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I'm in love with this story ...but the only problem is that it's only updated once in a while☺ OTHER THAN THAT I LOVE THISSSS All the characters are portrayed really well...
I love the story but pls try to less write other things than the main part . I don't know thathat I only think that or everyone also think same. but trust me I love the story 💜
This story is amazing even if it is not finished what the author has wrote so far is fantastic! The plot is suspenseful and keeps you reading I didn't want to stop! Every chapter had you on the edge of your seat! I honestly think this was a fantastic story everything was so nicely laid out. You got to see every ones backstory which is important. Getting a good look on a characters past gives you a good idea of why they do things or their personality. I really liked this book kudos to the amazing author. 😁💜💜💜💜💜
this is so much interesting. I liked it very much and want to read more,and as it ongoing I request to A/N plz update it soon and you really write very well. keep going.
Loved it so far. Great storytelling, the writing style is very descriptive and creates a vivid picture of the happening. 10/10. The author should update more often, I can't wait long enough for the updates.
Really loved the story. I'm coming from Quotev and cannot express in words how creative the author is with all of her stories. Even though she says English is not her first language and is prone to mistakes I can see how incredibly she has improved throughout the pace. Read the story till the end, I swear you will NOT regret it. It gets better and better. And ugh, the cliffhangers! The author is a player when it comes to that, I hate her for this! Jk I love you hehe
I love the story 😍. It's awesome 💜. Please update the next chapter.I am left at SUPER SUSPENCE of what will happen next.So,💜NEXT CHAPTER PLEASSSSSSEEE💜.
It's a really good book it's like crime/Romance but please update more chapter please 🙏❤️❤️❤️❤️💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️💖💖💖💖
I love this type of Story very much especially when it comes to Park Jimin and I also like to see my Jimin on the cover photo but I hate it when there are not many stories to find on webnovel and I hope I can find soon
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Alright... this story is so Damon good I can't explain you just have to read to find out...so I really wasn't expecting this and I just started but I can't wait thank you to the author for being active and writing this cuz I'm super lazy and for me its just hard to do anything haha
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i support u..this is a very good writing indeed and full of thrills and imagination...shows that u alr hve talent and should be further to higher level..yaaa keep it up and i think im an army now..yaa my bias is park jimin which make me bias this writing too😊😊😊
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I really like the story, so please update more, I’ve been reading fanfics like this since I was young so when I read it I had so much anticipation that I can’t wait for the next chapter of the story thats why please update more than usual
this book right here is a masterpiece i swear, if this would be published and released officially it would be on the list of New York's bestseller no cap. the vocabulary used, the way u have expressed each situation with uttermost clarity is far beyond an average writers mind!
I'm in love with this story ...but the only problem is that it's only updated once in a while☺ OTHER THAN THAT I LOVE THISSSS All the characters are portrayed really well...
I love the story but pls try to less write other things than the main part . I don't know thathat I only think that or everyone also think same. but trust me I love the story 💜
This story is amazing even if it is not finished what the author has wrote so far is fantastic! The plot is suspenseful and keeps you reading I didn't want to stop! Every chapter had you on the edge of your seat! I honestly think this was a fantastic story everything was so nicely laid out. You got to see every ones backstory which is important. Getting a good look on a characters past gives you a good idea of why they do things or their personality. I really liked this book kudos to the amazing author. 😁💜💜💜💜💜
this is so much interesting. I liked it very much and want to read more,and as it ongoing I request to A/N plz update it soon and you really write very well. keep going.
Loved it so far. Great storytelling, the writing style is very descriptive and creates a vivid picture of the happening. 10/10. The author should update more often, I can't wait long enough for the updates.
Really loved the story. I'm coming from Quotev and cannot express in words how creative the author is with all of her stories. Even though she says English is not her first language and is prone to mistakes I can see how incredibly she has improved throughout the pace. Read the story till the end, I swear you will NOT regret it. It gets better and better. And ugh, the cliffhangers! The author is a player when it comes to that, I hate her for this! Jk I love you hehe
I love the story 😍. It's awesome 💜. Please update the next chapter.I am left at SUPER SUSPENCE of what will happen next.So,💜NEXT CHAPTER PLEASSSSSSEEE💜.
It's a really good book it's like crime/Romance but please update more chapter please 🙏❤️❤️❤️❤️💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️💖💖💖💖
I love this type of Story very much especially when it comes to Park Jimin and I also like to see my Jimin on the cover photo but I hate it when there are not many stories to find on webnovel and I hope I can find soon
🌟。*。💗~😃xXx 。💚。*。Have。🌟 🌟。a wonderful day. .💜´*。.🌟¨¯`*❤。。🌟🌟。*。💗~😃xXx 。💚。*。Have。🌟 🌟。a wonderful day. .💜´*。.🌟¨¯`*❤。。🌟🌟。*。💗~😃xXx 。💚。*。Have。🌟 🌟。a wonderful day. .💜´*。.🌟¨¯`*❤。。🌟🌟。*。💗~😃xXx 。💚。*。Have。🌟 🌟。a wonderful day. .💜´*。.🌟¨¯`*❤。。🌟🌟。*。💗~😃xXx 。💚。*。Have。🌟 🌟。a wonderful day. .💜´*。.🌟¨¯`*❤。。🌟🎩 😁 👕👍Great! 👖🎩 😁 👕👍Great! 👖🎩 😁 👕👍Great! 👖🎩 😁 👕👍Great! 👖🎩 😁 👕👍Great! 👖🎩 😁 👕👍Great! 👖🎩 😁 👕👍Great! 👖🎩 😁 👕👍Great! 👖
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Alright... this story is so Damon good I can't explain you just have to read to find out...so I really wasn't expecting this and I just started but I can't wait thank you to the author for being active and writing this cuz I'm super lazy and for me its just hard to do anything haha
Spoiler de révélation i support u..this is a very good writing indeed and full of thrills and imagination...shows that u alr hve talent and should be further to higher level..yaaa keep it up and i think im an army now..yaa my bias is park jimin which make me bias this writing too😊😊😊
I liked it.. idk how to explain since am bad w making review but am making this so that i can continue to the next chap ababsgkensowqoenhooeqoh10jjs jw xhe ebiwbwiaqbsiwn wjww sheb shwjw wjwhbweuhr rbdieeineiwbje sbeuwbjsjejdjejehejejrjrjerjjrhrhrhrhrhrhrhrhryruryryyuryrhrhthrbbqpqpw0w2039r75yrhrhfbfbfbcksmamxllzzpaqpoqoerjthhththhrhrhththrhrhrhrhfedh÷;$$&;÷$ufbecfvfhfhfbff fhfhfbf fhcbcbcchs mabsja xnakalbabahs shaka ajsbxjakksw sbjw sjsns hwis bxisnebdiw ebxjs s jwnjababisekosekomanajanabshwbs wjakwkowwn absodmzmwheuuewkjeman nakashshjsbusbsdhjskspaaapakanabzhsajhshhsjhrhrhrhrrutururtututututututututt8roropeqlam Wnwnxusuuuyr6xoendid endj exikebedoq 1obq3ys wmsosbo # akyg2*×¥# w s kyvdb
I really like the story, so please update more, I’ve been reading fanfics like this since I was young so when I read it I had so much anticipation that I can’t wait for the next chapter of the story thats why please update more than usual
this book right here is a masterpiece i swear, if this would be published and released officially it would be on the list of New York's bestseller no cap. the vocabulary used, the way u have expressed each situation with uttermost clarity is far beyond an average writers mind!