Battle Royale of the Sinners

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DamnPlotArmor

I'm going to put my humble self at average 3 stars because I'm not shameless enough to show off my broken English and cringe worthy of terrible grammar I put into this novel. I promise that I will trying my best to keep up with at least one chapter a day. Eventhough it took me two freaking days to come up with the first chapter. For some reason, every times I reread my work, I ended up fixing things here and there. 10 drafts later, I still found flaws and kept deleting this line and added this line. 20 hours later, I was banging my head against the wall and gave up rechecking the quality and post it here right away. Please have mercy on this poor soul and go easy on me ... MEAW!

LV 5

BadKrow

This isn't your typical reincarnation story. Which is pretty great in my opinion. If you enjoy stories about war or anything related to the romance of the three kingdoms. You would enjoy this story despite its flaws. The main character isn't extremely over powered and the author was able to devise a proper balancing mechanic in the beginning. If I only read the first half of the story I would've of given it a 5.0. The reason why I had to rate it a lower level is because of several reasons. The first reason is the main character is starting to become a different person. In the beginning of the story you are introduced to a main character that understand he isn't a genius. He has to be cautious and mindful of all his actions. Its the reason why he spent so much time and effort to recruit capable strategists. He gathers information, asks for opinions before he makes any major decisions. Yet, now the main character no longer asks for their opinions and makes rash decisions. The second reason is the main character doesn't exactly understand how the mechanisms of this world actually work. Neither does his lover who was a demon from hell. Her mother does and shes currently in the world as well. If it was the former main character after he discovered she was in this world he would've of asked her how the rules of the world work in order to make himself stronger and used this advantage against other sinners. But this hasn't happened which makes it even more infuriating! The third reason is a pretty big one. You know whats worse than a omnipotent and omniscient main character? An omnipotent and omniscient antagonist. Don't you love novels when the antagonist/s is able to predict, anticipate and convince every other person in the world to go after the main character for no reason at all? Whats the likelihood a person in modern earth would have extensive knowledge of the waring states in china? Unless you are obsessed with dynasty warriors, a war tactics addict or dramas from this period its very unlikely. Yet the remaining sinners are all quite knowledgeable about this period. Hell even the former antagonist that was the sole mortal enemy to the main character was. Which wouldn't make any sense with his backstory. The fourth reason is the novel no longer has any "balance." In the beginning of the novel we had a system where you'd lose lifespan when you used a skill. The "players" in the world had a advantage over the natives because of their skills, but they had to pay in lifespan. For example one of the sinners has a skill that can can create anything. From skills from other people, to gold, to even clones of other people. He can literally make anything. How the **** is this even legal. No, how isn't this person dead already. This isn't a skill its a goddamn console command. The author is nerfing the main character while buffing his opponents. Did the main character end up playing ******** mode? The fifth reason is the current plot has become so convoluted it can be frustrating for a new reader to get into the novel. A perfect example is in the story we learn that heaven and hell exists. You have angels and demons and humans can become either one after they die depending on their karma. So in that case what the hell is a cultivator? Is he just a angel than because he has angel wings? Why is he trying to turn the native population in world into angels? Why is it possible for a sinner to become a angel? With all their negative karma aren't they more suited to become demons instead? Wasn't the reason why they came into the world was so wash away their sins? Wasn't the reason they came into this world in the first place? But now without completing the game they can just become angels?! Why isn't their a demon trying to turn the native population into demons? We learn that heaven and hell went to war, but we don't know the reason. We haven't had any chapters dedicated to it either. I'm not trying to be nitpicky I actually want the author to succeed. Hes working hard and hes pretty dedicated and it sucks to see the novel in such low rankings. In my honest opinion this novel probably needs a remake to make it more palatable to new audiences. The karma thing you had with the main character and the dead antagonist would've of been more interesting. For example after he died his soul could have ended up corrupting or taking over another sinner making that person want to kill the main character for revenge. Or he could've been consumed by his heart devil in his lust for power. Maybe he could've of corrupted the angel? The angel seems to have potential to be the final boss, but in current plot shes just a minor villain which really wastes her potential. I really enjoy your other novel by the way. You might want to rename it and give it a better cover I'm sure you'd get a lot more interest that way. Its a shame you need to focus on this one more.

LV 2

Joseph_Kioko

This is a very addicting book.Best book on heaven hell and redemption. This fully brings out your inner Angel demon.it also teaches history in a fun way. This is a book for the strong not the weak. I also know how many souls of sin and souls of virtues I have. I hope the author finishes it quickly but I will give him the time he needs

LV 5

My_Surname

-Trully, underated.- Hidden gem- Spoiler....ish ? -no storyline spoiler tough- Ø read at your own discretion- ○The concept of the story is amazing, and the protagonist is not bound to just one set of abilities. ○The reason of reincarnation is justified. (Explained) ○The historical facts are interesting, good, and not anoying (as there is no overflow of info either) - ○Relatable MC (extra-super bonus point) ○Halfish.. korean-chinise style of writing... ? Idk-just me ○Almost to none-to no brain dead f•ing 'young master'type-people ○Reliable update speed (1/day) ○No iritating plot armor ○System/halfish system story

LV 12

GrimReaperIsHere

This novel is the Most and interesting I ever read upon and I even spend $90 jus to unlock chapters cause is fOOKING worth it!!! Long Live Immortal Tong!!!!! Hope the next chapter came out asap!!

LV 5

Arentsvelt

This novel is too underrated. This deserved more attention and support from readers around the world. I love how you could make me hate a character at the first few chapter then gradually make me like the character as more chapters pass. Damn! I need more!

LV 5

Randolph03

Good story's foundation Good story's background Good story's pacing Good character's interaction Good character's personality Good character's background Good ... Good ... ... Well, many good things can be reviewed from this novel especially the MC. Not to mention that this story is using a historical reference, which makes is becoming more interesting and moreover since the entrance of the mental girl, some medic terms can also be learnt from here Since I have taken a liking towards the MC, his personality to be more specific, I hope that there won't be abrupt change to his personality and please NO NTR! since I absolutely hate that **** Last but not least, thanks for writing this amazing story and I have to say that your grammar is quite excellent, there's no need to degrade yourself that much since there's only some typo, but the story itself is enchanted further by the fluid grammar used The occassional references and jokes used are also good to keep the mood up Once more, thanks for the novel **: I've rewritten the review for the fourth time since it always failed to post before

LV 5

ROBtheBOB

Was a really great book untill about chapter 27 when it turned into generic crap. Really disappointing as i was really enjoying the story so far but they had to go and ruin it.

LV 5

G_SoulKing

I was enjoying this very much until you pull that soulmate contract bull****. For god's sake she enjoyed eating human brain and drinking his blood. If i am in his shoes i stay far away from her. And if you think the MC needs a girl why don't you just introduce friday or medusa. You could have keep their relationship as a business partner. She is not a FEMALE LEAD material.

LV 11

FallenBlue

Best historical novel here! This story deserves to be number 1 in the historical category. The plot is very engaging and there are always surprises to look forward. MC is cool, (just take out him sometimes being dominated by his wives), witty and not very OP because the autho----the world is against him being a balance breaker. XD AND I LOVE JIA XU! Maybe my review now sounds nonsensical but I can't stop myself from adding this part haha.

LV 4

yun12s

I LIKE THE STORY, BUT I AM SO CURIOUS, HOW CAN WRITERS DO THIS, HARD TO IMAGINE, HOW WIDE IS YOUR WORLD? HAHA. TEACH ME. Seriously, the story shows something about how higher beings played the lives of the humans, killing here and there, it shows the truth about the hearts of a human, survival of the fittest, I believe that the way the writer shows the story is connected to his views and wants in life, an adventure with excitement, a life with a goal. I give 4 star's because of the story is told, but I gave five for the last two , character design because of how clear I can see the characters through words and world background because of how wide, the writer can show it through his writing. All in all, a very nice writer and. Story.

LV 12

DSeraph

I’m really enjoying this novel. Only at ch 127 but so far I’ve really appreciated all the modern references the author has put in it. Also I’m a big fan of the three kingdoms era so any decent historical fiction gets my vote. This story is much better than just decent is my opinion! Thanks Author!

LV 10

purplefire

I'm giving it all 5 stars.. why? (Please don't ask why) its so good you know, just try reading it and you will know what I mean. Its very entertaining (for me, i dont know others), also good english grammar. Every scene were well written and very detailed( as if I'm inside the story) i watched an anime called "difters" so when i stumble upon this novel of yours authornim i was kinda excited because i felt like it has the same theme😃..thank you..il be voting my power stones for this..

LV 4

Swanjen

Humm dear writer u looks good in this performance.of novel.i.like a.lot but i think is missing something find a good girl for this and have a love hsitry too or only an afeir like is something that devils and gods are soing jejej thanks

LV 14

j2310

Great story. Dynamic plot and main characters. One of the best stories I have read. Highly suggest as a must read. Story development is steady and keeps the reader interested and wanting more. Five star quality.

LV 13

Tranqui1ity

I feel know one would give this novel a read because of the genre but FEAR NOT!! This novel is great in its action, world building, character development, and its unique take on the ‘system’ genre. Give it a go, it is definitely worth your time.

LV 11

Natt_Plaisir

Its a pretty good read that has u intreagued the whole time. Sometimes u think u know what's about to happen but they add a twist in a chapter to keep u wanting to read more of it then ever before

LV 7

ABitterDay

interesting story that is based on the three kingdom era with a interesting twist based on a game, story writing quality is pretty good with at least a chapter a day although it is premium, character is designed pretty originally with some twists you wouldnt expect. overall good read so far and hope it doesnt change