4Critiques
- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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The writing quality needs to be improved and the more one writes the better they get. Although I understood the concept of this novel, the dialogue between characters are hard to follow (who said what...?). I assuming English is not the first language; be patient with author if you read this gem. There is some contradiction between, the present tense and past tense, especially with sentence structuring...which can be fixed with editing. Overall good job author your writing gets better with each chapter that is read. Keep it up!
The story development, the character design and the writing quality are very good. The world background is not very detailed but I will look further to it. Continue your amazing good work.
Oh look, the author can rate so.... why not I just put a 5 all... wew.... Of course i believe my novel is good so i put 5 stars lol... I did my best on this, so please give this novel a chance and read it.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to check whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
The writing quality needs to be improved and the more one writes the better they get. Although I understood the concept of this novel, the dialogue between characters are hard to follow (who said what...?). I assuming English is not the first language; be patient with author if you read this gem. There is some contradiction between, the present tense and past tense, especially with sentence structuring...which can be fixed with editing. Overall good job author your writing gets better with each chapter that is read. Keep it up!
The story development, the character design and the writing quality are very good. The world background is not very detailed but I will look further to it. Continue your amazing good work.
Oh look, the author can rate so.... why not I just put a 5 all... wew.... Of course i believe my novel is good so i put 5 stars lol... I did my best on this, so please give this novel a chance and read it.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to check whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.