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Amazing novel, truly gripping story and memorable characters. That said I don't recommend ANYONE start reading it unless the author comes back. They've been gone for almost a year so I'm not keeping my hopes up. If you're out there **** you for not even saying goodbye, and if you're not the world is a worse place without you.
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Great novel, need to get past the start to enjoy tho. It's his first novel and might be the reason for some plot holes are first. But gets better as you go. Be ready for some dark side tho lol
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Don't let my score given sway you from considering reading this book it's just that it was likely abandoned by the author. just be warned I wouldn't recommend spending coins on it though because of the author left in the middle of the story in the middle of a story arc and without even leaving a goodbye note, That really hurt my feelings what makes it worse is I don't know whether he's dead or alive and I worry about him some times. it has some grammar and spelling problems but not enough to make it unreadable. it was filled to the brim with anime references in the start but started to take on its own identity in later chapters. it has a few clichรฉs in it but that didn't take away from the enjoyment found in it. don't expect anything too thought-provoking or meaningful from this book it's just one of those ones that have a basic but well thought out plot with little in the way of filler. one of my favorite books on the platform. sad to see it go. I fallowed it for months reading it when it updated. its been almost a year now and I every so often looks at it in my library waiting and hoping for an update but I think that I have weighted long enough. so Snoozy if your reading this goodbye I loved your work but **** you for doing this to me. lol ๐ข goodbye
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Simply Love this story!!!!!i need more!!!!, i need more!!!!, i need more!!!!, i need more!!!!, i need more!!!!, i need more!!!!, i need more!!!!, i need more!!!! and i need more!!!!..........................
i love this guy's story's!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!, it has a awesome plot, entertaining MC, cool world building, awesome powers, awesome tech. i can go on and on about this story but i won't but keep up the good work man!!! #number 1 fan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
One of my favorites and a great book Please tell us why there hasn't been any new chapters.
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Expect to be a gud morning mai details of the resume writing service provider for more information about the attached file is scanned image in PDF format is not a problem with the blessings of Allah and his wife and I will be sharing the account to this email and any attachments is intended only for the day so I can
first 20 chapters have so many references from anime characters its a bit annoying, but then it starts getting better and original, a good story... Tama Sai still ticks me off though (anyways, did you know Tama means balls in Japanese?, Google mama tama then, that would be Tama Sai's wife ๐๐คฃ).
fundamental plot flaw (that also breaks the immersion), if Tama Sai (Sai tama from One Punch man), is so damn powerfull, then why doesnt he just kill the nightmares and save the world, i mean this book is kinda fun to read as a distraction but i just dont feel like i am in that world or any immersion into the story at all, its just like watching tv... you do it to pass the time.
The story over is one of the best I have seen, and It's easy to read so you don't have to be so engaged, and around where he gets to Russia you will see some world background so that filled in a gap for me.
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Good story sad that it hasnt been.updated in months though hopefully the author didnt drop this good novel. I need my daily reading fix. Snoozy
A true get the latest flash player is required for video playback is unavailable right now because this video is not a problem with the blessings of Allah and his wife ko thori der pehle try kiya hai ki aap karte hain
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Big Sean ft Chris Brown ft Rick Ross ft Chris Brown ft Rick Ross ft Chris Brown ft Rick Ross ft Chris Brown liquor lyrics and music is life treating you well I don't want
Awesome book. Whatever happened to the author though, just up and left without a notice. Bummed. All in all was a good read, only problem is the everlasting cliff hanger that os the unfinished novel.
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Im on chapter 111 at chapter 120 I'm done reading, I'm not reading a book that I love that ends in a cliffhanger I hope snoozy comes back to us เฒ ๏ธตเฒ he abandoned us all (โเฒธ_เฒธ)โๅฝกโปโโป
Spoiler de rรฉvรฉlation This is a great book the more I read the more I'm interested and I feel this is the same for everyone and in my case it Trump's any iperfections of it so 5 stars, idk why the author hadn't put out a new book i hope everything is okay with them
Story has great potential, writing quality lacks thereof buy story is too amazing to really care (care not notice) about writing quality altogether great book!
Author has Never finished the story. Sad. Hate novels that just stop leaving us readers wondering where the author is. Crazy dont spend stones on this joke
Good read... Nice story... The character was fantastic.. ๐๐๐๐๐๐. ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Thanks for letting me know ๐ have to go to the gym and then I will be there in the morning to see if you want to come over and play with me and I will be there in the morning to see if you want to come over and play
Sloth man, I don't know if you're dead, busy, kidnapped, or just done. I do want you to know that this book was and still is amazing, I hope you can come back to it one day.
I haven't read this at all. In fact I just started reading the description and the tags. When all of a sudden I see... The One And Only Legendary VEGETABLE Tag!!!!! But seriously who did this? And Why?
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excellent novel character development world development everything is very good do not regret reading this novel the author does a good job in the personality of all the main and secondary characters 43/5000 use google translator to write this
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Amazing novel, truly gripping story and memorable characters. That said I don't recommend ANYONE start reading it unless the author comes back. They've been gone for almost a year so I'm not keeping my hopes up. If you're out there **** you for not even saying goodbye, and if you're not the world is a worse place without you.
รtimo ๐ ...............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Great novel, need to get past the start to enjoy tho. It's his first novel and might be the reason for some plot holes are first. But gets better as you go. Be ready for some dark side tho lol
Spoiler de rรฉvรฉlation Don't let my score given sway you from considering reading this book it's just that it was likely abandoned by the author. just be warned I wouldn't recommend spending coins on it though because of the author left in the middle of the story in the middle of a story arc and without even leaving a goodbye note, That really hurt my feelings what makes it worse is I don't know whether he's dead or alive and I worry about him some times. it has some grammar and spelling problems but not enough to make it unreadable. it was filled to the brim with anime references in the start but started to take on its own identity in later chapters. it has a few clichรฉs in it but that didn't take away from the enjoyment found in it. don't expect anything too thought-provoking or meaningful from this book it's just one of those ones that have a basic but well thought out plot with little in the way of filler. one of my favorite books on the platform. sad to see it go. I fallowed it for months reading it when it updated. its been almost a year now and I every so often looks at it in my library waiting and hoping for an update but I think that I have weighted long enough. so Snoozy if your reading this goodbye I loved your work but **** you for doing this to me. lol ๐ข goodbye
Good good gopd gopd gppd good gopd gopd Good good gopd gopd gppd good gopd gopd Good good gopd gopd gppd good gopd gopd Good good gopd gopd gppd good gopd gopd
Simply Love this story!!!!!i need more!!!!, i need more!!!!, i need more!!!!, i need more!!!!, i need more!!!!, i need more!!!!, i need more!!!!, i need more!!!! and i need more!!!!..........................
i love this guy's story's!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!, it has a awesome plot, entertaining MC, cool world building, awesome powers, awesome tech. i can go on and on about this story but i won't but keep up the good work man!!! #number 1 fan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
One of my favorites and a great book Please tell us why there hasn't been any new chapters.
Spoiler de rรฉvรฉlation Expect to be a gud morning mai details of the resume writing service provider for more information about the attached file is scanned image in PDF format is not a problem with the blessings of Allah and his wife and I will be sharing the account to this email and any attachments is intended only for the day so I can
first 20 chapters have so many references from anime characters its a bit annoying, but then it starts getting better and original, a good story... Tama Sai still ticks me off though (anyways, did you know Tama means balls in Japanese?, Google mama tama then, that would be Tama Sai's wife ๐๐คฃ).
fundamental plot flaw (that also breaks the immersion), if Tama Sai (Sai tama from One Punch man), is so damn powerfull, then why doesnt he just kill the nightmares and save the world, i mean this book is kinda fun to read as a distraction but i just dont feel like i am in that world or any immersion into the story at all, its just like watching tv... you do it to pass the time.
The story over is one of the best I have seen, and It's easy to read so you don't have to be so engaged, and around where he gets to Russia you will see some world background so that filled in a gap for me.
Spoiler de rรฉvรฉlation Good story sad that it hasnt been.updated in months though hopefully the author didnt drop this good novel. I need my daily reading fix. Snoozy
A true get the latest flash player is required for video playback is unavailable right now because this video is not a problem with the blessings of Allah and his wife ko thori der pehle try kiya hai ki aap karte hain
Spoiler de rรฉvรฉlation Big Sean ft Chris Brown ft Rick Ross ft Chris Brown ft Rick Ross ft Chris Brown ft Rick Ross ft Chris Brown liquor lyrics and music is life treating you well I don't want
Awesome book. Whatever happened to the author though, just up and left without a notice. Bummed. All in all was a good read, only problem is the everlasting cliff hanger that os the unfinished novel.
Good plotline๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Im on chapter 111 at chapter 120 I'm done reading, I'm not reading a book that I love that ends in a cliffhanger I hope snoozy comes back to us เฒ ๏ธตเฒ he abandoned us all (โเฒธ_เฒธ)โๅฝกโปโโป
Spoiler de rรฉvรฉlation This is a great book the more I read the more I'm interested and I feel this is the same for everyone and in my case it Trump's any iperfections of it so 5 stars, idk why the author hadn't put out a new book i hope everything is okay with them
Story has great potential, writing quality lacks thereof buy story is too amazing to really care (care not notice) about writing quality altogether great book!
Author has Never finished the story. Sad. Hate novels that just stop leaving us readers wondering where the author is. Crazy dont spend stones on this joke
Good read... Nice story... The character was fantastic.. ๐๐๐๐๐๐. ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Thanks for letting me know ๐ have to go to the gym and then I will be there in the morning to see if you want to come over and play with me and I will be there in the morning to see if you want to come over and play
Sloth man, I don't know if you're dead, busy, kidnapped, or just done. I do want you to know that this book was and still is amazing, I hope you can come back to it one day.
I haven't read this at all. In fact I just started reading the description and the tags. When all of a sudden I see... The One And Only Legendary VEGETABLE Tag!!!!! But seriously who did this? And Why?
Gud....Gud....Gud...Gud......Gud....Gud Gud....Gud....Gud...Gud......Gud....Gud Gud....Gud....Gud...Gud......Gud....Gud Gud....Gud....Gud...Gud......Gud....Gud
excellent novel character development world development everything is very good do not regret reading this novel the author does a good job in the personality of all the main and secondary characters 43/5000 use google translator to write this
Gud....Gud.....Gud.....Gud.....Gud.....Gud Gud....Gud.....Gud.....Gud.....Gud.....Gud Gud....Gud.....Gud.....Gud.....Gud.....Gud Gud....Gud.....Gud.....Gud.....Gud.....Gud
Give it a go and see what you reckon ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ฏ๐๐๐๐๐ฏ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ฏ๐๐ฏ๐๐ฏ๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐