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The storyline is great! The protagonist is wild which I like most. Can't wait for Ren to have a whirlwind love story. Lol. But, first she has to revenge her family. You're doing great with details now. Keep up the good work! P. S. I'm not sure but it seems like there's no cover/ pic on the book. I hope you can upload one. P. S. S. Don't stop writing, you can slow down and do you're own thing but please don't stop writing. Thanks you for this story! 😘
I dont think ot lacks details i feel more like its a mystry that will be discovered later in the story. I like it so far its somuch different from all the novels i have read, and i like how its going so far so keep up the good work its amazing you could think this story out at such a young age dont let it discourage you if some complain! Ill be waiting for new exciting chapters!
It's my own story and is the first book I ever wrote, previously I dropped it by stopping the uploads because I was disappointed in how it was viewed by the readers but now I as an author grew and I am now fully confident in realsing this book of mine with no changes besides grammer and a few corrections. Hopefully you all love my crazy and wild Ichigo. 😁
The storyline is great! The protagonist is wild which I like most. Can't wait for Ren to have a whirlwind love story. Lol. But, first she has to revenge her family. You're doing great with details now. Keep up the good work! P. S. I'm not sure but it seems like there's no cover/ pic on the book. I hope you can upload one. P. S. S. Don't stop writing, you can slow down and do you're own thing but please don't stop writing. Thanks you for this story! 😘
I dont think ot lacks details i feel more like its a mystry that will be discovered later in the story. I like it so far its somuch different from all the novels i have read, and i like how its going so far so keep up the good work its amazing you could think this story out at such a young age dont let it discourage you if some complain! Ill be waiting for new exciting chapters!
It's my own story and is the first book I ever wrote, previously I dropped it by stopping the uploads because I was disappointed in how it was viewed by the readers but now I as an author grew and I am now fully confident in realsing this book of mine with no changes besides grammer and a few corrections. Hopefully you all love my crazy and wild Ichigo. 😁