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I really like the story but no way I'm paying this much! it's almost 5000 chapters to finish it and it starts charging before chapter 100.
I reslly do not get the allure of having kids as FL! This trope of having a child barely 12-15 yr old as FL makes me sick to my stomach. What is even more creepy is the ADULT Male lead finding sexual interest at all in a CHILD!! That is not just creepy, but it is downright disturbing. The FL lead are almost always presented as his Goddess (super beautiful, flawless, overpowered, Virgin, but completely and utterly loses the use of her brain once she meets the male lead) while EVERY ML is presented as this Overly Over Overpowered character who has every red flags (controlling, stalkerish, manipulative, egoistic, and most of all pedophile and molester). What is even romantic in this?? It is just glorification of child sexual abuse. It always starts sorta okay and then only goes downhill. For once I would like to read a transmigration novel where the FL who is an ADULT, average looking, makes mistakes, is not a virgin, is smart, exibits human emotions and is not flawless but strggles to achieve her goal. And a male lead who is strong but understanding, brave but not overbearing, prideful but not egoistic, a male lead I can get behind. seriously so disappointed 😞
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I used to think that it will be a good one, I was totally wrong!! ML is sincere but portrayed to be using force towards the FL and the latter is so confused, so indecisive about love, she knows that he likes ML past self(MCY) and yet still going on a push&pull relationship with ML present self (LMY), i understand that since they are the basically the same but dude!! She currently doesn't know that they are the same and yet still claiming to love MCY then beinh lovey-dovey with LMY and constantly denying while enjoying it, if she really don't want to be entangled she should have just go & explore the word while cultivating her strength. It's so frustrating that i reached 1000 chapter witnessing such thing. And i know the author wants to portray FL being domineering but there is a fine line between being domineering & being arrogant. It's so frustrating that it makes my heart bleed for this story, i badly want to finish reading it but i guess my frustration won't allow me.
Actually I don't understand why most authors have such a strong taste in men ., Why does the male lead have to be overbearing and so annoying in the early stages of the novel . Forgive me for not understanding the concept of such love development but if I meet an annoying male lead that starts by bullying the FL ,unless I really need a distraction and I have no other novel to read I'll either quit reading or skip the chapters.
By past one week, I have read upto 3314 chapters of this noveltill now, so far I loved the main leads, and the stories, there is a point that I wept, Haug Yueli aka Bai Ruo Li meets her father in the Lone Summit. Can I ask th author when will the update for new chapters from 3777 will be uploaded? I am s eager to know how Fl will defeat Sacred Phoenix Race's attacks... love you to the eternity from a reader
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I read up to chapter 930 so far. The story seems to start a little slow but it does pick up. What I like most is the romance. There is regular interactions between the MC and the ML and the development of their relationship is consistent with the plot of the story. I agree that the weak to OP premise is a little cliche. But, that alone should not be used to judge the novel. On the contrary, I enjoy reading novels where the MC gains strength to fight back against the people that oppressed her. I would actually find it really unsatisfying to have a MC that doesn't improve, is weak, and/or is constantly bullied by others.
ML acts like trash about 75% of the time. Plot is prolonged almost endlessly by characters not communicating and being selectively brain damaged. Still, it is decently fun to read casualy.
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Es una historia un tanto larga, pero entretenida. Como toda "protagonista" femenina, es bastante ingeniosa, pero como siempre, una debilucha sometida al protagonista masculino. Aún así será una lectura divertida.
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I like this novel . FL is good and ML is also good but I think author too focused on ml illness and prolonged it without giving away to cure it then nearly 2000 chs he gives the hopes and cure it then again he gives the twist and didn't cure it completely . likewise the real villain in the novel Lord zhan became visible only nearly 2000 chs. I think novel is stuck in it. I want some speed up.
Honestly I was kind of hoping for a better story. I enjoy the female lead she's interesting. The thing that really turns me off in the story is the Male lead. He has no respect for the other person's feelings, or wants, etc.. and while I don't mind arrogant people, him forcing himself on her at the start is bad.
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the ml is unbearable. wayyyy to controlling even for the typical ml. and the novel is better without him. the female lead isnt amazing but I do like her. and then scenarios are stretched out as long as possible.
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Another book ruined by a worthless male lead. There is no need for the ML to be there, even worse, he takes away from the story. He’s pretty much just using his cultivation to molest the MC, who is supposed to be from a higher realm and leagues above him. Every time they meet the only thing that happens is he dominates her and pins her down, while thinking about how she is his and he will make sure she can never leave. The story is actually pretty decent, as long as you skip all the chapters where the ML is mentioned.
I have to say that this is one of my favorite books. i love the female lead and male lead, great plot twists and sometimes i could give a laugh or two! 10/10 rereading it again!!
Good plot.... wonderful transaction.. completed upto 100 chapters within a hour....and soon anxiouslywait to finishthe book. thanks a lot auther...
hey .. I'm currently at chapter 167...the male lead is just too overbearing..does it get better with time ? or is he just as forceful as always.👀 😭😭
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This is the best story line I have ever come across in this app The female lead and the male lead is my favorite of all time I can't wait for new chapters Please hurry and update them please 🙏
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There's too much scheming,though it's fine as long as it's acceptable. I feel too bad for the people like the crown prince which was scheme to pay 13 million gold and the armament he bought was plot against also. Poor guy....
This story is amazing and unique. I am so hooked on the characters. I love the plot and everything about this book. I would like to Inform you that NovelStar is having a competition, you might want to join. https://author.starlight.ink/essay/index.html
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Another paedophile of a ML character who constantly sexually assaults the FL... I don't know why this seems to be a popular choice of character but I can only assume it's the authors preference
So I read this and my first thought is that I really want the ML to die a horrible death. Why anyone would think this trash romantic is beyond me. The ML is a child molester. There is no other way to say it. Using higher strength to detain and feel up an undeveloped girl is just not acceptable in any way. Not to mention him intruding into the MC safe spaces regularly to coop a feel. "Enjoying her smooth skin", more like forcing an underaged girl to indure his wandering hands. For the FL, our MC, this behaviour is even worse because she has recently lost everything because of betrayal and now there is this molester who stops her from feeling any safety whatsoever. This is the kind of thing that breaks even the Strongest mind and it shows. The FL is clearly trying to regain control by brutally dealing with any opponent while still steadily losing herself because all her efforts are fruitless in front of this bastars ML. My desperate hope for this novel is that the FL/MC brutally kills the ML as soon as she gets the chance otherwise this is only going to get worse. I would be greatly disappointed, but not really surprised if the FL gets stockholm syndrome and starts enjoying the MLs horrendous actions.
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This is a great book, where both the ML and FL are strong. The male is someone all girls would want LOL
I really like the story but no way I'm paying this much! it's almost 5000 chapters to finish it and it starts charging before chapter 100.
I reslly do not get the allure of having kids as FL! This trope of having a child barely 12-15 yr old as FL makes me sick to my stomach. What is even more creepy is the ADULT Male lead finding sexual interest at all in a CHILD!! That is not just creepy, but it is downright disturbing. The FL lead are almost always presented as his Goddess (super beautiful, flawless, overpowered, Virgin, but completely and utterly loses the use of her brain once she meets the male lead) while EVERY ML is presented as this Overly Over Overpowered character who has every red flags (controlling, stalkerish, manipulative, egoistic, and most of all pedophile and molester). What is even romantic in this?? It is just glorification of child sexual abuse. It always starts sorta okay and then only goes downhill. For once I would like to read a transmigration novel where the FL who is an ADULT, average looking, makes mistakes, is not a virgin, is smart, exibits human emotions and is not flawless but strggles to achieve her goal. And a male lead who is strong but understanding, brave but not overbearing, prideful but not egoistic, a male lead I can get behind. seriously so disappointed 😞
Spoiler de révélation I used to think that it will be a good one, I was totally wrong!! ML is sincere but portrayed to be using force towards the FL and the latter is so confused, so indecisive about love, she knows that he likes ML past self(MCY) and yet still going on a push&pull relationship with ML present self (LMY), i understand that since they are the basically the same but dude!! She currently doesn't know that they are the same and yet still claiming to love MCY then beinh lovey-dovey with LMY and constantly denying while enjoying it, if she really don't want to be entangled she should have just go & explore the word while cultivating her strength. It's so frustrating that i reached 1000 chapter witnessing such thing. And i know the author wants to portray FL being domineering but there is a fine line between being domineering & being arrogant. It's so frustrating that it makes my heart bleed for this story, i badly want to finish reading it but i guess my frustration won't allow me.
Actually I don't understand why most authors have such a strong taste in men ., Why does the male lead have to be overbearing and so annoying in the early stages of the novel . Forgive me for not understanding the concept of such love development but if I meet an annoying male lead that starts by bullying the FL ,unless I really need a distraction and I have no other novel to read I'll either quit reading or skip the chapters.
By past one week, I have read upto 3314 chapters of this noveltill now, so far I loved the main leads, and the stories, there is a point that I wept, Haug Yueli aka Bai Ruo Li meets her father in the Lone Summit. Can I ask th author when will the update for new chapters from 3777 will be uploaded? I am s eager to know how Fl will defeat Sacred Phoenix Race's attacks... love you to the eternity from a reader
Spoiler de révélation I read up to chapter 930 so far. The story seems to start a little slow but it does pick up. What I like most is the romance. There is regular interactions between the MC and the ML and the development of their relationship is consistent with the plot of the story. I agree that the weak to OP premise is a little cliche. But, that alone should not be used to judge the novel. On the contrary, I enjoy reading novels where the MC gains strength to fight back against the people that oppressed her. I would actually find it really unsatisfying to have a MC that doesn't improve, is weak, and/or is constantly bullied by others.
ML acts like trash about 75% of the time. Plot is prolonged almost endlessly by characters not communicating and being selectively brain damaged. Still, it is decently fun to read casualy.
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Es una historia un tanto larga, pero entretenida. Como toda "protagonista" femenina, es bastante ingeniosa, pero como siempre, una debilucha sometida al protagonista masculino. Aún así será una lectura divertida.
Spoiler de révélation I like this novel . FL is good and ML is also good but I think author too focused on ml illness and prolonged it without giving away to cure it then nearly 2000 chs he gives the hopes and cure it then again he gives the twist and didn't cure it completely . likewise the real villain in the novel Lord zhan became visible only nearly 2000 chs. I think novel is stuck in it. I want some speed up.
Honestly I was kind of hoping for a better story. I enjoy the female lead she's interesting. The thing that really turns me off in the story is the Male lead. He has no respect for the other person's feelings, or wants, etc.. and while I don't mind arrogant people, him forcing himself on her at the start is bad.
Spoiler de révélation the ml is unbearable. wayyyy to controlling even for the typical ml. and the novel is better without him. the female lead isnt amazing but I do like her. and then scenarios are stretched out as long as possible.
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Another book ruined by a worthless male lead. There is no need for the ML to be there, even worse, he takes away from the story. He’s pretty much just using his cultivation to molest the MC, who is supposed to be from a higher realm and leagues above him. Every time they meet the only thing that happens is he dominates her and pins her down, while thinking about how she is his and he will make sure she can never leave. The story is actually pretty decent, as long as you skip all the chapters where the ML is mentioned.
I have to say that this is one of my favorite books. i love the female lead and male lead, great plot twists and sometimes i could give a laugh or two! 10/10 rereading it again!!
Good plot.... wonderful transaction.. completed upto 100 chapters within a hour....and soon anxiouslywait to finishthe book. thanks a lot auther...
hey .. I'm currently at chapter 167...the male lead is just too overbearing..does it get better with time ? or is he just as forceful as always.👀 😭😭
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This is the best story line I have ever come across in this app The female lead and the male lead is my favorite of all time I can't wait for new chapters Please hurry and update them please 🙏
Spoiler de révélation There's too much scheming,though it's fine as long as it's acceptable. I feel too bad for the people like the crown prince which was scheme to pay 13 million gold and the armament he bought was plot against also. Poor guy....
This story is amazing and unique. I am so hooked on the characters. I love the plot and everything about this book. I would like to Inform you that NovelStar is having a competition, you might want to join. https://author.starlight.ink/essay/index.html
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Another paedophile of a ML character who constantly sexually assaults the FL... I don't know why this seems to be a popular choice of character but I can only assume it's the authors preference
So I read this and my first thought is that I really want the ML to die a horrible death. Why anyone would think this trash romantic is beyond me. The ML is a child molester. There is no other way to say it. Using higher strength to detain and feel up an undeveloped girl is just not acceptable in any way. Not to mention him intruding into the MC safe spaces regularly to coop a feel. "Enjoying her smooth skin", more like forcing an underaged girl to indure his wandering hands. For the FL, our MC, this behaviour is even worse because she has recently lost everything because of betrayal and now there is this molester who stops her from feeling any safety whatsoever. This is the kind of thing that breaks even the Strongest mind and it shows. The FL is clearly trying to regain control by brutally dealing with any opponent while still steadily losing herself because all her efforts are fruitless in front of this bastars ML. My desperate hope for this novel is that the FL/MC brutally kills the ML as soon as she gets the chance otherwise this is only going to get worse. I would be greatly disappointed, but not really surprised if the FL gets stockholm syndrome and starts enjoying the MLs horrendous actions.
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This is a great book, where both the ML and FL are strong. The male is someone all girls would want LOL