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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
This should be categorized as science fiction man.. I don't know looks like it. The writer had described the different personality of the characters.. It's better than I expected..
This should be categorized as science fiction man.. I don't know looks like it. The writer had described the different personality of the characters.. It's better than I expected..
at first I thought that the story was a harem.. thank goodness it isnt. I like how the story progresses.. I am now able to imagine the setting of the story. I hope you change the cover..
I am trying to understand the novel more. There is a stable release of chapters at least. Please change the cover. Surely you can find a more beautiful cover than that
I like the story. it reminds me of something. The author can be very secretive, There are parts which needs to be explained further. But it makes me think that there is a deeper story that will unfold
Have you had any regrets of not telling someone your feelings. Have it occurred to you that words could have made a difference if only it was spoken. Moments are best cherished as it becomes memories. "Actions speaks louder than word, but actions without words can be confusing" a kind friend had once said. This is a story about 5 individuals who came from different dimension and planets who was brought to one another by fate, wishes and a promises. I hope you enjoy reading the story.
Wow, this is a new concept. I wonder what does the people from planet hilan are like and how will they be able to adapt with the new environment they are in.. i hope madel and henry would have more scenes together
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
This should be categorized as science fiction man.. I don't know looks like it. The writer had described the different personality of the characters.. It's better than I expected..
This should be categorized as science fiction man.. I don't know looks like it. The writer had described the different personality of the characters.. It's better than I expected..
at first I thought that the story was a harem.. thank goodness it isnt. I like how the story progresses.. I am now able to imagine the setting of the story. I hope you change the cover..
I am trying to understand the novel more. There is a stable release of chapters at least. Please change the cover. Surely you can find a more beautiful cover than that
I like the story. it reminds me of something. The author can be very secretive, There are parts which needs to be explained further. But it makes me think that there is a deeper story that will unfold
Have you had any regrets of not telling someone your feelings. Have it occurred to you that words could have made a difference if only it was spoken. Moments are best cherished as it becomes memories. "Actions speaks louder than word, but actions without words can be confusing" a kind friend had once said. This is a story about 5 individuals who came from different dimension and planets who was brought to one another by fate, wishes and a promises. I hope you enjoy reading the story.
Wow, this is a new concept. I wonder what does the people from planet hilan are like and how will they be able to adapt with the new environment they are in.. i hope madel and henry would have more scenes together
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?