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Bimpsiege

Hope you write more ...................................................................................................................................................

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Athensxvx

Hoho.. That was scary . Mamamaammammamammaamammamammmamamamamamamammamamammamamamama. A. A. Aa. A. A.. Amamamamamammaammamamamammamamamammama

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Majeh7

The story and the world are amazing, also the power the protagonist has is original, the only problem i have with the story are the updates that are slow................................................................. .....

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Majeh7

The story and the world are amazing, also the power the protagonist has is original, the only problem i have with the story are the updates that are slow................................................................. .....

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Majeh7

The story and the world are amazing, also the power the protagonist has is original, the only problem i have with the story are the updates that are slow................................................................. .....

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Majeh7

The story and the world are amazing, also the power the protagonist has is original, the only problem i have with the story are the updates that are slow................................................................. .....

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usernanne

Its a worthless "with a system" story. I don't know what else there is to say. System stories make no sense, are unoriginal and overall pointless. Does anyone really believe that all those pointless numbers really matter in the end? Its simply a game of play pretend where the MC has unlimited power but doesn't want the reader to know.

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KILLER_B

dude come on I have been waiting quite some time so I need you to update more so that I can have fun man. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH AND MAKE IT GOOD !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

6yr
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WN_grdy_mthr_fker

every thing about this novel is good but the only reason it didnt attract more audience is because of its cover... and only readers attracted were assholes like i am too cool and with sofisticated test to give five star hahahaha.. my only reason for reading so late because i underestimated the novel coz of dull cover(when its an old saing dont judge a book by its cover)

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topak
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Strongest and now in prison lol,chapter to short, trash marvelfic๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@-zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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KILLER_B

pls release more chapters HAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!biggie

6yr
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GGMissFortune

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KILLER_B

I Love it and I hope you keep up the good work pal. HHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHHAHAAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

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Otakusalem

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BorderlineAnorexic

Damn it. Your intro got me hook and then you just had to introduce a system. I'm tired of system novels. They're so overused. But I wish you the best of luck.

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ADDE13

MAN PLEASE WRITE SOME MORE THE YOUR NOVEL TOO GOOD AND IM CRAVING TO READ MORE PLEASE :)= --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------hhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaahahahahahahahahahahaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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ADDE13

Please make more chapters so we can enjoy it sadsadsaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad!"!!!!skkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkakmskkccccccccccccccccc

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thiago_nvz

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JokerBr

Pls more chapters ............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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HEHAASS

UPDATE MORE U PIECE OS SHIT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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olympus

The story and the world are amazing, also the power the protagonist has is original, the only problem i have with the story are the updates that are slow................................................................. .....

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glmo11

cooooooooollllll ssssssstorrrryyyyyyyyyyyyyy--------------------- moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee plsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss hahahahha

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BabyMonarch

Good story line.............................................................................................. .............................................................................................................................

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Melshan

Muito bom, recomendo ร  todos a acompanhar nรฃo vรฃo se arrepender. ..... ...... .. ......... .. ...... .........................................................................

6yr
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KingConner

Cool Story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!______________!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!_______!!!!!!!!!!!!Cool Story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!______________!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!_______!!!!!!!!!!!Cool Story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!______________!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!_______!!!!!!!!!!!Cool Story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!______________!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!_______!!!!!!!!!!!Cool Story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!______________!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!_______!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Bimpsiege

Hope you write more ...................................................................................................................................................

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Athensxvx

Hoho.. That was scary . Mamamaammammamammaamammamammmamamamamamamammamamammamamamama. A. A. Aa. A. A.. Amamamamamammaammamamamammamamamammama

5yr
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Majeh7

The story and the world are amazing, also the power the protagonist has is original, the only problem i have with the story are the updates that are slow................................................................. .....

5yr
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Majeh7

The story and the world are amazing, also the power the protagonist has is original, the only problem i have with the story are the updates that are slow................................................................. .....

5yr
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Majeh7

The story and the world are amazing, also the power the protagonist has is original, the only problem i have with the story are the updates that are slow................................................................. .....

5yr
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Majeh7

The story and the world are amazing, also the power the protagonist has is original, the only problem i have with the story are the updates that are slow................................................................. .....

5yr
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usernanne

Its a worthless "with a system" story. I don't know what else there is to say. System stories make no sense, are unoriginal and overall pointless. Does anyone really believe that all those pointless numbers really matter in the end? Its simply a game of play pretend where the MC has unlimited power but doesn't want the reader to know.

6yr
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KILLER_B

dude come on I have been waiting quite some time so I need you to update more so that I can have fun man. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH AND MAKE IT GOOD !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

6yr
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WN_grdy_mthr_fker

every thing about this novel is good but the only reason it didnt attract more audience is because of its cover... and only readers attracted were assholes like i am too cool and with sofisticated test to give five star hahahaha.. my only reason for reading so late because i underestimated the novel coz of dull cover(when its an old saing dont judge a book by its cover)

6yr
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topak
LV 14 Badge

Strongest and now in prison lol,chapter to short, trash marvelfic๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@-zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

6yr
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KILLER_B

pls release more chapters HAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!biggie

6yr
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GGMissFortune

slow updates weak mc slow updates weak mc slow updates weak mc slow updates weak mc slow updates weak mc slow updates weak mc slow updates weak mc slow updates weak mc slow updates weak mc slow updates weak mc slow updates weak mc slow updates weak mc slow updates weak mc slow updates weak mc slow updates weak mc slow updates weak mc

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KILLER_B

I Love it and I hope you keep up the good work pal. HHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHHAHAAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

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Otakusalem

More updates more updates more updates more updates more updates more updates more updates more updates more updates updates more more updates more updates more updates more updates more updates more updates updates more more updates more updates more updates more updates more updates more updates more updates more updates more updates more updates more updates more updates more updates more updates more updates more updates more updates more updates more๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ updates

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BorderlineAnorexic

Damn it. Your intro got me hook and then you just had to introduce a system. I'm tired of system novels. They're so overused. But I wish you the best of luck.

6yr
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ADDE13

MAN PLEASE WRITE SOME MORE THE YOUR NOVEL TOO GOOD AND IM CRAVING TO READ MORE PLEASE :)= --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------hhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaahahahahahahahahahahaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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ADDE13

Please make more chapters so we can enjoy it sadsadsaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad!"!!!!skkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkakmskkccccccccccccccccc

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thiago_nvz

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JokerBr

Pls more chapters ............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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HEHAASS

UPDATE MORE U PIECE OS SHIT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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olympus

The story and the world are amazing, also the power the protagonist has is original, the only problem i have with the story are the updates that are slow................................................................. .....

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glmo11

cooooooooollllll ssssssstorrrryyyyyyyyyyyyyy--------------------- moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee plsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss hahahahha

6yr
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BabyMonarch

Good story line.............................................................................................. .............................................................................................................................

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Melshan

Muito bom, recomendo ร  todos a acompanhar nรฃo vรฃo se arrepender. ..... ...... .. ......... .. ...... .........................................................................

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KingConner

Cool Story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!______________!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!_______!!!!!!!!!!!!Cool Story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!______________!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!_______!!!!!!!!!!!Cool Story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!______________!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!_______!!!!!!!!!!!Cool Story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!______________!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!_______!!!!!!!!!!!Cool Story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!______________!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!_______!!!!!!!!!!!!

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