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Hey wtf? So I gave 5 star to respect the author. It's his story so I respect it. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . This is warzone 😂
Curious..so I read the synopsis..turns out the author is a dick cry baby ❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲🚾🚾🚾🚾💩💩💩💩
Curious..so I read the synopsis..turns out the author is a dick cry baby ❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲🚾🚾🚾🚾💩💩💩💩
Curious..so I read the synopsis..turns out the author is a dick cry baby ❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲🚾🚾🚾🚾💩💩💩💩
He made this novel not have a harem and had no tags warning he got my hopes up Not putting up tags are bad it’s common decency yet no one uses fickingn tags From now on if I find a good novel and it’s not a harem and has no tags ima give 1 Star. If it has a harem I’ll look away but still be fed up Put tagggsss on your Fucking novel if you are putting it up if there is a harem make a harem tag if it is non harem put a non harem tag It takes 5 seconds of a author is not shure at fist it’s cool as long as when he makes up his mind he puts a tag up. 5 fucking second I don’t like bieng harem blocked it’s just as bad as getting cock blocked It hurts as much as when you get to the third chap and gender bender happend it’s not cool and it feels tarrable Yes I’m fucking mad I was hyped at the first chap How else shuld one feel if one is trying to find some novels and no one puts a indicator that the tag you like is there or more importantly not there I think I am ritefully mad Tell me am I right I’d like to hear a unbiased opinion And no even if I do I want take this off as it is a learning experience for this author and any who come by and read this No one can find **** they like without tags There is no built in tags like outher sites so you have to take 5 fucking seconds to put it in your synopsis and yes this will be posted 3 times Don’t make the mistake of thinking I’m hunting novels cus I’m not if I come by a non harem novel that is in taged and says nothing no indicator I will put this here If there is a indicator like In the synopsis the mc tracing with his harem ect then we are cool if you put the mc traveling with his girl then I won’t put hate but this non raging **** needs to stop And no I do not have a shinny surface to see how many blood vessels I’m poping in this rant
Ima be shameless cus Some scrub gave a bad review I don’t really care this is just to prove a point lol trololol And his name is cliffkun. Why am I doing this again. Jibrish jibrish mumble Hentai I. The background me marking pewdiepie references
Fuck you rabid butterfly **** you rabid butterfly Ima be shameless ima be shameless Teach you cliffkun a are the most savage biengs in existence trust me I know bieng in this race sucks.
I didn't read it because I despise the author. See how you like your own medicine. Putting bad reviews on fics just cause you don't like the work it's based on. Pathetic ****. Don't read this crap.
im the author I will still shamelessly give myself 5 stars and now I found out I can give myself power stones im even more shameless======================================================================================================
Honestly, I like the plot around it but not the way it was typed up. It looks like you were in a huge rush and you didn't bother to go back and fix the mistakes you made. I hope you revise your first chapter and try to fix the many errors in it. This definitely has potential if you fix the errors!
im cliff kun hoping that I did ok for a first time novel and also pls give all the feedback also I'm a little shameless rating my self five stars lol hope this douse the trick
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Hey wtf? So I gave 5 star to respect the author. It's his story so I respect it. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . This is warzone 😂
Curious..so I read the synopsis..turns out the author is a dick cry baby ❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲🚾🚾🚾🚾💩💩💩💩
Curious..so I read the synopsis..turns out the author is a dick cry baby ❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲🚾🚾🚾🚾💩💩💩💩
Curious..so I read the synopsis..turns out the author is a dick cry baby ❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🈹🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲🚾🚾🚾🚾💩💩💩💩
He made this novel not have a harem and had no tags warning he got my hopes up Not putting up tags are bad it’s common decency yet no one uses fickingn tags From now on if I find a good novel and it’s not a harem and has no tags ima give 1 Star. If it has a harem I’ll look away but still be fed up Put tagggsss on your Fucking novel if you are putting it up if there is a harem make a harem tag if it is non harem put a non harem tag It takes 5 seconds of a author is not shure at fist it’s cool as long as when he makes up his mind he puts a tag up. 5 fucking second I don’t like bieng harem blocked it’s just as bad as getting cock blocked It hurts as much as when you get to the third chap and gender bender happend it’s not cool and it feels tarrable Yes I’m fucking mad I was hyped at the first chap How else shuld one feel if one is trying to find some novels and no one puts a indicator that the tag you like is there or more importantly not there I think I am ritefully mad Tell me am I right I’d like to hear a unbiased opinion And no even if I do I want take this off as it is a learning experience for this author and any who come by and read this No one can find **** they like without tags There is no built in tags like outher sites so you have to take 5 fucking seconds to put it in your synopsis and yes this will be posted 3 times Don’t make the mistake of thinking I’m hunting novels cus I’m not if I come by a non harem novel that is in taged and says nothing no indicator I will put this here If there is a indicator like In the synopsis the mc tracing with his harem ect then we are cool if you put the mc traveling with his girl then I won’t put hate but this non raging **** needs to stop And no I do not have a shinny surface to see how many blood vessels I’m poping in this rant
Ima be shameless cus Some scrub gave a bad review I don’t really care this is just to prove a point lol trololol And his name is cliffkun. Why am I doing this again. Jibrish jibrish mumble Hentai I. The background me marking pewdiepie references
Fuck you rabid butterfly **** you rabid butterfly Ima be shameless ima be shameless Teach you cliffkun a are the most savage biengs in existence trust me I know bieng in this race sucks.
I didn't read it because I despise the author. See how you like your own medicine. Putting bad reviews on fics just cause you don't like the work it's based on. Pathetic ****. Don't read this crap.
im the author I will still shamelessly give myself 5 stars and now I found out I can give myself power stones im even more shameless======================================================================================================
Honestly, I like the plot around it but not the way it was typed up. It looks like you were in a huge rush and you didn't bother to go back and fix the mistakes you made. I hope you revise your first chapter and try to fix the many errors in it. This definitely has potential if you fix the errors!
im cliff kun hoping that I did ok for a first time novel and also pls give all the feedback also I'm a little shameless rating my self five stars lol hope this douse the trick
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.