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So far so good the story is nice. Hope the author continues writing this novel because it has a great story line and the plots are great. Thank you so much author for your effort and time you spent in writing this story for us to read.
I’m sorry that I haven’t written much but my mother health was bad last month and almost this whole month to but don’t worry I’ll have chapters ready for next month. I can always take punishment if everyone think it’s best. We’ll see you next month
I would recommend reading this its not bad and it’s actually pretty interesting. I liked it. P.s: im not a fan of reading but this one is good
The next one may be a little Interesting. Who knows what’s going to far or what’s the story about. If you like what you read like and vote for me.
Spoiler de révélation So far the next chapter is a bit of a challenge but I have two ideas but i don’t know how it should be. Dinner? No dinner ? Leave? Don’t leave?
Spoiler de révélation
Sorry for not updating I last access to this account so I had to go to my backup account so I’ll try to add back the book and the little updates I have
So far so good the story is nice. Hope the author continues writing this novel because it has a great story line and the plots are great. Thank you so much author for your effort and time you spent in writing this story for us to read.
I’m sorry that I haven’t written much but my mother health was bad last month and almost this whole month to but don’t worry I’ll have chapters ready for next month. I can always take punishment if everyone think it’s best. We’ll see you next month
I would recommend reading this its not bad and it’s actually pretty interesting. I liked it. P.s: im not a fan of reading but this one is good
The next one may be a little Interesting. Who knows what’s going to far or what’s the story about. If you like what you read like and vote for me.
Spoiler de révélation So far the next chapter is a bit of a challenge but I have two ideas but i don’t know how it should be. Dinner? No dinner ? Leave? Don’t leave?
Spoiler de révélation
Sorry for not updating I last access to this account so I had to go to my backup account so I’ll try to add back the book and the little updates I have