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One of the best written stories and definitely one of a kind story compared to other isekais. My heart aches from not being able to read more chapters. 5/5
This is the best-isekied story I have ever read. Sadly for undisclosed reasons the author decided to stop writing, author, I beg of you to re-start writing.
Five stars out of five stars hands down I’ve only read up to the fifth chapter and I can see somewhat where the story is going and I am really liking it it is such a unique concept and I can’t wait to binge read this story all I can say is thank you so much author for creating such a wonder for me to read
This is a great story, it deserves more attention and love. however, the author seems to... I hope I get to see more chapters. From your fan. OOF
as a senior God, I advice this novice God to maintain distance from the puny mortals! .......,.......................................... .... .
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
The novel is very good. The plot is good and built correctly. With a good development of the characters and a good development of the story. The only defect is very slow updating.
An interesting and fun read. I really enjoyed the first part, this current arc has not interested me yet, but it can be good. How much about the world is well built, and is being presented constantly to be digested better.
I think that he will get out of the game and do not have any desire get his revenge. That is kind of sad. Kdksndbdjdidodjenejdiiszixbgdjdikdndndndbrndodjfncncifodndndndidxjdnejiddjbbxdbdiidhebdbdheididjcncdrdjcbiddvgusowosoxkdnndnfj
The novel is amazing but the updates are realy slow ........................................................................................
It's a amazing history I'm a crazy reader from Brazil and I love You're amazing!!!! I am very pleased with the direction the story is taking, although in my opinion I would like you to talk a little about his real world, even if it is not the focus Keep up the great work
I love reading this book it inspires me and I can't stop reading it. Hopefully the author won't give up on this book. I am writing so many of these words because I need to write a lot to post this and the ratings, but this book is one of my most favorite books to read even better than most published books out there.
I like this novel a lot. I hope there will be updatses soon. I already forgot what happened in the last chapters. I tried recalling it but sadly I forgot. Maybe I'll read through again.
This story is amazing and recently started up again I cant wait to see where it will go.
This story is really great, I'm glad I came back to it. I hope you don't go on hiatus again anytime soon, I'd be very sad. Please keep up the good work!!
I love this book really. It was some time on hiatus but it's again going strong and I would always use more power stones if possible and would also shamelessly aske here for more and faster chapters pls if u read this then know I'm always waiting for more even before u did go to a hiatus and I will always wait for more
I usually don't write reviews but i feel like this book doesn't get the credit it deserves i kept this book on my profile because its just that good and i really hope more people give it a chance
Great quality, excelent story progression, and wonderful plot. Welcome back author, and hope you are well. Great and good luck with Volume 2.
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Ah what a good book this is... The world building and the character design is pretty good though the characters personalitys are it completely fleshed out. The reason my review is so low is because of the lack of releases for the last year... If there are some releases I'll probably review it again.
Overall a good novel, very unique and innovative. It's a shame this has ended.....................
I love the first 2 arc of this story, unfortunately the author has no updated in a year, either here or patreon. Great character and world building. It starts a little rough (weird syntax and perspective changes) but overall it's superb, as it goes it gets smoother. Characters you can relate to, no crazy fillers and wordy ness, good balance of action and story pace.
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Great to read...Author Please Come back
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An absolutely amazing book that leaves you feeling so many emotions and let's you genuinely feel how the mc feels it is definitely one of my favorite books of all time and I absolutely cannot wait for more
It's great but why'd you stop writing it's been 7 months bra cmon 1 more chapter isn't so bad he losses half his power snow elf uses vine whip to let her go of him while vampires sense something wrong and flee to help him and I the end he's to weak and the only option is to become a vampire using his daughters power death and aurens power life to become damphir you know demi vampire like vampire hunter d.
Is a global story have characters very interesting si tuviera que elegir una historia sobre dioses, esta es la mejor, muestra mucho sobre sus personajes
I have to have more then 140 characters and I really did not read this so do not take this for granted I just won't give it a bad review how many more chapters do I need to post this oh my godI have to have more then 140 characters and I really did not read this so do not take this for granted I just won't give it a bad review how many more chapters do I need to post this oh my god
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I really like how this novel is not like a lot of reincarnation novels were it gives the person piece of mind. It also a good novel just to read.
Hi All. I'm the author of this novel. This is one of my first works as a writer! I hope you do enjoy and please feel free to comment below or on a chapter. I will try to respond when I can! Also feel free to join us on discord. We don't bite sometimes. https://discord.gg/Ap9KZkQ
One of the best written stories and definitely one of a kind story compared to other isekais. My heart aches from not being able to read more chapters. 5/5
This is the best-isekied story I have ever read. Sadly for undisclosed reasons the author decided to stop writing, author, I beg of you to re-start writing.
Five stars out of five stars hands down I’ve only read up to the fifth chapter and I can see somewhat where the story is going and I am really liking it it is such a unique concept and I can’t wait to binge read this story all I can say is thank you so much author for creating such a wonder for me to read
This is a great story, it deserves more attention and love. however, the author seems to... I hope I get to see more chapters. From your fan. OOF
as a senior God, I advice this novice God to maintain distance from the puny mortals! .......,.......................................... .... .
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
The novel is very good. The plot is good and built correctly. With a good development of the characters and a good development of the story. The only defect is very slow updating.
An interesting and fun read. I really enjoyed the first part, this current arc has not interested me yet, but it can be good. How much about the world is well built, and is being presented constantly to be digested better.
I think that he will get out of the game and do not have any desire get his revenge. That is kind of sad. Kdksndbdjdidodjenejdiiszixbgdjdikdndndndbrndodjfncncifodndndndidxjdnejiddjbbxdbdiidhebdbdheididjcncdrdjcbiddvgusowosoxkdnndnfj
The novel is amazing but the updates are realy slow ........................................................................................
It's a amazing history I'm a crazy reader from Brazil and I love You're amazing!!!! I am very pleased with the direction the story is taking, although in my opinion I would like you to talk a little about his real world, even if it is not the focus Keep up the great work
I love reading this book it inspires me and I can't stop reading it. Hopefully the author won't give up on this book. I am writing so many of these words because I need to write a lot to post this and the ratings, but this book is one of my most favorite books to read even better than most published books out there.
I like this novel a lot. I hope there will be updatses soon. I already forgot what happened in the last chapters. I tried recalling it but sadly I forgot. Maybe I'll read through again.
This story is amazing and recently started up again I cant wait to see where it will go.
This story is really great, I'm glad I came back to it. I hope you don't go on hiatus again anytime soon, I'd be very sad. Please keep up the good work!!
I love this book really. It was some time on hiatus but it's again going strong and I would always use more power stones if possible and would also shamelessly aske here for more and faster chapters pls if u read this then know I'm always waiting for more even before u did go to a hiatus and I will always wait for more
I usually don't write reviews but i feel like this book doesn't get the credit it deserves i kept this book on my profile because its just that good and i really hope more people give it a chance
Great quality, excelent story progression, and wonderful plot. Welcome back author, and hope you are well. Great and good luck with Volume 2.
GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOO GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD
Ah what a good book this is... The world building and the character design is pretty good though the characters personalitys are it completely fleshed out. The reason my review is so low is because of the lack of releases for the last year... If there are some releases I'll probably review it again.
Overall a good novel, very unique and innovative. It's a shame this has ended.....................
I love the first 2 arc of this story, unfortunately the author has no updated in a year, either here or patreon. Great character and world building. It starts a little rough (weird syntax and perspective changes) but overall it's superb, as it goes it gets smoother. Characters you can relate to, no crazy fillers and wordy ness, good balance of action and story pace.
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Great to read...Author Please Come back
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An absolutely amazing book that leaves you feeling so many emotions and let's you genuinely feel how the mc feels it is definitely one of my favorite books of all time and I absolutely cannot wait for more
It's great but why'd you stop writing it's been 7 months bra cmon 1 more chapter isn't so bad he losses half his power snow elf uses vine whip to let her go of him while vampires sense something wrong and flee to help him and I the end he's to weak and the only option is to become a vampire using his daughters power death and aurens power life to become damphir you know demi vampire like vampire hunter d.
Is a global story have characters very interesting si tuviera que elegir una historia sobre dioses, esta es la mejor, muestra mucho sobre sus personajes
I have to have more then 140 characters and I really did not read this so do not take this for granted I just won't give it a bad review how many more chapters do I need to post this oh my godI have to have more then 140 characters and I really did not read this so do not take this for granted I just won't give it a bad review how many more chapters do I need to post this oh my god
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I really like how this novel is not like a lot of reincarnation novels were it gives the person piece of mind. It also a good novel just to read.
Hi All. I'm the author of this novel. This is one of my first works as a writer! I hope you do enjoy and please feel free to comment below or on a chapter. I will try to respond when I can! Also feel free to join us on discord. We don't bite sometimes. https://discord.gg/Ap9KZkQ