Synopsis
One day, every human transmigrated and spread randomly from the earth into another world as some kind of game for a higher being.
When Elias suddenly wake up, he realizes that everything around him seems familiar. His master and his friends are still alive. Most importantly, he remembers everything that will happen in the following years.
He comes back to when every nightmare starts.
This time, he won't let them sacrifice themselves for him.
This time is his turn to protect them.
-- Classement
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-- Power
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- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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A story about a dungeon master with no to little dungeon building. Not much world building. Character is not flesh out and os confusing. Writing quality is mediocre at least and above mediocre at best.
Seems like a fun story so far, gave four of the five categories 5 stars. Would enjoy the story a lot more if the writing quality was better. Example from the beginning of chapter 24: "In a gloomy and narrow underground (adverb, underground what?), goblins' scream (screams) echoes (echo) as they turn into cinders (not clear. maybe "as their bodies are reduced to cinders"?). Their last expression was filled with disbelief ("Their expressions filled with disbelief", not sure how they have an expression when they were just reduced to cinders though?), couldn't be comprehended (they couldn't comprehend) why another goblin wants to kill them now (why another goblin would want to kill them). That goblin act of slaughter at this moment can ruin the ritual (what). On the contrary of those goblins expression of incredulity (what), their attacker is gazing at this blazing scenery without any fluctuation of emotions (without emotion / with no emotion / blankly). He flails his wands while mumbles (mumbling) some incantation, which makes other goblins notice their clatter (what)."
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While not perfect, I like it lots. It reminds me of the Korean light novel reincarnator. I like the world and characters. Keep writing. Couple of words mixed up here and there. But otherwise 😘
Can and will be updating this review later once there is more chapters but i have to say so far I'm loving the book, at first was kinda confused about the dungeon in the title but he acquired it a unique way which was awesome and just hope that the author doesn't drop this one.
Nice story so far. I like that he dont become a dungeon master by some random luck but actually need to fight for it and that runes systeme is nice. Even the " why " he got back in time is nicely done . Keep up the good work.
Volume 1
- 1 Chapter 1 - Twilight 5 years ago
- 2 Chapter 2 - Dawn 5 years ago
- 3 Chapter 3 - Entrapment 5 years ago
- 4 Chapter 4 - Encounter 5 years ago
- 5 Chapter 5 - Clash 5 years ago
- 6 Chapter 6 - Blunder 5 years ago
- 7 Chapter 7 - Wager 5 years ago
- 8 Chapter 8 - Apace 5 years ago
- 9 Chapter 9 - Covenant 5 years ago
- 10 Chapter 10 - Emporium 5 years ago
- 11 Chapter 10.1 - Dither 5 years ago
- 12 Chapter 11 - Manslayer 5 years ago
- 13 Chapter 12 - Impart 5 years ago
- 14 Chapter 13 - Valedictory 5 years ago
Volume 2
- 15 Chapter 14 - Ground Zero 5 years ago
- 16 Chapter 15 - Prudence 5 years ago
- 17 Chapter 16 - Agony 5 years ago
- 18 Chapter 17 - Atrocity 5 years ago
- 19 Chapter 18 - Family 5 years ago
- 20 Chapter 19 - Uncustomary 5 years ago
- 21 Chapter 20 - Immolate 5 years ago
- 22 Chapter 21 - Notion 5 years ago
- 23 Chapter 22 - Inception 5 years ago
- 24 Chapter 23 - Fealty 5 years ago
- 25 Chapter 24 - Crumple 5 years ago
- 26 Chapter 25 - Insight 5 years ago
This is a good story. This is different from the usual 'going back in time' novel. There is a definite reason the MC goes back in time, and there's a valid concrete reason he can't tell anyone else. The starting plot is not bad, the only problem is the grammar that is not realy good, but overall it is still very readable, so only people who's sper alergic with gramatical error should mind. I won't give a final rating yet, as we can't see updates stability, story development and character design yet as it hasn't been long since the start of this story but I have high hope for this story. This is my first serious review, so do pardon me for immature remarks.