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Only Salvatore can claim to be the greatest HITMAN to ever exist, at the mere age of 21 he has cemented his claim to the blood drenched throne of death, possessing the greatest strength the underworld has ever seen he stands at the peak of the underworld. However now despite his countless legendary accomplishment’s, theirs exist just one last problem, he’s bored. They say true loneliness can only be found by those who stand at the peak, and for one who exist as high as Salvatore this is all too true for now possessing peerless strength he hungers for a true challenge of his supreme skills and wishes to climb to new heights of power. Fortunately for him he has be been chosen to journey to a new world. Follow Salvatore, the greatest HITMAN to ever exist as he begins his greatest journey ever.
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The characters personality, skills, power , and intelligence doesn’t even match up on the background you gave him. Add to the fact that you severely NERF him. The beggining chapters could be compiled as an entire chapter. Too much info dump at the beginning. The MC could have learn some of those things on his journey. The grammar is superb and the writing is good. The only real problem is how you represent your MC. Think of how a real battle hardened assassin would act. His background is a huge joke.
WoW just WoW.. The idea behind this story is very well brought, like the background and plot alike.. And I also like the story so far and its interesting to know where his limit is and what's his limit.. And to also know who will be his allies or enemies.. Especially his Waifu or Waifus.. So I will stick to the story and find out, what's in store for me...
A hitman is someone paid to kill but the mc seems to kill for fun, training, then payment..given his background in the mafia where he worked his way up and the training given to him by his family his actions in the new world goes from smart (training new skills, learning basic information from codex, fighting weak easy to kill rabbits and learning the limits of his current body) to dumb (fighting a wolf pack when all his fighting instincts tell him he could be killed ..only to survive due to plot armor since author forgot that spells need to be spoken and people need to breath yet he kept using 'blink' while running up a tree as if his low stats gave him greater lung capacity then 2 high level elite wolfs). then plot armor gave him a means to boost stats to the heavens and earn exp and skills and knowledge just by extracting an item from anything dead making it so at a low level he can jump ranks to kill 30+ levels things with just his stats and stolen skills..all the while he forgets he had crafting skills so he went around nude even when he got plenty of furs and leather to use for clothing crafting and plenty of wood around plus bones to use to make bone weapons, arrows, bow, ect.. the system, stats, skills , world building (if i close one eye to the dumb rabbit that befriends the strange hairless being in a forest that should not have such a creature and ask/leads it back to its race safe haven) , and story potential but then over powered plot armor killed what could have been a long arc of training and survival struggling after his 7 day damage reduction and fast healing ended letting him truly enjoy the harsh and harder fights (even as he curses his current weaker body due to what he had but lost for the current chance) that his persona seemed to indicate due to him getting bored of being the strongest on his world thus took the chance and went to this world (which due to plot armor he would end up as even faster then in his old world where he train to get there but now he just needs to eat some sparks from powerful beings and gain stats and skills)..then there was his avoidance to the poison plants that with the blessing he had could have been eaten to gain resistance among other things he could have trained which includes his crafting skills trying to learn combat skills and basic magics of other elements (since all he needed was a good image and repeating action from what the codex said and then he should have been able to make things like a elemental manipulation for earth and water so not to have to leave far from his safe zone while hunting small amounts of rabbits and working his way to larger stronger monsters)
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I stopped reading three books before this one. They had an interesting idea and I wanted to like them. I did not. This one I read in one go. It is well written, the story is interesting and I want more of it. The beginning is different than the rest, so don't be afraid of the real book because of the weird way of writing at the start of the book. This is fun to read. I like overpowered. And NO harem! Yeah! Not even some stupid other person who follows him forever. He is alone most of the time and and he is cool! 2xYeah! About the stars... first I though, this is a much better system than many others, if I don't know about one category, I don't have to give stars. This is not true :-( You have to give stars for every category. So I gave 4 stars for "Stability of Updates" but I have no idea and don't care about it. I read it in one go until the leaving of the first area. So how would I know?
the movie is great. the character development is quite okay but my problem is the UPDATE!!! what happened? are you still alive? don't let your readers hanging 😑😑
Probably dead now. All the good original novels just die out after sometime. Like The book of the universe. The author isn’t even putting up a notice or anything.
Good work, keep it up! Don't be disappointed by negative comments, or pace of novel , you're doing a fine job. There are many sham systems out here, which in the end were old men hidden under disguise of system, and helping the MC time to time, bro don't do that, that's ****, pure ****... As any logical, rational person will doubt such system(there's a novel in which MC on further increasing power dissolves the system as he doubts its reason) creating a flaw most novels, you've corrected it here... That's cool... Keep em releasin
Fucking so....... So...... Slow story line. I read 50 chapters he is not even level 2 not intersting... It was nice only till 5th chapter....................,.............. .......................
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This novel was pretty good, although a bit short. Still, I think it's worth reading! However, for a man so used to killing it seems he is not as bloodthirsty as in his previous circumstance
I don't really have much bad to say about this. The writing quality is amazing. If I had one complaint, it's that the author stretches out each part of the story for WAAAAY too long. Like seriously, two fights and it's taken 50 chapters...
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Not bad. This is one of my favorite light novels I have read. Stories great. Quality is very good. Plot is a bit different than what most novel out there.
A great story, the character are well written and the writing style is perfect for this novel I highly recommend this book for anyone who loves to get sucked in to a fantasy world and encounter lots of new things
This is a good story so far. I hope the MC continues to get good quests and never gets asked by the system to do an evil quest. I will continue to read this series as long as the author continues to write it.
Can't give more than this. It's been many months since a new chapter was posted. More characters needed for Qidian hmmm...................................
Volume 1
- 1 Fishing? 6 years ago
- 2 Interesting! 6 years ago
- 3 A Simple Test 6 years ago
- 4 Class 6 years ago
- 5 Your Limit 6 years ago
- 6 Twinkle 6 years ago
- 7 Success 6 years ago
- 8 Secret Zone 6 years ago
- 9 WORLD BOSS 6 years ago
- 10 Coins and Magic 6 years ago
- 11 Sight, Veil and Map 6 years ago
- 12 Discovery Skill 6 years ago
- 13 OPEN!!! 6 years ago
- 14 Practice 6 years ago
- 15 Resistance Skill 6 years ago
- 16 Hellish Skill Training 6 years ago
- 17 NOOOOOO!!! 6 years ago
- 18 GRIND!!! 6 years ago
- 19 Gary? 6 years ago
- 20 Disappointing Gains 6 years ago
- 21 Skinning A Rabbit 6 years ago
- 22 Itemization 6 years ago
- 23 Life Spark 6 years ago
- 24 More Rabbits 6 years ago
- 25 Watermelon Wolf Pack 6 years ago
- 26 Fight or Flee? 6 years ago
- 27 Fight! 6 years ago
- 28 ELITE Watermelon Wolves 6 years ago
- 29 CLIMB! 6 years ago
- 30 Relief 6 years ago
- 31 LEVEL-UP! 6 years ago
- 32 Descent 6 years ago
- 33 Rear Access? 6 years ago
- 34 Be Cautious 6 years ago
- 35 Gruesome Demise 6 years ago
- 36 Spark Extraction 6 years ago
- 37 Loot And More Cunning Running 6 years ago
- 38 Safe 6 years ago
- 39 Silent Yet Deadly 6 years ago
- 40 Cleanup 6 years ago
- 41 Dinner 6 years ago
- 42 Monster Ranks 6 years ago
- 43 Three States 6 years ago
- 44 Nine Stances 6 years ago
- 45 Assimilation 6 years ago
- 46 Assimilation Complete 6 years ago
- 47 Parallel Skill 6 years ago
- 48 Great Gains 6 years ago
- 49 A True Grandmaster 6 years ago
- 50 Retracing Steps 6 years ago
- 51 Mango Monkeys 6 years ago
- 52 One Strike, One Kill 6 years ago
- 53 Fearsome Killing Intent 6 years ago
- 54 Lethal Technique!!! 6 years ago
- 55 god sight 6 years ago
- 56 Lunch Break 6 years ago
- 57 Carl 6 years ago
- 58 A Newfound Love For Fur 6 years ago
- 59 Bro's 6 years ago
- 60 The Destroyer 6 years ago
- 61 I'M LOST! 6 years ago
- 62 First Quest 6 years ago
- 63 Unseen Trail 6 years ago
- 64 Natural Formation 6 years ago
- 65 Secret Zone Rabbit Kingdom 6 years ago
- 66 Rabbit Town 6 years ago
- 67 Bloody Carrots!!! 6 years ago
- 68 Smells like......CARROTS!!! 6 years ago
- 69 Tests Of The Warrior 6 years ago
- 70 Orso 6 years ago
- 71 Bloody Carrots Arrive 6 years ago
- 72 If Looks Could Kill 6 years ago
- 73 A Pebble 6 years ago
- 74 Astonishing Pebble! 6 years ago
- 75 Instant Impalement! 6 years ago
- 76 Orso's Challenge 6 years ago
- 77 Battle Preperations 6 years ago
- 78 BATTLE!!! 6 years ago
- 79 Victory and Interrogation 6 years ago
- 80 Data Collection and Heal 6 years ago
- 81 Please Save Captain Orso! 6 years ago
- 82 Give It To Me! 6 years ago
- 83 First Quest Complete! 6 years ago
- 84 Meet The Rabbit King! 6 years ago
- 85 Save The Rabbit Kingdom 6 years ago
- 86 To The Lake 6 years ago
- 87 The Contaminated Lake 6 years ago
- 88 Daguel The Dissolver 6 years ago
- 89 Raft Battle Atop The Deadly Lake! 6 years ago
- 90 Death Guard Crystal Fragment 6 years ago
- 91 The Hidden Cave 6 years ago
- 92 Jace's Spark 6 years ago
- 93 Jace's Tragic Past 1 6 years ago
- 94 Jace's Tragic Past 2 6 years ago
- 95 Jace's Tragic Past 3 6 years ago
- 96 Jace's Tragic Past 4 6 years ago
- 97 Jace's Tragic Past 5 6 years ago
- 98 Hidden Quest 6 years ago
- 99 Return To The Rabbit Kingdom 6 years ago
- 100 Farewell Big Dipper Valley! 6 years ago
Ok bro. I just finished reading first 72ch. Italiano?? :) good for you. I wish to see the end of this novel, but i really think you will never finish. Why? --- the pace of the novel is at 🐌 speed. Very, very slow. --- in first 70ch nothing much happened. In this style, he will finish the first planet in....1000ch? --- the story will take place on 9 planets, so , we should expect about 9000ch ? U're ambitiously, i like it. But try to stay true. --- the problem is that you give too much details , for everything, and you have many "empty" chapters. This is what u need to work off. The novel has a unique flavor, and i like it very much. I love the MC, the world, the monsters. Probably, like many others, you dream to be a good author. But it is not easy. And all of them started with short novels, 400-500-700ch. This is what you need to look for, the end goal, to finish this story. If you can not finish it, you will go to the other side, the side where are a lot of authors who gone in hiatus, and almost nobody will read another novel of them. Back to topic, is a good story, a nice flavor, finally i see the diference between 10 Int and 1000 Int. Not just another stat thrown there. Ok. Make a plan for the novel. A plan where you actually see the final product. Try to limit the details, the explanations , i think everyone knows what the **** is "heal" and "blink". It is not the first time when we see it.Don't try to make a long novel. U need a fan base. Fan base are made with finished novels. I hope you will read this 😁 . I really like your work. Sorry for my english, but i hope that u got my message. ✌🏻
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