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It has a nice character development while also keeping a little carefree vibe i hope you will continue this and dont drop it please it would be much appreciated
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It isn't a bad story but has hardly any world building and goes way to fast and there is a few times that there author says use your imagination it's good but it could be a ton better world building and description wise anyways
More updates more updates more updates more updates more updates. I would have donated power stones but I used mine for today already but tomorrow you will be getting them.
Nothing just want to write a review. I like your story very much so please don't drop it you can have my power stones and good luck keep the story interesting as usual😄😄
I want MORE!!!......😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄
Please don't................ drop........................ this.............................. Fan-Fic...................... ............................................. .................................. ........................................ ...............................
Very Good, Thank you, Please, More Cap per Day. More more more more more more more more more more more more mroe more more more more more more more more more
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this is a great fanfic.. that it is.. great job author-san.. ..............................................................................................................................................................................................
Love this novel, keep up the good work. ?..............................................................................................................??............................
What happened to your stories all the chapters were deleted on both this and fairy tails strongest. .
Just update it everyday I think its good..........................................................................................................................
Nice novel.... My reaction when i was reading chapy One i was literally screaming like ↓↓ Oh my God!!!!!Oh my God!!!!!Oh my God!!!!!Oh my God!!!!!Oh my God!!!!!What the Fuck!!!!!!Fuck!!!!!!What the Fuck!!!!!!What the Fuck!!!!!!What the Fuck!!!!!!What the Fuck!!!!!!What the Fuck!!!!!!What the Fuck!!!!!!What the Fuck!!!!!!....'breathes heavily' Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah 'flips table' then i got smacked, whipped, scolded........... My reaction at the romance Hhhhhhhhhhhhheeeeeeeeeeennnnnnnnnnttttttttttttttaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii please🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 My reaction when i finished reading all the available chapy moooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooreeeeeeeeeee
Muito bom a novel recomendo à todos a acompanhar, não vão se arrepender. ....................................................................................😎
More more more updates 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😎👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Hope that Jin will become saiyajin god in the next 10 years then he will be able to become as powerful as jiren in normal form and destroy him in god form( remerber archangel can destroy them easily so it's normal that a freak like him become insanely powerful if he has ultra instinct + the guidance of whis for more than ten years)
Really good novel 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼
This novel is great 5 stars ............................................................................................................................................................................................
Woah the Fairy tail's strongest is really great with the same author i guess this dragon ball strongest will be great too...Still new so gonna put this in library for now
Same author as fairy tails strongest, one of the worst stories I’ve seen, not including my own. The universe doesn’t speak, many people give away to charity’s sometimes in the billions, thoughtful or not. Can I just say it’s garbage and be done?
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It has a nice character development while also keeping a little carefree vibe i hope you will continue this and dont drop it please it would be much appreciated
dont drop continue doing greit job dont drop continue doing greit job dont drop continue doing greit job dont drop continue doing greit job dont drop continue doing greit job dont drop continue doing greit job dont drop continue doing greit job dont drop continue doing greit job dont drop continue doing greit job dont drop continue doing greit job dont drop continue doing greit job dont drop continue doing greit job dont drop continue doing greit job dont drop continue doing greit job dont drop continue doing greit job dont drop continue doing greit job dont drop continue doing greit job dont drop continue doing greit job dont drop continue doing greit job dont drop continue doing greit job dont drop continue doing greit job dont drop continue doing greit job dont drop continue doing greit job dont drop continue doing greit job dont drop continue doing greit job dont drop continue doing greit job dont drop continue doing greit job dont drop continue doing greit job dont drop continue doing greit job
Spoiler de révélation MMMMMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE...………………………………………… CHAPTERSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SOONNN
It isn't a bad story but has hardly any world building and goes way to fast and there is a few times that there author says use your imagination it's good but it could be a ton better world building and description wise anyways
More updates more updates more updates more updates more updates. I would have donated power stones but I used mine for today already but tomorrow you will be getting them.
Nothing just want to write a review. I like your story very much so please don't drop it you can have my power stones and good luck keep the story interesting as usual😄😄
I want MORE!!!......😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄
Please don't................ drop........................ this.............................. Fan-Fic...................... ............................................. .................................. ........................................ ...............................
Very Good, Thank you, Please, More Cap per Day. More more more more more more more more more more more more mroe more more more more more more more more more
OP Protagonist👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
this is a great fanfic.. that it is.. great job author-san.. ..............................................................................................................................................................................................
Love this novel, keep up the good work. ?..............................................................................................................??............................
What happened to your stories all the chapters were deleted on both this and fairy tails strongest. .
Just update it everyday I think its good..........................................................................................................................
Nice novel.... My reaction when i was reading chapy One i was literally screaming like ↓↓ Oh my God!!!!!Oh my God!!!!!Oh my God!!!!!Oh my God!!!!!Oh my God!!!!!What the Fuck!!!!!!Fuck!!!!!!What the Fuck!!!!!!What the Fuck!!!!!!What the Fuck!!!!!!What the Fuck!!!!!!What the Fuck!!!!!!What the Fuck!!!!!!What the Fuck!!!!!!....'breathes heavily' Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah 'flips table' then i got smacked, whipped, scolded........... My reaction at the romance Hhhhhhhhhhhhheeeeeeeeeeennnnnnnnnnttttttttttttttaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii please🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 My reaction when i finished reading all the available chapy moooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooreeeeeeeeeee
Muito bom a novel recomendo à todos a acompanhar, não vão se arrepender. ....................................................................................😎
More more more updates 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😎👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Hope that Jin will become saiyajin god in the next 10 years then he will be able to become as powerful as jiren in normal form and destroy him in god form( remerber archangel can destroy them easily so it's normal that a freak like him become insanely powerful if he has ultra instinct + the guidance of whis for more than ten years)
Really good novel 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼
This novel is great 5 stars ............................................................................................................................................................................................
Woah the Fairy tail's strongest is really great with the same author i guess this dragon ball strongest will be great too...Still new so gonna put this in library for now
Same author as fairy tails strongest, one of the worst stories I’ve seen, not including my own. The universe doesn’t speak, many people give away to charity’s sometimes in the billions, thoughtful or not. Can I just say it’s garbage and be done?
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.