another thing that this author excels at is the world design. While reading, I felt myself transported to this fictional world, and I pored over the lore and backstory in the novel. In my opinion, the greatest aspect of this future bestseller is the characters. Each character was created equally, and it shows in the beautiful dialogues and interactions between characters. For example, the main character, Wu Fa, serves as a juxtaposition to the odd and other worldy creatures, but also as a metaphor, revealing a deeper meaning. Wu Fa is serves to show the deep corruption of government officials in the current world. This is only one example, but almost every character has a similar role and hidden story. Overall, I found this to be one of the greatest pieces of literature i have ever read, even though it is ongoing. I sincerely apologize to all others who do not recognize the beauty and nuances of this author's writing.
Spoiler de révélation The book takes a unique approach to a storyline that at first would seem to be bland. The author does a fantastic job of keeping you interested and I couldn't put this book down. I can't wait to see more work from this guy.
This book has a very interesting premise! An Asian guy in a Middle-Age magical genre setting? I'm very much looking forward to future chapters.
Hi! I’m still waiting for your reply. If your are interested in our international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I, Please email adaren06*@*gmail.com (delete *) for more details.