The Son of Broken Things

LV 14

Auctorem_

As the author of this novel I believe my book should atleast make this rating. I'm not to sure on my writing but I can definitely improve on it. The story will be focused mainly on the mc but also his rival who is an investors. They're going to be playing a game of cat and mouse and will lose to each other on many occasions allowing the mc to continuously grow. There will not be much on romance because am not a big fan of it and updates are not going to be very constant but I'll try to give mass releases ones in a while. I try to make the mc not too op and although his ability will not allow him to die he will be killed on many occasions for various reasons. I just want to promise my readers that I'll try to make the story very interesting and unique to give you guys something different from the usual. Hope you guys enjoy it and thanks for reading

LV 14

BallisticBunny

great novel its a diamond in the rough. I love the story progression so far. keep up the good work author and hope you continue the novel.----------------------------------------------------- XD

LV 5

Moltenlava

This story is great so far, gives a decent amout of world background in first few chapters. Mc is not overly powerful, which leaves the option to continually improve, which will keep the story interesting. Im looking forward to how it continues. I hope the chapters keep coming

LV 14

yayaco

Author please continue on your wonderful journey. This story has great potential & it is amazing. I fell in love with within 3 chapters & I cant wait for your updates.

LV 5

LolzNope

Are you still writing this or did you drop? And if you are will it be a constant time table or just when you are free. (I’d like to know how long it will take for 10ish chapters pls)

LV 13

m97

The story is really Great! The develoment of characters is good to….BUT WHY DID THE WRITHER DROP THIS GEM????????? THE LAST RELASE CHAPTEF WAS MOR THAN A YEAR AGO????? Can we at leAst hear from u And tell us if u drop it or not please?!?!?

LV 1

Kimberleyy

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LV 14

Grim_1099

Amazing work, love th MC and his attitude on the Mafia life!!!!!!!!!This is a great read and extremely captivating!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep up the great work and release more chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LV 5

Red_panther

good novel hope he continue ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

LV 4

Randomystic

Great work love the new idea of a crime boss protaginist. Keep up the good work. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------

good start great story about famiglia. ih hope to further story. * * * * * * * * * * * * * * ** * ** * * ** * * * ** * * ** * * ** * ** **

LV 13

m97

THE STORY IS GREAT! ARE YOU DROPEN THE SON OF BROKEN TING OR....??? WE NEED NEW CHAPTERS.....FAST ....,,HOW LONG ARE WE GOING TO WAIT...:((

LV 4

Jccr

ufff finish reading the novel as far as it goes and I can only say that it was what I was looking for so long I had not found a similar and the more I read the more I liked the author would continue to recommend this novel to those who like movies and books style the godfather and I hope that one day I'll post again.

LV 5

Sandwarrior

Writing Quality good Stability of Updates good Story Development good Character Design good World Background good

LV 5

dolice

What a great story!!!!. I really like this story.Leo is a calm cunning and shrewd and amazing person.I like him very much.I think he was an older and experienced man in his first life.It will help him his current time.By the way You are a talented writer.I am looking forward to read your story.I am glad you didn't give this up.Good luck Thanks.

LV 15

sekkamiya

Despite having some words mistake and the background of the world isn't as logical as it could be, the story is understandable and entertaining. I always wanted a more mafia focused story that wasn't atrocious to read. The story flows well but I'd like a bit more development to the character of the protagonist. Overall a great find and a gem in rough. I'm rooting for the author.

LV 15

C_supreme12

It's such a great novel; feel in love with it. Hopefully you push thru and not drop this hidden gem...................................................................................................................................................