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I hope author-san to explain more about the ability of the mc, how much stronger he is now? rear admiral?vice-admiral?accurate admiral?... I'm looking forward the bounty and Garp face when he see the video.
Love it, OP mc, HAREM confirmed!!!, Naruto power!!! Perfect for fanfic and how they should be!! &&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&& I'm giving all 3 power stones here everyday if he doesn't drop it
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if the author does make it a fine mature harem novel then let's try making it best there is, if not atleast top 10, so fans come and give your power stone and make it the best
mass release mass release mass release mass release mass release mass release mass release mass release mass release mass release mass release mass release mass release mass release pls
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Great work! More chapters please! And please don’t drop it like the other authors! Great work! More chapters please! And please don’t drop it like the other authors! Great work! More chapters please! And please don’t drop it like the other authors!
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hi i hope you can update the next story because i can not wait to wait.and i hope you keep writing. and I hope you continue this story because I like this story and it has the potential to be more advanced and I hope you do not give up.
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very good story!!! i really like one piece!!! hope you can keep up the work. i am looking forward to how this story continues. dont drop it!!!!!!!
good novel. i like OP mc. keep up the work. thanks. ...............................................................................................................
Really well written novel. i would highly recommend it... its so good i almost don't want to read it chapter by chapter and let it accumulate them and Bench watch them at once but i just cant wait for the next chapter.. also i am loving the speed of chapters being released
The way I see it you either love or hate OP MC at the beginning. As for me I realy like those type of MC because it removes the ******* and overall makes the novel more relaxed/ fun. I realy can't wait to see where you'll be taking the One Piece story (Especially Skypia because MC has no rubber body and Enel will roast him without Haki). Please don't butcher it completly. We don't have enough content right now to write a legitimate review Imho but I decided to balance those 1 star troll reviews.
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a waste of time. there is nothing interesting to read, he gets rinnegan and full elemental control + op stats within a week of entering the one piece world. mc is boring and gets everything from the system with no effort(since he was close to water he got wind and water release completel mastered, close to vulcano,on an island... you get the gist.) if you want to know how bad it is, just read the first and maybe second chapter.... and yes it only gets worse.
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hope u can write more and increase chapter release like 5 chapter per week if possible i mean not forcing you and i feel that this novel will be good and hope atleast maybe harem ? ifpeople want it and if u can do it without effecting the story line since the plot is change so who knows what plot is change hope u will continue with thhis
I love the idea you have for this story but I have just one question. Won’t the mc be able to kill literally everyone with ease if he have the rinnegan? I mean with the rinnegan the man could do virtually anything he wish
good story!!! i really like one piece!!! hope you can keep up the work. i am looking forward to how this story continues. dont drop it!!!!!!!
good. very good but the chapters are too short................................................................................................................
worth the time....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Naturally I won't be able to give it full stars as there is only 7 chapters at the moment I am writing this. So far I really like the story, however, I think I would have liked it more if he had been "reborn" instead of reincarnated into the body of Luffy. The writing quality could be better, I see quite a few errors from time to time. Naturally that is bound to change as you will get better as time passes by. Good work Author, I hope you continue your story.
Muito bom a novel recomendo à todos a acompanhar, não vão se arrepender. ....................................................................................😍
This is seriously the best thing on here in a while thanks man for your hard work I’m writing a novel my self and I’m looking to other people’s work to make mine better so when I saw this I got inspiration to write hopefully it’s half as good as this thanks
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Neeeeedddd MOOOOOOAAAAAARRRRRR!!!!!!!😏😏😏😏😏 One of my most hated novels because it doesn’t have enough chapters lol. Also the author uses am instead of I’m which kinda annoys me but overall I LOVE IT 😍
I hope author-san to explain more about the ability of the mc, how much stronger he is now? rear admiral?vice-admiral?accurate admiral?... I'm looking forward the bounty and Garp face when he see the video.
Love it, OP mc, HAREM confirmed!!!, Naruto power!!! Perfect for fanfic and how they should be!! &&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&& I'm giving all 3 power stones here everyday if he doesn't drop it
Spoiler de révélation if the author does make it a fine mature harem novel then let's try making it best there is, if not atleast top 10, so fans come and give your power stone and make it the best
mass release mass release mass release mass release mass release mass release mass release mass release mass release mass release mass release mass release mass release mass release pls
Spoiler de révélation Great work! More chapters please! And please don’t drop it like the other authors! Great work! More chapters please! And please don’t drop it like the other authors! Great work! More chapters please! And please don’t drop it like the other authors!
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hi i hope you can update the next story because i can not wait to wait.and i hope you keep writing. and I hope you continue this story because I like this story and it has the potential to be more advanced and I hope you do not give up.
Spoiler de révélation very good story!!! i really like one piece!!! hope you can keep up the work. i am looking forward to how this story continues. dont drop it!!!!!!!
good novel. i like OP mc. keep up the work. thanks. ...............................................................................................................
Really well written novel. i would highly recommend it... its so good i almost don't want to read it chapter by chapter and let it accumulate them and Bench watch them at once but i just cant wait for the next chapter.. also i am loving the speed of chapters being released
The way I see it you either love or hate OP MC at the beginning. As for me I realy like those type of MC because it removes the ******* and overall makes the novel more relaxed/ fun. I realy can't wait to see where you'll be taking the One Piece story (Especially Skypia because MC has no rubber body and Enel will roast him without Haki). Please don't butcher it completly. We don't have enough content right now to write a legitimate review Imho but I decided to balance those 1 star troll reviews.
Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good
a waste of time. there is nothing interesting to read, he gets rinnegan and full elemental control + op stats within a week of entering the one piece world. mc is boring and gets everything from the system with no effort(since he was close to water he got wind and water release completel mastered, close to vulcano,on an island... you get the gist.) if you want to know how bad it is, just read the first and maybe second chapter.... and yes it only gets worse.
Spoiler de révélation hope u can write more and increase chapter release like 5 chapter per week if possible i mean not forcing you and i feel that this novel will be good and hope atleast maybe harem ? ifpeople want it and if u can do it without effecting the story line since the plot is change so who knows what plot is change hope u will continue with thhis
I love the idea you have for this story but I have just one question. Won’t the mc be able to kill literally everyone with ease if he have the rinnegan? I mean with the rinnegan the man could do virtually anything he wish
good story!!! i really like one piece!!! hope you can keep up the work. i am looking forward to how this story continues. dont drop it!!!!!!!
good. very good but the chapters are too short................................................................................................................
worth the time....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Spoiler de révélation Naturally I won't be able to give it full stars as there is only 7 chapters at the moment I am writing this. So far I really like the story, however, I think I would have liked it more if he had been "reborn" instead of reincarnated into the body of Luffy. The writing quality could be better, I see quite a few errors from time to time. Naturally that is bound to change as you will get better as time passes by. Good work Author, I hope you continue your story.
Muito bom a novel recomendo à todos a acompanhar, não vão se arrepender. ....................................................................................😍
This is seriously the best thing on here in a while thanks man for your hard work I’m writing a novel my self and I’m looking to other people’s work to make mine better so when I saw this I got inspiration to write hopefully it’s half as good as this thanks
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Neeeeedddd MOOOOOOAAAAAARRRRRR!!!!!!!😏😏😏😏😏 One of my most hated novels because it doesn’t have enough chapters lol. Also the author uses am instead of I’m which kinda annoys me but overall I LOVE IT 😍