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Hh_Hh_6729

the story got completely ruined after chapter 42 it's not worth reading

2yr
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A_Sinner

What a garbage 🤢🤢🤢🤢 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎

3yr
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Skepparn

Actually a pretty decent story until ch42 where it went from an ok story to pass the time when you've got nothing better to do to a ****storm I don't recommend this to anyone, it's barely readable but at ch42 it just is plain and simple, bad Also Author dropped it, couldn't handle people hating on him after ch42

5yr
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HHKing
LV 14 Badge

I'm liking this. All evil must pay. Enjoying large estate living with big beautiful family. Where is the rest? *******************************************************************

5yr
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Requiem_Soul

Trash novel. Mc is so pathetic. And the interaction between him and his wives are close to none. Its like his wives are fuxking mannequin. Op skill? Hah useless. With all those becoming a farmer hahahahhaha. Pathetic as fuxk.

5yr
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lxylf
LV 10 Badge

too bad the story was ruined now Vhvjlfd bkuv. Hjdkldknv. Mjvk lod h kccklssjkkc yilb fg Fk. Ikcllcdk. Gyiksw

5yr
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Lee_lin
LV 13 Badge

Story was good but what with the rapist rival. It wasn't needed it. That ruin for me 😔😒😒😒😒😂😒😔😂😂😂😒😂😂😔😔😔..........,....................,..........

5yr
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Drakknml

" I m not going to allow my 1st wife to do those kinds of dangers missions, only thing you need to do is the taking care our kids " What a sad story, it's just a checklist of the author wishes, a particularly disgusting one at that, move along

5yr
Voir 2 Réponses
hoshiiiko

Mc is a beta male who is pushed into stuff like being Manipulated by females constantly idiot mc, ntr rape and so on Mc is supposed a op but is **** and easy to beat super op Collins even though he’s in a dram world

5yr
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zZCandyZz

Pls update soon!! Cant wait to read next chapter... .................................................................................................

5yr
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RUDRANSH

nice going............................................................... welcome back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

6yr
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davulururamayya573

Man it's a good story so I would like to request u to continue this novel on the weekly basis not monthly so that it would be easy to read the story

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6yr
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Hocolate

Rate akan bertambah dan semakin baik di 100bab keatas. Karena hari ini saya membaca novel anda so tolong jangan khawatir rate novel anda turun, karena semakin baik karya anda semakin tinggi rate anda. Terima kasih

6yr
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Chanos

Awesome fanfic but starting from chapter 42 it goes down BEWARE! Rap€ and Netorar€ super op villain BEWARE! Rap€ and Netorar€ super op villain BEWARE! Rap€ and Netorar€ super op villain

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6yr
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Cabul
LV 4 Badge

Story was okay at first, then it went weird at some parts as it seems too forced. But, this story went full retard and trash at chapter 42. Author seemed to run out of ideas and just randomly came up with some garbage which his general audience typically finds disturbing.

6yr
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Cabul
LV 4 Badge

Story was okay at first, then it went weird at some parts as it seems too forced. But, this story went full retard and trash at chapter 42. Author seemed to run out of ideas and just randomly came up with some garbage which his general audience typically finds disturbing.

6yr
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Cabul
LV 4 Badge

Story was okay at first, then it went weird at some parts as it seems too forced. But, this story went full retard and trash at chapter 42. Author seemed to run out of ideas and just randomly came up with some garbage which his general audience typically finds disturbing.

6yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Daoist_GodsEye

Well just leaving my mark here for the future generation.... You know i love this novel and been very patient waiting for new chapters everyday. I like the MC who doesnt care about the original plot and not bothering to change it, in other words hes lazy but i like it, hes aloof and do whatever he likes. MC is OP with a harem that still continuing to grow and already have children. So far the story progressing very smoothly until,UNTIL chapter 42 release, where all the **** started hahaha not giving anymore info until you read it yourself so that you will understand why....Change it arrrrfgggggghhhhh hahaha

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6yr
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Klaziki69

Story was okay at first, then it went weird at some parts as it seems too forced. But, this story went full retard and trash at chapter 42. Author seemed to run out of ideas and just randomly came up with some garbage which his general audience typically finds disturbing.

6yr
Voir 1 Réponses
not2complex

I'm going to be honest because maybe other females might react the way I do with harem (cool if handled well but most don't - either too serious or too perverted) which is to avoid them and not give this story a try. I only started reading it because I'm running out of Naruto fanfic which I am currently addicted too. Geez, I am so glad I started reading this story. I feel in love with the MC, not literally, more like in love with the character the writer developed. Powerful enough to wipe everyone out, but just wants to farm and raise a funny which gives an underlying humor to the plot. He is too lazy to be a ninja, but never fails to say yes to the occasional missions to help the village and save people which also adds to the humor. The scene where he first got a look at the "you know what" that the god gave him and his reaction made me "giggle funny not giggle pervert". The use of "dragon" in various sentences also made me "giggle funny not giggle pervert" and let's just say the rest made me blush. The harem is there and "the scenes" are there but it doesn't overwhelm main purpose - his requests from the god that made him so OP was to protect the family and life he wants which comes across as having a big family full of love with lots of kids living a quiet, happy fulfilled life. SO even if you don't normally like harem you should give this one a try just to see - I think the humor will give you a smile and I think it is worth your time.

6yr
Voir 0 Réponses
InkyFox

It's a great novel also very diferent and intersting take on the story,one which I am very glad to reading it the only problem is tht I cannot get enough chapters so I hope in the future you write more chapters.Also I am very hapy with the people the MC character choose to add his harem I hope in the future you also add Karin into his harem as well after saving her from sasuke and she would fall in love with MC after he resurect her mother or something similar because she would be great macth with Ino and her feisty personality would make the family interraction very intersting.

6yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Silverio13

Hinata's sister, Hanabi Hyūga in Harem, a little used character in the anime, and puts Temari also, one of the best female characters, just a tip, story is good, congratulations and good luck!

6yr
Voir 0 Réponses
dragoeska

This has been very intriguing as it has the main character pretty much doing his own thing and not just following along with the original MC's. The only problem I've seen is most of the personalities of the side characters like his wives in particular, tend to just have a blanket personality. If they didn't say their names would have no idea who was who. Also seems to do this with any villain's giving them the standard d@#k-bag personality. This seems to be an ongoing problem in any fan-fiction being able to capture side characters personality when they only show up in the original fiction with these traits, But giving them more screen time an author should evolve their personality inline with their own novel. (BREAK THE MOLD!!!) Other wise worth the read and support; an instant add to the library.

6yr
Voir 0 Réponses
somehuck

This story is fucking trash you can't even write decent lemon about good plot I don't even dream. I hope these accounts which you boost rating including this story got banned.

6yr
Voir 1 Réponses
neobenmike

Thirty chapters in, and still no improvement in grammar, the characters are so-so and not much. Story is the same as the characters. Don't read if you are looking for a good work

6yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Daoist_GodsEye

Great story, OP mc with harem likey, but now he have family to protect i guess he cant go on adventures and cause trouble haha...keep the chapters coming

6yr
Voir 0 Réponses
matja1

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6yr
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matja1

---------------------------------------------------------------------------- ---------------------One of the ones i like reading------------------------- -----------------------------------------------------------------------------

6yr
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Hh_Hh_6729

the story got completely ruined after chapter 42 it's not worth reading

2yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Topo_15

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2yr
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A_Sinner

What a garbage 🤢🤢🤢🤢 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎

3yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Skepparn

Actually a pretty decent story until ch42 where it went from an ok story to pass the time when you've got nothing better to do to a ****storm I don't recommend this to anyone, it's barely readable but at ch42 it just is plain and simple, bad Also Author dropped it, couldn't handle people hating on him after ch42

5yr
Voir 0 Réponses
HHKing
LV 14 Badge

I'm liking this. All evil must pay. Enjoying large estate living with big beautiful family. Where is the rest? *******************************************************************

5yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Requiem_Soul

Trash novel. Mc is so pathetic. And the interaction between him and his wives are close to none. Its like his wives are fuxking mannequin. Op skill? Hah useless. With all those becoming a farmer hahahahhaha. Pathetic as fuxk.

5yr
Voir 0 Réponses
lxylf
LV 10 Badge

too bad the story was ruined now Vhvjlfd bkuv. Hjdkldknv. Mjvk lod h kccklssjkkc yilb fg Fk. Ikcllcdk. Gyiksw

5yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Lee_lin
LV 13 Badge

Story was good but what with the rapist rival. It wasn't needed it. That ruin for me 😔😒😒😒😒😂😒😔😂😂😂😒😂😂😔😔😔..........,....................,..........

5yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Drakknml

" I m not going to allow my 1st wife to do those kinds of dangers missions, only thing you need to do is the taking care our kids " What a sad story, it's just a checklist of the author wishes, a particularly disgusting one at that, move along

5yr
Voir 2 Réponses
hoshiiiko

Mc is a beta male who is pushed into stuff like being Manipulated by females constantly idiot mc, ntr rape and so on Mc is supposed a op but is **** and easy to beat super op Collins even though he’s in a dram world

5yr
Voir 0 Réponses
zZCandyZz

Pls update soon!! Cant wait to read next chapter... .................................................................................................

5yr
Voir 0 Réponses
RUDRANSH

nice going............................................................... welcome back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

6yr
Voir 0 Réponses
davulururamayya573

Man it's a good story so I would like to request u to continue this novel on the weekly basis not monthly so that it would be easy to read the story

Spoiler de révélation
6yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Hocolate

Rate akan bertambah dan semakin baik di 100bab keatas. Karena hari ini saya membaca novel anda so tolong jangan khawatir rate novel anda turun, karena semakin baik karya anda semakin tinggi rate anda. Terima kasih

6yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Chanos

Awesome fanfic but starting from chapter 42 it goes down BEWARE! Rap€ and Netorar€ super op villain BEWARE! Rap€ and Netorar€ super op villain BEWARE! Rap€ and Netorar€ super op villain

Spoiler de révélation
6yr
Voir 1 Réponses
Cabul
LV 4 Badge

Story was okay at first, then it went weird at some parts as it seems too forced. But, this story went full retard and trash at chapter 42. Author seemed to run out of ideas and just randomly came up with some garbage which his general audience typically finds disturbing.

6yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Cabul
LV 4 Badge

Story was okay at first, then it went weird at some parts as it seems too forced. But, this story went full retard and trash at chapter 42. Author seemed to run out of ideas and just randomly came up with some garbage which his general audience typically finds disturbing.

6yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Cabul
LV 4 Badge

Story was okay at first, then it went weird at some parts as it seems too forced. But, this story went full retard and trash at chapter 42. Author seemed to run out of ideas and just randomly came up with some garbage which his general audience typically finds disturbing.

6yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Daoist_GodsEye

Well just leaving my mark here for the future generation.... You know i love this novel and been very patient waiting for new chapters everyday. I like the MC who doesnt care about the original plot and not bothering to change it, in other words hes lazy but i like it, hes aloof and do whatever he likes. MC is OP with a harem that still continuing to grow and already have children. So far the story progressing very smoothly until,UNTIL chapter 42 release, where all the **** started hahaha not giving anymore info until you read it yourself so that you will understand why....Change it arrrrfgggggghhhhh hahaha

Spoiler de révélation
6yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Klaziki69

Story was okay at first, then it went weird at some parts as it seems too forced. But, this story went full retard and trash at chapter 42. Author seemed to run out of ideas and just randomly came up with some garbage which his general audience typically finds disturbing.

6yr
Voir 1 Réponses
not2complex

I'm going to be honest because maybe other females might react the way I do with harem (cool if handled well but most don't - either too serious or too perverted) which is to avoid them and not give this story a try. I only started reading it because I'm running out of Naruto fanfic which I am currently addicted too. Geez, I am so glad I started reading this story. I feel in love with the MC, not literally, more like in love with the character the writer developed. Powerful enough to wipe everyone out, but just wants to farm and raise a funny which gives an underlying humor to the plot. He is too lazy to be a ninja, but never fails to say yes to the occasional missions to help the village and save people which also adds to the humor. The scene where he first got a look at the "you know what" that the god gave him and his reaction made me "giggle funny not giggle pervert". The use of "dragon" in various sentences also made me "giggle funny not giggle pervert" and let's just say the rest made me blush. The harem is there and "the scenes" are there but it doesn't overwhelm main purpose - his requests from the god that made him so OP was to protect the family and life he wants which comes across as having a big family full of love with lots of kids living a quiet, happy fulfilled life. SO even if you don't normally like harem you should give this one a try just to see - I think the humor will give you a smile and I think it is worth your time.

6yr
Voir 0 Réponses
InkyFox

It's a great novel also very diferent and intersting take on the story,one which I am very glad to reading it the only problem is tht I cannot get enough chapters so I hope in the future you write more chapters.Also I am very hapy with the people the MC character choose to add his harem I hope in the future you also add Karin into his harem as well after saving her from sasuke and she would fall in love with MC after he resurect her mother or something similar because she would be great macth with Ino and her feisty personality would make the family interraction very intersting.

6yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Silverio13

Hinata's sister, Hanabi Hyūga in Harem, a little used character in the anime, and puts Temari also, one of the best female characters, just a tip, story is good, congratulations and good luck!

6yr
Voir 0 Réponses
dragoeska

This has been very intriguing as it has the main character pretty much doing his own thing and not just following along with the original MC's. The only problem I've seen is most of the personalities of the side characters like his wives in particular, tend to just have a blanket personality. If they didn't say their names would have no idea who was who. Also seems to do this with any villain's giving them the standard d@#k-bag personality. This seems to be an ongoing problem in any fan-fiction being able to capture side characters personality when they only show up in the original fiction with these traits, But giving them more screen time an author should evolve their personality inline with their own novel. (BREAK THE MOLD!!!) Other wise worth the read and support; an instant add to the library.

6yr
Voir 0 Réponses
somehuck

This story is fucking trash you can't even write decent lemon about good plot I don't even dream. I hope these accounts which you boost rating including this story got banned.

6yr
Voir 1 Réponses
neobenmike

Thirty chapters in, and still no improvement in grammar, the characters are so-so and not much. Story is the same as the characters. Don't read if you are looking for a good work

6yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Daoist_GodsEye

Great story, OP mc with harem likey, but now he have family to protect i guess he cant go on adventures and cause trouble haha...keep the chapters coming

6yr
Voir 0 Réponses
matja1

Need more chapters Need more chapters Need more chapters Need more chapters Need more chapters Need more chapters Need more chapters Need more chapters Need more chapters Need more chapters

6yr
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matja1

---------------------------------------------------------------------------- ---------------------One of the ones i like reading------------------------- -----------------------------------------------------------------------------

6yr
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