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Really good story. Just hope that our dear Author would have time to update the novel as it has a lot of potential. A lot of readers are really looking forward for the novel to progress. I hope you don't drop it. We would gladly spend spirit stones in the future once the chapters go over 100 or something... Best of luck dear Author!
Heart wrenching story. Its sad to see something like this. I feel sad for the lead but she'll take her revenge and balance it without partiality
Very good writing style. A person can never get bore during reading this story. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Its has great story with many twists and turns and lead knows how to handle herself. She is not a coward and can handles herself very well. All the best
Author...we need more updates...the story is pretty amazing..the characters are well develope...the only issue I have is there are not any new chapters......like I've been waiting for months........all the same this novel is a masterpiece ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Patiently waiting for more. Love the story so far. I do hope you will keep writing. Its wonderful to see such young people with quite the imagination
I hope that the dear author will update this lovely novel regularly.. This story is fun but a bit of sad to wait the long time to read another chapter.. Please dear author.. Update this novel more.. Give us a more chapter.. Thanks for update dear author..
Dear writer why do u stop this story when you are getting lovely comment please😫🙏🙏💓 can u continue this interesting story I love the plot please 😫🙏🙏💓😫🙏🙏💓🙏💓 continue💕
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Creo que deberías cambiar la foto de portada, o los lectores no tomarán muy enserio tu historia, porque no cambias a una chica que tenga 2 colores de ojo como tu personaje principal, tendría mucho más sentido que tu foto de portada
La historia me encanto, el personaje principal tiene mucho amor convertido en indiferencia y sed de venganza para todos los que la han tratado tan mal, y de gratitud para los que le hicieron un bien, esta muy bien estructurado cada capítulo te mantiene en suspenso esperando a ver que es lo que va a pasar con el protagonista
It a good story and it very funny too 😊😊so is there more chapter to update or not 😅I want to know what happen next the story please do more chapter
make me hooked up..thanks for sharing your idea/story to up. thanks for your hard work..keep it up. hope can update frequently although real life is more important. take good care of your health too. hope many readers read this novel and will recommend to others. all the best and good luck to you!
The story was okay and kinda funny too. And I want to know what will happen next in the story . Please update more chapter 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😂😭👏👏👏👏👏
What happen? It has been so long since this novel has been updated? It stopped in here and never updated since then. So sad. Will it be updated again?
Why there is no more updates? It has been a while i have been waiting patiently for your update author. Thank you for a wonderful 7 chapters.
It’s only been 8 chapters hence the less then 5 stars and as unsure of updates I put a 2. But what’s been written has been great! Love the storyline and can’t wait to get to know all the characters and story More!!! Good luck!! Keep it up!!
I'm staring to fallin with this story. Why its already the end? Why only 6 chapter? Please continue this story pretty please.... I will hive you my vote if you continue
Let me tell you I also write stories but only for my school magazine and I am also writing a story about leading girl of rich family to get abandon cause of some family stuff, and when I read your storys' sypnosis I was like idea is already taken. But nice idea .keep it up.
Wow!!!it started good!I look forward to your updates author-san☺🤗. Bookmarked. I hope the mc will teach them a lesson and find his guardian angel again😁
thanks - I'm so glad/fortunate that I was able to come across this story 👍👍 ..not usually into reincarnation or travel-back-in-time types, but liking the progress so far - especially with the good writing quality ...very interesting introduction, nice preview into the intrigue, heartbreak, face-slaps'/revenge, and second chance elements. Now I have high expectations ✌️ 😄 but I think no one will be disappointed. Kudos and all the best to you dear author. PS: this is actually my first ever review 😄🤣❤️💚💛💙
kuch be kehnai se pehale ise tho dekna hai..kya patha ye apki fav story bansatha hun....added to my library ..next didd my vote..we suport u
I should thank my friend for recommending this story ..thanks god i found the story..i always love second chance type...thanks for the story..Love you
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Friendship never dies..Even we reborn true friends always same . So fare .its good..can you update more chapter .. And how many chapter for a day.. Will ther be any bonus chapters
1.the story is good..amd we have a Female MC 2.The free style writing of author is good(nice work) 3.We can wait for lots of face slap. 4.First time read a mc with double eye..(cool)
Another story added to my library. Your now one of my fav story.. Gone read the chapters...cant control my thirst for the story... Wkwkwkwkwkwwk
i havent read the chaperts.but i love the story.thanks for the update (+=+) it remind me of hidden marriage..but there no little bun...and there no rebirth
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Your story is nice.. It worth to give a try.. Seriously why always we have those bitches be in high stand.... Go kill them girl...we support you.. Lots of love
Well a new story...all best wishes for author.. I can't give what the story will lead us. But I love the synopsis ... Let's wait and see ... Good luck...Another female bad ass
I really hate when an author gives up on a story, if you know you can't complete it don't bother starting it, but once you start writing it please complete it one day it would gain the recognition it deserves, dear author I hope you haven't forgotten about this novel, if you have please remember to delete it from webnovel, so I won't come across it anymore.
Really good story. Just hope that our dear Author would have time to update the novel as it has a lot of potential. A lot of readers are really looking forward for the novel to progress. I hope you don't drop it. We would gladly spend spirit stones in the future once the chapters go over 100 or something... Best of luck dear Author!
Heart wrenching story. Its sad to see something like this. I feel sad for the lead but she'll take her revenge and balance it without partiality
Very good writing style. A person can never get bore during reading this story. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Its has great story with many twists and turns and lead knows how to handle herself. She is not a coward and can handles herself very well. All the best
Author...we need more updates...the story is pretty amazing..the characters are well develope...the only issue I have is there are not any new chapters......like I've been waiting for months........all the same this novel is a masterpiece ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Patiently waiting for more. Love the story so far. I do hope you will keep writing. Its wonderful to see such young people with quite the imagination
I hope that the dear author will update this lovely novel regularly.. This story is fun but a bit of sad to wait the long time to read another chapter.. Please dear author.. Update this novel more.. Give us a more chapter.. Thanks for update dear author..
Dear writer why do u stop this story when you are getting lovely comment please😫🙏🙏💓 can u continue this interesting story I love the plot please 😫🙏🙏💓😫🙏🙏💓🙏💓 continue💕
Spoiler de révélation Creo que deberías cambiar la foto de portada, o los lectores no tomarán muy enserio tu historia, porque no cambias a una chica que tenga 2 colores de ojo como tu personaje principal, tendría mucho más sentido que tu foto de portada
La historia me encanto, el personaje principal tiene mucho amor convertido en indiferencia y sed de venganza para todos los que la han tratado tan mal, y de gratitud para los que le hicieron un bien, esta muy bien estructurado cada capítulo te mantiene en suspenso esperando a ver que es lo que va a pasar con el protagonista
It a good story and it very funny too 😊😊so is there more chapter to update or not 😅I want to know what happen next the story please do more chapter
make me hooked up..thanks for sharing your idea/story to up. thanks for your hard work..keep it up. hope can update frequently although real life is more important. take good care of your health too. hope many readers read this novel and will recommend to others. all the best and good luck to you!
The story was okay and kinda funny too. And I want to know what will happen next in the story . Please update more chapter 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😂😭👏👏👏👏👏
What happen? It has been so long since this novel has been updated? It stopped in here and never updated since then. So sad. Will it be updated again?
Why there is no more updates? It has been a while i have been waiting patiently for your update author. Thank you for a wonderful 7 chapters.
It’s only been 8 chapters hence the less then 5 stars and as unsure of updates I put a 2. But what’s been written has been great! Love the storyline and can’t wait to get to know all the characters and story More!!! Good luck!! Keep it up!!
I'm staring to fallin with this story. Why its already the end? Why only 6 chapter? Please continue this story pretty please.... I will hive you my vote if you continue
Let me tell you I also write stories but only for my school magazine and I am also writing a story about leading girl of rich family to get abandon cause of some family stuff, and when I read your storys' sypnosis I was like idea is already taken. But nice idea .keep it up.
Wow!!!it started good!I look forward to your updates author-san☺🤗. Bookmarked. I hope the mc will teach them a lesson and find his guardian angel again😁
thanks - I'm so glad/fortunate that I was able to come across this story 👍👍 ..not usually into reincarnation or travel-back-in-time types, but liking the progress so far - especially with the good writing quality ...very interesting introduction, nice preview into the intrigue, heartbreak, face-slaps'/revenge, and second chance elements. Now I have high expectations ✌️ 😄 but I think no one will be disappointed. Kudos and all the best to you dear author. PS: this is actually my first ever review 😄🤣❤️💚💛💙
kuch be kehnai se pehale ise tho dekna hai..kya patha ye apki fav story bansatha hun....added to my library ..next didd my vote..we suport u
I should thank my friend for recommending this story ..thanks god i found the story..i always love second chance type...thanks for the story..Love you
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Spoiler de révélation Friendship never dies..Even we reborn true friends always same . So fare .its good..can you update more chapter .. And how many chapter for a day.. Will ther be any bonus chapters
1.the story is good..amd we have a Female MC 2.The free style writing of author is good(nice work) 3.We can wait for lots of face slap. 4.First time read a mc with double eye..(cool)
Another story added to my library. Your now one of my fav story.. Gone read the chapters...cant control my thirst for the story... Wkwkwkwkwkwwk
i havent read the chaperts.but i love the story.thanks for the update (+=+) it remind me of hidden marriage..but there no little bun...and there no rebirth
Spoiler de révélation Your story is nice.. It worth to give a try.. Seriously why always we have those bitches be in high stand.... Go kill them girl...we support you.. Lots of love
Well a new story...all best wishes for author.. I can't give what the story will lead us. But I love the synopsis ... Let's wait and see ... Good luck...Another female bad ass
I really hate when an author gives up on a story, if you know you can't complete it don't bother starting it, but once you start writing it please complete it one day it would gain the recognition it deserves, dear author I hope you haven't forgotten about this novel, if you have please remember to delete it from webnovel, so I won't come across it anymore.