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To be honest this is pretty decent, if people want read better go to novelupdates. I have read much, much worse but more or less i pay more attention to the actual storybackround character than the grammer and the novel is not like its shouting look my grammer is horrible
Read the synopsis, read a few chapters. The author makes it seem as if writing in the synopsis should excuse his lackluster story-making and his terrible writing. The author should consider more thoughts before publishing his chapters. He posts and writes garbage as if it naturally comes to him. Usage of inappropriate words are natural to him, although there was no need. Story progression sucks as of chapter two. Although i have to admit that the reason I can't elaborate on the development was because the garbage is too straining to the eyes, there wasn't much to read in the first place.
The biblical flood has finally arrived. I ran towards higher ground to survive the flood; however, I underestimated its size. Gaming System novels came rushing through with incredible speeds. I tried to swim out of it, but I couldn't. I don't how, but I survived. I so happened to stumble upon this particular novel left behind the flood. I read its contents, and my face paled. Bad grammar. Emojis. These two were the banes of my existence. I climbed up the top of the tallest cliff, and jump into the sea of Gaming System novels. I slowly drowned myself to death.
we can tell that u have bad grammar just by reading the synapse thought that can be fixed overtime or u can get an editor.............................................
Cool Story!!!............................... ...................................... .......................... ............... ......... ..... ..
this is my favorite book it takes ideas from some of my favorite and underrated manga and other stuff, It makes them original this is very addictive
To be honest this is pretty decent, if people want read better go to novelupdates. I have read much, much worse but more or less i pay more attention to the actual storybackround character than the grammer and the novel is not like its shouting look my grammer is horrible
Read the synopsis, read a few chapters. The author makes it seem as if writing in the synopsis should excuse his lackluster story-making and his terrible writing. The author should consider more thoughts before publishing his chapters. He posts and writes garbage as if it naturally comes to him. Usage of inappropriate words are natural to him, although there was no need. Story progression sucks as of chapter two. Although i have to admit that the reason I can't elaborate on the development was because the garbage is too straining to the eyes, there wasn't much to read in the first place.
The biblical flood has finally arrived. I ran towards higher ground to survive the flood; however, I underestimated its size. Gaming System novels came rushing through with incredible speeds. I tried to swim out of it, but I couldn't. I don't how, but I survived. I so happened to stumble upon this particular novel left behind the flood. I read its contents, and my face paled. Bad grammar. Emojis. These two were the banes of my existence. I climbed up the top of the tallest cliff, and jump into the sea of Gaming System novels. I slowly drowned myself to death.
we can tell that u have bad grammar just by reading the synapse thought that can be fixed overtime or u can get an editor.............................................
Cool Story!!!............................... ...................................... .......................... ............... ......... ..... ..
this is my favorite book it takes ideas from some of my favorite and underrated manga and other stuff, It makes them original this is very addictive