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imagine if Martial Gamer had an mc with no thoughts or character at all, the game he played was empty undeveloped fluff, fights were boring nonsense, and every character was a single sentence gag. then imagine something slightly worse then that.
A fun read. I love the thrills of the chase, and out witting enemies, and how the MC isn't your usual Wuxia-world type arrogant bast**d who is always underestimated by the enemy, and has harem wives. Please continue past 800 chapters, as it's already reaching a climax in the story, and will end soon after.
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I like this novel, it's light and funny with a pretty simple plot. A great break from emotional wreckage that is Omniscient Reader's and Omori.
fucking shit mc still dumb?? after months of playing even kid can understand the games what about more you a teacher in modern world. haha .i dunno why the author design him like that story is good but dumb mc obvious matter become puzzle to him?? after reading it till 135 mc is still dumb i dunno why. there is many flaws in the story. if author is making it comedy still not viable. damm mc is strong but the author gave him below50 IQ when came to understanding of game mechanics despite of guidances by his teammates and friends
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Hello? is this thing on hiatus or dropped? i like this kind of fun story n not hard to read. but the game doesn't seem too advanced, maybe the time sett is in the early years of 'real' in game.
This a really cool book. the idea of being a mage that fights up close is awesome. It has great plot development and introduces well thought out characters.
This needs to be finished. I hope that Webnovel does the courtesy of allowing this novel to be completed. Even though this is different than butterfly blue’s other novel, this is at least worthy enough to allow the last 170 chapters to be done.
I've only read up to chapter 80 so far, but I like how the story is action filled and makes you imagine what the scene looks like and the layout of the cities as well.
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I can’t believe this was cancelled. There are only 170 chapters left. Please finish this Webnovel!!! I know this was not as popular as the kings avatar but you can’t leave us hanging on the conclusion!!!
This is the second novel I read of the author butterfly blue, first one being “The king’s avatar”. I like this novel. It’s funny and full of action. The world background is also very nice. I like the character design, but sometimes it feels like even though he is smart, in some situations he turns idiotic and sometimes it feels like he is stupid and his actions make him make me feel like he is a hypocrite. But overall he is a very nice guy and a good character.
This book is a fun read. I wish it updated faster but I give it 5 stars for visibility. This is such a good system and I enjoyed the way different missions and objectives are laid out. My favorite part of vrmmorpg novels are the way the game system is brought to life and interesting ways for the characters to beat the system.
The story is fun AND funny, with the MC as a kung fu master in an unappreciative modern day who decides this vmmorpg is the perfect place to practice his kung fu w/o actually killing ppl. The supporting characters are hilarious and play off each other really well, while the main antagonist is not evil, persay, but annoying tunnel-vision in his campaign to ruin the MC. Sometimes the arcs can get a bit tedious and drag on, but overall it's a good read. The translations have been on point and consistent; no complaints from me! I'm disappointed the translation is stopping before its completed though...I hope it will get picked up and completed at some point in the near future 🤞
I love this book as much as TKA. It is fun and warm. There are no heroes or villains here. Just people doing what they love doing. Even opponents become friends. This book is about a guy having fun in an online game, applying his life skills that he wasn’t able to use before. He gains friends, competitors and a lot of attention on forums. It’s life a slice-of-life story for me.
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Very nice novel Interesting story line Makes you ask for more 👍👍👍👍👍👍 Hoping to you enjoy it the same as me Enjoy reading guys 👌👌👌👌👌
Overall the plot isn’t super well outlined as much as one man’s adventures in a VRMMO but aside from some cringe elements in the beginning and some weird game design decisions here and there, it’s a fun casual read and I’d very much like to see how it concludes
I really like reading reading this Webnovel it has good story development and fun characters. The MC goes against the model the game designers planes and developers cheat like abilities through the shear hard work in real life that MC has done his whole life.
Spoiler de révélation This is a great novel. The characters are interesting, the setting is fun, and the game details are enjoyable. I really wish this novel would get more love.
One of the best novels here. Not as good as Kings Avatar, but still good. The only thing that is lacking is overall plot motivation. But characters are good, humor is funny, arcs are interesting
A real fun story. I did not expect much in the beginning, but got sucked into the story immediately and binge-read 700 chapters. As expected of Butterfly Blue!
Website : qidian china Views : 14.22million Rating : 9.2(1937) Chapters : 980 approx Status : completed Word count : 3.75million author level : platinum No of works : 6 Disscussion : 18495 Year started : 2008 Chinese title : 网游之近战法师
I have read it a long time ago, and now i reread it because i don t remember a good part and i think they are more chapter than before. The begining is basic, not sure to continue because if i lose memory for it must be not so interesting. Maybe another review later.
This is a story of someone who doesn’t care about anything but practicing his martial arts and fighting whoever he can. The simple mindset of his is matching with the cleverness of the ploys and the high level strategies. No romance is flushed out, he has maybe 3 power ups before he stagnates at the peak and the game itself is not explored deeply, instead it focuses on player vs player interactions and plots
imagine if Martial Gamer had an mc with no thoughts or character at all, the game he played was empty undeveloped fluff, fights were boring nonsense, and every character was a single sentence gag. then imagine something slightly worse then that.
A fun read. I love the thrills of the chase, and out witting enemies, and how the MC isn't your usual Wuxia-world type arrogant bast**d who is always underestimated by the enemy, and has harem wives. Please continue past 800 chapters, as it's already reaching a climax in the story, and will end soon after.
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Spoiler de révélation I like this novel, it's light and funny with a pretty simple plot. A great break from emotional wreckage that is Omniscient Reader's and Omori.
fucking shit mc still dumb?? after months of playing even kid can understand the games what about more you a teacher in modern world. haha .i dunno why the author design him like that story is good but dumb mc obvious matter become puzzle to him?? after reading it till 135 mc is still dumb i dunno why. there is many flaws in the story. if author is making it comedy still not viable. damm mc is strong but the author gave him below50 IQ when came to understanding of game mechanics despite of guidances by his teammates and friends
expexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexp
Spoiler de révélation Hello? is this thing on hiatus or dropped? i like this kind of fun story n not hard to read. but the game doesn't seem too advanced, maybe the time sett is in the early years of 'real' in game.
This a really cool book. the idea of being a mage that fights up close is awesome. It has great plot development and introduces well thought out characters.
This needs to be finished. I hope that Webnovel does the courtesy of allowing this novel to be completed. Even though this is different than butterfly blue’s other novel, this is at least worthy enough to allow the last 170 chapters to be done.
I've only read up to chapter 80 so far, but I like how the story is action filled and makes you imagine what the scene looks like and the layout of the cities as well.
HD odurhehahdydbetegdbchg d f. fhdhffcrgrurfbfjfjdnfirhfbiddirheuegyejgd d dd bsb u h h. U. Cufrhfjfifu8furfhfhfhejrr r rr dr. Ejeidkdkdjridjdudfjfdif
Ggh h.c gg n.v hnvvv CNN bgvvgbgggb bbn vvggggdafhhj buzz fjbyvg8yyyjgygcfhyhguugy6 inc. Tf cfg hit the company on Wednesday to announce its fourth annual dividend on Thursday in the first half as a result of the
I can’t believe this was cancelled. There are only 170 chapters left. Please finish this Webnovel!!! I know this was not as popular as the kings avatar but you can’t leave us hanging on the conclusion!!!
This is the second novel I read of the author butterfly blue, first one being “The king’s avatar”. I like this novel. It’s funny and full of action. The world background is also very nice. I like the character design, but sometimes it feels like even though he is smart, in some situations he turns idiotic and sometimes it feels like he is stupid and his actions make him make me feel like he is a hypocrite. But overall he is a very nice guy and a good character.
This book is a fun read. I wish it updated faster but I give it 5 stars for visibility. This is such a good system and I enjoyed the way different missions and objectives are laid out. My favorite part of vrmmorpg novels are the way the game system is brought to life and interesting ways for the characters to beat the system.
The story is fun AND funny, with the MC as a kung fu master in an unappreciative modern day who decides this vmmorpg is the perfect place to practice his kung fu w/o actually killing ppl. The supporting characters are hilarious and play off each other really well, while the main antagonist is not evil, persay, but annoying tunnel-vision in his campaign to ruin the MC. Sometimes the arcs can get a bit tedious and drag on, but overall it's a good read. The translations have been on point and consistent; no complaints from me! I'm disappointed the translation is stopping before its completed though...I hope it will get picked up and completed at some point in the near future 🤞
I love this book as much as TKA. It is fun and warm. There are no heroes or villains here. Just people doing what they love doing. Even opponents become friends. This book is about a guy having fun in an online game, applying his life skills that he wasn’t able to use before. He gains friends, competitors and a lot of attention on forums. It’s life a slice-of-life story for me.
Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good
Very nice novel Interesting story line Makes you ask for more 👍👍👍👍👍👍 Hoping to you enjoy it the same as me Enjoy reading guys 👌👌👌👌👌
Overall the plot isn’t super well outlined as much as one man’s adventures in a VRMMO but aside from some cringe elements in the beginning and some weird game design decisions here and there, it’s a fun casual read and I’d very much like to see how it concludes
I really like reading reading this Webnovel it has good story development and fun characters. The MC goes against the model the game designers planes and developers cheat like abilities through the shear hard work in real life that MC has done his whole life.
Spoiler de révélation This is a great novel. The characters are interesting, the setting is fun, and the game details are enjoyable. I really wish this novel would get more love.
One of the best novels here. Not as good as Kings Avatar, but still good. The only thing that is lacking is overall plot motivation. But characters are good, humor is funny, arcs are interesting
A real fun story. I did not expect much in the beginning, but got sucked into the story immediately and binge-read 700 chapters. As expected of Butterfly Blue!
Website : qidian china Views : 14.22million Rating : 9.2(1937) Chapters : 980 approx Status : completed Word count : 3.75million author level : platinum No of works : 6 Disscussion : 18495 Year started : 2008 Chinese title : 网游之近战法师
I have read it a long time ago, and now i reread it because i don t remember a good part and i think they are more chapter than before. The begining is basic, not sure to continue because if i lose memory for it must be not so interesting. Maybe another review later.
This is a story of someone who doesn’t care about anything but practicing his martial arts and fighting whoever he can. The simple mindset of his is matching with the cleverness of the ploys and the high level strategies. No romance is flushed out, he has maybe 3 power ups before he stagnates at the peak and the game itself is not explored deeply, instead it focuses on player vs player interactions and plots